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Thread 2:Love. Sex. Aur Dhoka? CH 71 pg144 UPDATE! (Page 125)

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Posted: 20 December 2012 at 10:38am | IP Logged
Awesome update. Please update the next part soon.

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Plz update soon. waitin eagerly Smile

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 3:37pm | IP Logged
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 9:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Chandni1996

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!

will either within the hour or tomorrow

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i have recently found this fanfiction and have been doing nothing else the last two days but reading it... GREAT JOB... this is really addicting and good...

ClapYou are a really good writer, you know how to portray the characters perfectly based on their feelings... my fave part was when seema and payal picked up the phone when arnav called and he became awkward at the question SOOO CUTEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i can't wait to fiind out how the boys proposed to their girls!!! so excited for the upcomng chapters

chutki is like the littlle me...  love her character... she would make the perfect shali; taking money from her jeeju on the weddng day, walking in when the couples are haviing the business, blackmailing them... she''s my favorite side characcter

i love how you make aman hot and let his character get with lavanya Smile
you should have a little boy from the raizadas family and stir up a romance between him and chutki LOL

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Posted: 23 December 2012 at 3:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bookaholic1988

i have recently found this fanfiction and have been doing nothing else the last two days but reading it... GREAT JOB... this is really addicting and good...

ClapYou are a really good writer, you know how to portray the characters perfectly based on their feelings... my fave part was when seema and payal picked up the phone when arnav called and he became awkward at the question SOOO CUTEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i can't wait to fiind out how the boys proposed to their girls!!! so excited for the upcomng chapters

chutki is like the littlle me...  love her character... she would make the perfect shali; taking money from her jeeju on the weddng day, walking in when the couples are haviing the business, blackmailing them... she''s my favorite side characcter

i love how you make aman hot and let his character get with lavanya Smile
you should have a little boy from the raizadas family and stir up a romance between him and chutki LOL

thank you by the tons for reading!
very soon i will try to get the girls get hooked up with and let the marriages take place
and in the future, chutki will have someone in her life as well lolz
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Chapter 69
Khushi, Payal, and Seema noticed how Shashi and Garima kept disappearing on them. They would go out in the morning and return late, not even saying anything.

It went on for a week and the girls were bored. The boys these days were "busy" with work. The girls were all home and Khushi and Payal were hanging out in the living room. Seema came down the stairs, ready to go out, when her sisters stopped her.

"Where are you going," Khushi asked.

"Out," she simply replied.

"Where? Arnav said him and Akash are in a meeting, along with NK."

"Oof ho Jiji! I can go out without seeing NK."

"Seemz," she said threateningly.

"Sorry, but seriously Kush, you're irking me. Anyways, I'm going out, so bye darlings," and she headed out.

"What was that about," Payal asked, and Khushi shrugged.

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Seema came home at night, before Shashi and Garima had come home. She'd gone immediately up to her room and Khushi and Payal followed behind. They opened her door and saw Seema standing in front of her mirror, looking at her brand new belly button piercing.

"You finally pierced it," Payal asked, and Seema nearly jumped.

"What the hell people! It's called privacy," Seema yelled.

"Couldn't help ourselves," both Khushi and Payal said, coming inside and crashing on her bed.

"You both better not tell," Seema threatened.

"Why would we," both said.

Seema turned back to the mirror and looked at her piercing. She had gotten a simple one, with a blue jewel.

"Looks normal to me," Khushi said.

"Yeah, definitely not infected," Payal said.

"And you two know how," Seema asked.

Khushi and Payal lifted their t-shirts and showed off their piercing's, Khushi's wih a yellow jewel, and Payal's with a purple jewel, and Seema gaped.

"When'd you two do it," she asked.

"Earlier this week," both said.

"Oh, so you two can do it, but I can't?"

"You're a baby," Khushi said.

"Shut up," and she huffed.

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Shashi and Garima came home and Khushi, Payal, Seema, and Chutki noticed the looks on their faces. Something was up, definitely, and Chutki would get to the bottom of it.

Of course, Chutki did and she couldn't believe what she had heard. When the other three tried to find out from her, she just told them to find out on their own. That pissed the three off, since they didn't have the best interrogating skills like Chutki.

But, of course, answers would soon come out. And not from interrogating their parents, but from those three souls who wanted them in their lives forever.




Second update coming within the hour (if it gets to page 130)! Smile
Please comment and like! Big smile
i've noticed all my other works have like about 100, and this one barely does Cry
sorry to sound greedy for this ff, but its one of my first ones so i'm more attached to it than my other works =/
hope you all understand Smile


Edited by evrydayirabbave - 23 December 2012 at 7:59pm

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Posted: 23 December 2012 at 5:26pm | IP Logged
looking forward to the second part
so im guessing thats when the proposals are happening :D cant wait
i love how all three girls are so similar, and all three boys are similar to

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