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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
Hello dearies, Here's another one from me..Hug

Well, here's the inspiration for this one,

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3248889

Those of you who've followed my previous works might know, that I simply cannot write an OS to save my life..Ouch  Confused

All of them have now turned into SS's.. LOL LOL

However, this one's slightly different from my previous ones.. The best bit being, No words have been spoken by the characters in this one.. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed I hope you do like it.. Embarrassed

It might sound a little cliched, but like Gorky Sir says, 'Cliches become cliches because they work!' Embarrassed

So here I present,










[ETF Headquarters]

It was another seemingly normal working day. She sat on the floor surrounded by stacks of files, with several empty cups of coffee lying around; her hair resembled a pen-stand with various coloured sketch pens shoved in her bun. She crouched on her knees and went through the figures again; Something seemed amiss.. And before she knew it, her tongue let out her inner frustration; Kuch toh choot raha hai, Riya!


She frowned and clutched her head; her other hand involuntarily reached out to grab her mug of coffee.. She grumbled when she found it empty; she strained her neck and called out, half-hoping someone would hear her, 'Please send me a strong cup of black coffee!'.


She looked around at the mess she had created; Gosh! Whoever said senior officers don't work.. Being the Head Research Specialist of one of the formidable special services in the country wasn't a cinch! She sighed and buried her head in a red box file that seemed to be demanding her attention and was lost!


However, a figure seemed to be observing her for the last few minutes. He was about to walk in to offer her some much-needed help, when he heard her calling out for another cup of coffee.. He looked around and saw 6 empty mugs lying on the floor. He shook his head, smirked and walked into the pantry.


Riya was getting frustrated slowly; she looked in the direction of the door. It had been over 20 minutes since she had demanded a coffee.. Did no one take her seriously?

She frowned and was about to rise on her feet, to give her a staff a earful, when she stumbled as a sharp pain shot up her left foot. 'Ouch!'

She clutched it and slumped back on the floor. She had completely forgotten why she had been locked in that dingy room with a mountain of papers.. She had tumbled off a hillock, during one of their adventurous cases two weeks back and fractured her ankle. Rathore and Arjun, as expected had exercised their seniority rights and confined her to the desk!


She rubbed her temples and sighed; she missed being out on the field. Cracking up listening to Shree and Chottu's jokes, Rathore barking orders at her and most importantly, she missed being with him!

It had been over a week since she hadn't seen him around. Finally, not being able to contain her curiosity, she had enquired from Rathore and learnt that Arjun was away on an undercover mission and would return a week later..


She rested her head against the cold wall and shut her eyes; the last two years flashed in front of her. She had met him two years back; they had their own share of issues and tiffs, but everything seemed to be just fine now.

He had mellowed down a lot after having tracked and killed Sikandar. Though he and Rathore often had their share of snide comments and never missed an opportunity to take a dig at each other, they had come to an understanding. They respected each others dedication and approach towards their work and shared a civil working relationship.

But with her, ACP Arjun Rawte was still the same; he often reprimanded and scolded her, when she tried to prove herself to him, but now, she knew better!


She realized that she had lost out her heart to him, when he had been shot during one of their rescue operations. She had held on to his immobile body for hours, sobbing uncontrollably until the paramedics had found them. And that is when, Riya had realized the true meaning of the clichd human emotion, called true love!


Things had started to get better between them for the last few months; he was slowly opening up to her. They had had long conversations encompassing a few glimpses into each others' troubled pasts, their reclusive present and their uncertain futures; both unaware of the fact that they were being bound together by a fine thread of companionship.


She had been overjoyed when he had accepted a promotion and decided to stay back at ETF. His mere presence around her was enough to put up a smile on her pretty face.

And then she had pushed her fickle feelings, in a faraway corner of her heart; she was happy with the way things were.. She couldn't lose him ever!



She felt a warm hand on her shoulder and slowly opened her eyelids; there stood the conqueror of her heart with a smirk plastered on his face! She fluttered her eyelashes to make sure that she wasn't dreaming yet again.

A strong smell of coffee flooded her senses and she realized, he was back!

She smiled and saw him place the mug of coffee on the floor, as he settled down next to her on the carpet. He glanced around the room and smirked; somethings never change!

She was still the stubborn, nerdy woman who could annoy the hell out of a person by stating percentages and statistical data.

He picked up a file and browsed through it. She picked up the mug of coffee, took a sip and rewarded him with a smile. He slightly nodded his head acknowledging it.


Rathore walked into the conference room with a new case file, putting an end to Shree and Chottu's gaming session.

He looked around quizzically for the other two and recollected that maybe Arjun wasn't back yet and Riya would be in her office.

 He marched towards Riya' cabin with Shree and Chottu in tow.
They swung the door open and their mouths fell open at the site in front of them!

Chottu and Shree exchanged knowing glances and grinned widely, while Rathore's gaze oscillated from Arjun-Riya to Shree and Chottu.



