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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 12:57am | IP Logged
this is the best of urs
i jus loved it
mom daughter here same like me n mumma
jus loved it

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Posted: 12 December 2012 at 9:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by had2bu

Palin you weave your way in and out of my consciousness.  My mother was quite the opposite from the one described here.  She was very very affectionate and I remember as a terrible teen I would try to escape all her affections.  Today she is no more and I crave that touch of her hands in my hair.  I crave listening to her stories, the way she made me feel like I was the most beautiful girl in the world. 
Loved this piece very much. 
 
For those who are reading and don't show affection, please do.  Life is too short and they are too darn deserving not to give that piece of yourself.
 
Thanks Palin...
I am sorry but unintentionally my writings made you miss your mother..first in life partner {Bhog chapter}and now in this piece...Hope you are not sad...!!! Someone said me long ago that we should miss our loved ones{who are not with us anymore} with happy faces..Our tears pain them too...Smile

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 6:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by had2bu

Originally posted by palindrome

Originally posted by had2bu

Palin you weave your way in and out of my consciousness.  My mother was quite the opposite from the one described here.  She was very very affectionate and I remember as a terrible teen I would try to escape all her affections.  Today she is no more and I crave that touch of her hands in my hair.  I crave listening to her stories, the way she made me feel like I was the most beautiful girl in the world. 
Loved this piece very much. 
 
For those who are reading and don't show affection, please do.  Life is too short and they are too darn deserving not to give that piece of yourself.
 
Thanks Palin...
I am sorry but unintentionally my writings made you miss your mother..first in life partner {Bhog chapter}and now in this piece...Hope you are not sad...!!! Someone said me long ago that we should miss our loved ones{who are not with us anymore} with happy faces..Our tears pain them too...Smile
 
On the contrary I do feel enriched due to your writing.  I have a very wise and loving father who has taught us to live with dignity through out every event in our lives and due to him being around I would never long for anything.  My mother's memories reside in my heart and mind and I don't let them leave me through tears in my eyes, I cherish them and carry on her work here.  You are a very sweet sensitive person to think so much about just a fan who reads your stories.  Lots of hugs Palin...
 
 
That is just so "RIGHT"..{sorry i could not find any other word other than "right"}..Believe me,for this attitude a lot of respect for you from my side...Smile
and don't call yourself my "fan"..I am not some celebrity..all my readers are my friends not fansConfused..a big hug for you..Hug


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Wonderful! Smile
That was so beautiful , sleeping on mother's lap is one of the most relaxing moments.Sometimes ,I sleep and start crying. LOL This OS reminded me of so many  such beautiful moments ,not like we forget them but then we don't always think about them. Now whenever I kiss my mama , she tells me that she should be kissing her daughter but here I'm doing the ulta and I always say that You toh waise bhi don't kiss me ,so let me do this thing and I keep repeating this dialogue!  LOL
Thanks for sharing such a beautiful piece! Hug

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Palin this is such a heartwarming piece! The way you portrayed the mother's love which she only shows when the child isn't conscious, whether too young to remember or asleep.. It was beautiful! I'm amazed how you weave your stories in such natural day to day scenarios! And this piece of yours and Avi's comment made me want to hug my mother, tell her how much I love her, show her how much I care.. :')

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Posted: 07 January 2013 at 12:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayyo13

Palin this is such a heartwarming piece! The way you portrayed the mother's love which she only shows when the child isn't conscious, whether too young to remember or asleep.. It was beautiful! I'm amazed how you weave your stories in such natural day to day scenarios! And this piece of yours and Avi's comment made me want to hug my mother, tell her how much I love her, show her how much I care.. :')
Thanks mariam...Smile..Go and hug your mommy tight...Smile

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