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evrydayirabbave

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Originally posted by farha623

loool couldn't stop laughing! ! my hubby was looking at me as if I've gone nuts lool
awesome update! !!

lmfaooo

he did?

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evrydayirabbave

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 4:21pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by MrsSanayaBSobti

CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK

The story is nice but the biggest disconnect i found here is that

Why are the Gupta girls behaving as they have landed from mars or Jupiter ??

wen khushi says that- what u want to marry?? what is so stranage about it.

Infact the talk of marriage should be the initiative of the girls.. from the beginning of the story, they were potrayed as girls who were quite progressive in outlook but traditional in nature.

so in past few chapters i found it a little weird from the characterisation of Gupta Girls.

these gupta girls should be in hurry to tie knot..But here they are expressing shock whenever the word marriage is spoken. Do these girls want to spend their whole life sleeping with these three men and not talk about marriage??

Expecting a proposal is just a formality...any educated , sensible girl knows that..what matters is when a couple sit together and discuss what is the next stop to their relationship, i.e marriage.

Every serious committed couple discusses that. But here neither of any Gupta girls talked about it? how is it possible.. ??Then these gupta girls are no less than sanchi. Confused

Instead these gupta girls are behavinng immaturely as they want to spend their whole life just like that. I found it a little odd because the way the gupta girls reacted on the word marriage.

Infact these girls should have told their respective love partners, wen are u bringing your parents to talk about tieing us in nuptial knot forever. But No these girls are least bothered about marriage and want to continue their fantasies..

and these type of behaviour of Gupta sisters is totally diffrent from what has been potrayed about their nature, characteristics of them in the beginning.

apart from this error of characterisation , i found the story is fantastic ..Just The gupta girls became out of track.

i get what you mean but understand that they're not the same gupta girl they once were

remember when seema used to call NK "Nanheji"

and payal called Akash "Akashji"?

its form the turn of events/mistakes that have changed them

understand that 5 years is a lot

"5" may be small but "years" are a lot

a person like me has had experience with love problems

i've been dealing with things for about now 5 years too and im telling you, its no fun

it changes people w/o even realizing

(PS: i didn't loose "IT" ROFL

i just read what i wrote and sounded like that LOL

)

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Posted: 19 December 2012 at 6:34pm | IP Logged

nice update.

thanks for the pm

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Posted: 20 December 2012 at 10:38am | IP Logged

Awesome update. Please update the next part soon.

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 6:03am | IP Logged

Plz update soon. waitin eagerly Smile

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 3:37pm | IP Logged

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!

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evrydayirabbave

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 9:29pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Chandni1996

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!

will either within the hour or tomorrow

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Posted: 23 December 2012 at 10:17am | IP Logged

i have recently found this fanfiction and have been doing nothing else the last two days but reading it... GREAT JOB... this is really addicting and good...

You are a really good writer, you know how to portray the characters perfectly based on their feelings... my fave part was when seema and payal picked up the phone when arnav called and he became awkward at the question SOOO CUTEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i can't wait to fiind out how the boys proposed to their girls!!! so excited for the upcomng chapters

chutki is like the littlle me... love her character... she would make the perfect shali; taking money from her jeeju on the weddng day, walking in when the couples are haviing the business, blackmailing them... she''s my favorite side characcter

i love how you make aman hot and let his character get with lavanya Smile

you should have a little boy from the raizadas family and stir up a romance between him and chutki LOL

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