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Thread 2:Love. Sex. Aur Dhoka? CH 71 pg144 UPDATE! (Page 124)

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 3:05am | IP Logged
wow.loved reading it

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Nice.

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 5:29am | IP Logged
Awww bless Arnav n akash.. nk asking firstt.. well lets hope he doesnt jus hiccup infront of seema hahaha

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 6:04am | IP Logged
Great update yaar finally they asked the guptas for permission lol

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 3:47pm | IP Logged
Just read all of the chapters and it was amazing pleased that they were all able to get over what had happened 5 years ago and Arnav was able to become Arnav again instead of ASR. Cant wait for the proposals

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 4:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by farha623

loool couldn't stop laughing! ! my hubby was looking at me as if I've gone nuts lool
awesome update! !!

lmfaooo
he did?
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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 4:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MrsSanayaBSobti

CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK

The story is nice but the biggest disconnect i found here is that

Why are the Gupta girls behaving as they have landed from mars or Jupiter ??

wen khushi says that- what u want to marry?? what is so stranage  about it.
Infact the talk of marriage should be the initiative of the girls.. from the beginning of the story, they were potrayed as  girls who were quite progressive in outlook but traditional in nature.

so in past few chapters i found it a little weird  from the characterisation of Gupta Girls.

these gupta girls should be in hurry to tie knot..But here they are  expressing shock whenever the word marriage is spoken.  Do these girls want to spend their whole life sleeping  with these three men and not talk about  marriage??
Expecting a proposal is  just a formality...any educated , sensible girl knows that..what matters is when a couple sit together and discuss what is the  next stop to their relationship, i.e marriage. 
Every serious committed couple discusses that. But here neither of any Gupta girls talked about it? how is it possible.. ??Then these gupta girls are no less than sanchi.Confused

Instead these gupta girls are behavinng immaturely as they want to spend their whole life just like that.  I found it a little odd because the way the gupta girls reacted on the word marriage.

Infact these girls should have told their respective love partners, wen are u bringing your parents  to talk about tieing us in nuptial knot forever. But No these girls are least bothered about marriage  and want to continue their fantasies..
and these  type of behaviour of Gupta sisters is totally diffrent from what has been potrayed about their  nature, characteristics  of  them in the beginning.

apart from this error of characterisation , i found the story is fantastic ..Just The gupta girls became out of track.



i get what you mean but understand that they're not the same gupta girl they once were

remember when seema used to call NK "Nanheji"
and payal called Akash "Akashji"?

its form the turn of events/mistakes that have changed them
understand that 5 years is a lot
"5" may be small but "years" are a lot

a person like me has had experience with love problems
i've been dealing with things for about now 5 years too and im telling you, its no fun
it changes people w/o even realizing
(PS: i didn't loose "IT" ROFL i just read what i wrote and sounded like that LOL)

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Posted: 19 December 2012 at 6:34pm | IP Logged
nice update.
thanks for the pm

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