Arjun was crouched on the floor and seemed to be engrossed in reading a file, while Riya sat opposite him, furiously typing away on her notebook. That bit was pretty normal!

What wasn't was maybe both of them hadn't realized that they had been sipping coffee from the same mug that Arjun had brought for Riya!! They saw Riya take a sip and replace the mug back on the floor, while Arjun grabbed it the very next instant.

Rathore, Shree and Chottu chuckled and walked out, not wanting to disturb them.



Arjun's phone rang in a few minutes and both, him and Riya were on their way to inspect a crime scene.
 
As always, Arjun took the wheel and Riya sat in the passenger's seat; both silent, not wishing the silent conversation to end.

Arjun looked straight ahead and concentrated on the road, while Riya crossed her legs and rested her head against the closed window; both glancing at each other every few minutes.


Riya observed him carefully, his normally furrowed forehead looked relaxed, those lines were now gone!

She had started observing these little things about him; he had started shaving frequently. That rugged look was now replaced by a slight stubble on his cheeks; it made her heart flip every time she set her eyes upon him. If he had looked ruggedly handsome before, now he looked absolutely delectable!


She hit her forehead playfully and resumed her favorite pastime.

His gun-metal black eyes always gave him away. Arjun had always managed to bury his pain in a corner of his heart, masking it behind a mask of indifference.
However, his eyes always reflected his inner turmoil. But the mask seemed to be slipping away these days and well, Riya, being a keen observer, had never failed to miss it!


She recollected how he had often attempted to smile; but she felt as if there was something that was holding him back.
She pondered over it for a few weeks and realized that it was ACP Arjun's over-analytical brain!

His mind had managed to convince him that happiness somehow equaled betrayal of Roshni's memories. And Riya knew the man well enough to conclude that he would never do it ever!

It pained her to watch him struggle to live every single day. And then had begun the series of attempts by her to try and make him smile. She had often witnessed him smirking at Rathore's snide remarks, grinning inwardly at Shree and Chottu's antics, but he hadn't graced them with a smile ever!

 
She hadn't realized that she was gazing at him, until the brakes were applied and the car came to a screeching halt. She swiftly turned her head and saw him looking at her with a raised eyebrow.

She slightly nodded her head and looked away, 'What was that! were u gaping at him, u foolish girl! What would he think.. Get a grip!'


Arjun gripped the steering and waited for the red lights to change. He rolled down the window and peeped out, they were stuck in the middle of a roadblock! Finding nothing around to keep him entertained, he glanced up at his partner next to him.


He knitted his eyebrows and scrutinized her; her legs crossed, her with her hands crossed over her chest. Her companions, the black leather notebook and her pink pen sat cradled in her lap.

He turned his gaze upwards and saw her hair neatly braided into a French pleat, with a few loose strands of hair straying on her cheeks and her forehead.

He was suddenly reminded of something and blinked his eyes twice. His eyes darted off to her hair again, as he realized she had no pins on to hold her hair in place; the red flowery clip was missing, yet again!


He rested his head against the seat and rubbed his temples. He hadn't seen her put it on ever since he had returned it back to her. He remembered the day when he had returned it back to her; she had been upset about the case.

And unknowingly, that gesture of his had made her smile. Now that he thought over it, he wondered if there had been something more to that action of his!


He slightly shook his head and mentally reprimanded himself, 'Stop reading into it, Arjun! Maybe she's misplaced it or maybe she doesn't like it anymore.'

He sighed and turned away from her and stared straight into the row of cars ahead of them, attempting to block her out of his tormented heart one more.

He glanced at her once and couldn't help but smirk, having proven himself right yet again! No, Riya Mukherjee hadn't donned the clip since then!


He wondered why he observed and remembered these silly details about her; she still wiped the rim of her cup every time she had coffee. The way she threw her hair back always managed to amuse him for some reason. He stole yet another glance at her and saw her fingers clutching the black notebook.


She always carried it with her as if it was her sole companion. He recollected her noting down every single detail into that diary of hers and that had often impressed him; she was good at her job!

But then, he had often seen her scribbling into it, when they would be sitting idle in the conference room! He wondered what she had been writing in there; maybe personal stuff?!

And before he could help it, a stray thought flashed into his head, does she ever write about him?

He shook his head inwardly, 'No! Why would she? She definitely had better work to do!' and then a rare smile crept up on his lips, 'I'm sure she does!'

 

He saw her shut eyes and her serene face and recollected that fateful night when she had been nearly shot.
He had gathered her in his arms and promised to get her out of there, safe.
Now as he looked back, were those the first signs, that his heart had started coming alive again??


He had taunted her, insulted at her for not being able to shoot; he had even called her a coward and politely asked her to return to the research desk, and not put others lives at stake.
However, a few weeks later, he himself had brilliantly devised a plan to make her face her fears during one of their missions.
Yes it had been incredibly stupid and reckless of him, to have stood at gunpoint himself..

