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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 1:37pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by RagvirFan123

I wrote a small short scene, I hope you al like it =)

Pinto came home from work tired, he went into his room looking for Krishna, he goes in and sees that Krishna was busy fixing her saree, he cleared his voice to tell her that he's back, Krishna gasped and quickly fixes her drape and turns around to see Pinto. She sees Pinto smiling at her and quickly tells him that she will serve him food and he should freshen up. Pinto replies that he will take a quick shower and goes to the bathroom to have a shower, Krishna goes to the kitchen and gets his food ready, she hears Pinto calling out to her and goes to see, she enters the room and Pinto says that he forgot the towel and asks her to pass it to him. She spots the towel on the bed and takes it to Pinto, Pinto grabs her hand instead and pulls her into the shower with him, he pulls her closer and kisses her on the lips. Krishna couldn't help but respond then they broke out of the kiss and hugged each other.

Wow Azifa I just loved the scene, do right more and a great first scene

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 1:37pm | IP Logged

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Originally posted by moniluvskinshuk

Originally posted by FizaluvsKinshuk

Originally posted by kmfan_2

I am waiting to comment on the next scene since I cannot write one! Tongue

@Fiza...check your PM(caption contest)

Shanti I will post one soon and will check my PM, I always forget about my PM's LOL

thanks for reminding Big smile

OOPS I also forgot abt that Caption Contest Tongue

. Fizu Can i send it till tomm ? OR I should wait till next time with new caption contest . Smile

Next one Moni

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 10:19am | IP Logged

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Great scene Azifa . Loved it . Do Write more.

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 7:28pm | IP Logged

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i absolute love all the scenes that u guys wrote cnt wait to read more Fizu that 1st scene was so hot, Taahir loved the action but wish u hadnt stopped just at that part. i cnt remember the name of the person who did the 3rd 1 but just loved it and Azifa lovely scene just loved it. Fizu add me to this besharam group will write a scene for them soon

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Posted: 22 November 2012 at 11:04am | IP Logged

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Originally posted by sandiab

i absolute love all the scenes that u guys wrote cnt wait to read more Fizu that 1st scene was so hot, Taahir loved the action but wish u hadnt stopped just at that part. i cnt remember the name of the person who did the 3rd 1 but just loved it and Azifa lovely scene just loved it. Fizu add me to this besharam group will write a scene for them soon

Thanks Sandia and have added you in the list and can't wait for your scene