Thread 2:Love. Sex. Aur Dhoka? CH 71 pg144 UPDATE! (Page 124)

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clairvoyance

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CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK

The story is nice but the biggest disconnect i found here is that

Why are the Gupta girls behaving as they have landed from mars or Jupiter ??

wen khushi says that- what u want to marry?? what is so stranage about it.

Infact the talk of marriage should be the initiative of the girls.. from the beginning of the story, they were potrayed as girls who were quite progressive in outlook but traditional in nature.

so in past few chapters i found it a little weird from the characterisation of Gupta Girls.

these gupta girls should be in hurry to tie knot..But here they are expressing shock whenever the word marriage is spoken. Do these girls want to spend their whole life sleeping with these three men and not talk about marriage??

Expecting a proposal is just a formality...any educated , sensible girl knows that..what matters is when a couple sit together and discuss what is the next stop to their relationship, i.e marriage.

Every serious committed couple discusses that. But here neither of any Gupta girls talked about it? how is it possible.. ??Then these gupta girls are no less than sanchi. Confused

Instead these gupta girls are behavinng immaturely as they want to spend their whole life just like that. I found it a little odd because the way the gupta girls reacted on the word marriage.

Infact these girls should have told their respective love partners, wen are u bringing your parents to talk about tieing us in nuptial knot forever. But No these girls are least bothered about marriage and want to continue their fantasies..

and these type of behaviour of Gupta sisters is totally diffrent from what has been potrayed about their nature, characteristics of them in the beginning.

apart from this error of characterisation , i found the story is fantastic ..Just The gupta girls became out of track.

Edited by MrsSanayaBSobti - 17 December 2012 at 12:39am

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awesome!
i loved it!

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Awesome Update!!!!!!!!!!

I just hope atleast in marriage Arnav and Kushi gets married first...

I loved the entire bickering, teasing sessions...

Continue soon...

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 3:05am | IP Logged

wow.loved reading it

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 5:12am | IP Logged

Nice.

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Awww bless Arnav n akash.. nk asking firstt.. well lets hope he doesnt jus hiccup infront of seema hahaha

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Great update yaar finally they asked the guptas for permission lol

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 3:47pm | IP Logged

Just read all of the chapters and it was amazing pleased that they were all able to get over what had happened 5 years ago and Arnav was able to become Arnav again instead of ASR. Cant wait for the proposals

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