But something at the back of his head had assured him; that if he had really understood her silent gazes and barely there smiles occasionally at him; she would shoot!

And she hadn't disappointed him; she had taken a perfect head shot; as if fulfilling his challenge and proving to him that she wouldn't let him die on her!

And he had in turn returned the favour by consoling her and driving away her regrets for having taken a life.'

He had put on his 'i-care-a-damn' mask as soon as he had felt it slip away to stop his heart from winning the waging battle with his mind. But today, as he reflected back over the incident, he could read through that look of relief in her eyes, when he'd said, 'Riya, tumne ek jaan li nahi hai, riya.. ek jaan bachayi hai!'


His chain of thoughts was interrupted by a shrill honking of cars behind them. Riya turned to face him and saw his hands firmly placed on the steering. She looked up at him and saw him, staring straight through the windscreen, with a barely there smile around the corner of his lips.

She wondered what he had been thinking, and on cue, the two dimpled pits made their appearance on her cheeks.
 
She heard the car honking behind them and called out to him, 'Sir..Arjun Sir..'
She shook her head, 'Where was he lost? What was he thinking? Maybe he was having a flashback of his wife?'
 
The felt a stinging pain in a far corner of her heart, but one look at his smiling face and it vanished into oblivion; she would live with it, if it made him smile!

 
She lifted her hand and placed it on his. That undid the moment as she felt him jerk. He looked at her and knitted his brows.

And before he could question her, he heard someone call out to them, 'Arre gaadi aage le lo.. yeh policewale to jeena haraam karke rakh dete hain..'
 
She saw him shift in his seat and just as he was about to pull out his seat-belt, he felt something tug at his palm.

She was still holding on to him; he looked up at her surprised and saw her nod in negative..


Arjun rolled his eyes and hit the accelerator.. 'She already has me wound around her little finger!'


 
Riya felt the wheels set in motion and left his palm unwillingly.

She pretended to be engrossed in sightseeing for a while and looked at him through the corner of her eyes.

He had that casual look plastered on his face and Riya was about to turn away, when something caught her attention..

There it was, again! A lop-sided smile seemed to be creeping up his lips!!

She turned away contented and rested her head against the seat.
She realized something and stuck her palm out of the window.  She felt raindrops make their way down her fingers; perfect!

She collected a few drops of water in her fist and in the heat of the moment, those raindrops were splashed across Arjun's face..

 She looked up at him, quizzically with a naughty glint in her eyes, which vanished the very next instant, when she saw him stare at her, with his jaw clenched.

Maybe, it's still a long way to go! , she was about to look away, when she felt him tug at her arm.

Half-scared, her eyes followed his fingers and rested on his face; what she simply blew her off away!

He was actually smiling; smiling at her; for her! 

She looked at him, with a question mark plastered on her face and was about to reward him with one of her dimpled smiles, when she felt him raise his hand towards her. She knitted her eyebrows, unable to prepare herself for what was coming next!


Arjun's eyes darted off to the throbbing pulse in her neck; he smirked inwardly and before she could make sense of his sudden jovial actions, she felt cold water drops slightly hit her face.

Riya's eyes popped out as she stared at him. He seemed to be basking in the glory of his revenge and there it was, yet again!

He flashed a toothy smile at her and resumed driving, not before winking at her..


Riya sat in her seat, stupefied. She blinked her eyes a couple of times and looked at him stealthily and saw him grinning widely.

She quickly shut her eyelids, and let a lone teardrop mingle with the raindrops. She threw her head back on the seat and couldn't suppress her lips from curving into a smile; only this time, it felt different.

She had just realised, that it wasn't her own; but his smile that was playing on her lips!



Wink Wink Wink So, how was it?? And tell me honestly, how many of you actually smiled while reading this one??  Wink Well, I hope you did..



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Edited by mohabbatgirl - 19 October 2012 at 2:45pm

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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
I have no words to express how much I loved dis one... You r defiantly back and how!!!!!!!!! This os is by far one of d best that I've read so far.   Abs loved it... Tc

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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
Omg I loved it ...
I'm sooo happy that u r back n u r back with a bang n with another great idea 
Just loved this ss 
I swear I was just not smiling but grinning like an idiot while reading it
It was just fantastic ... I wish this really happens
But no worries I no that u r there n u will fulfill all our desires

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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
awesome OS... really loved it...Big smile

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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
oh the moment was so cute i just lost in it n even at the end i was like "oh ho rok kyun di":)..very nice..the coffee moment from same mug was just awww:)..update soon n thanks for the pm.


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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
Welcome Back... Hope you enjoyed your Break..
The OS was awesome...

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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 2:33pm | IP Logged
Could it be anything but perfect, coming form you?

Absolutely brilliant, I was mesmerized by each scene and could picture it perfectly in my head, you are absolutely brilliant at using words to describe each and every moment.

Loved the OS. :)

P.S. Looks like the vacation did wonders for you.

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Cn't find wrd to express.

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