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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Awesome parts.
I'm loving this ff so much.

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 9:23am | IP Logged
wow armaan is so near the truth
hope use jaldi sab pata chal jaye
loved it mish
update soon

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Wow the part was amazing... I knew it from the start that arushi was armaan and ridhima's daughter but hearing her speak it out loud to anjie made my day... To tell the truth, we really miss the dr. Armaan Malik... But it's just because of the few brilliant writers such as u, that we still have his memories fresh in us... So i really wanted to say thanx 2 u for that... Continue soon...

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Posted: 13 January 2013 at 1:47am | IP Logged
great updateSmileSmile
and thanks for the pmBig smile
waiting for ur next update...continue soonBig smile

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PART 24 to part 28...


u guyies missed it... but nobody asked for it...
are u guyies seriosly liking it or not...






Armaan cut the call...
Atul- aab armaan ko kya hua...
Kyun itna ajeeb behavbe kar raha hai ye...
Itna saalo baad call kiya...
Aur call karte hi 8 saal purani baat puchne laga...
Vo bhi 8 saal baad usse ridhz ke baare mein...
Kya aabhi tak armaan ridhz ko...
Aabhi tak vo ridhz se pyaar...
Kab armaan aapne liya sochega kab apni life jiyega...
Mera bhai hamesha dusro ke liya aapni khushiyo ko...




Scene changes
armaan's side in cafe...
After ending the call armaan went to the fire escape...
Armaan- kyun riddhima kyun...
Kyun kiya tumne aisa... Akhir kyun... Kyun tum ne mujhe nahi bataya ki mein...
Kyun tum ne mujhse mera 8 saal cheena ridhima kyun...
Kyun mujhe aapne dard ka aahasas bhi hone nahi diya..
Kyun nahi bataya ki tum aur sid kabhi bhi...
Kya mein ne itna baada ghuna kiya tha ki uski saaja tumne itni jindagiyo ko di...
Meri, khud ki, arushi ki, sid ki, hamare dosto ki...
Kyun kiya Tumne aisa ridhima kyun...
Kyun nahi bataya mujhe kyun mujhe meri khushiyo se dur rakha...
Kyun khud itna dard saaha kyun ridhima ... Kyun... Kyun kiya tumne aisa...
Tumhe mera sawalo ka jawab dena hoga...
Un 8 saalo ka jawab dena hoga...
Un dard ka un gamo ka sab ka jawab dena padega tumhe ridhima aur iss baar tum in sawalo se bach nahi sakti...




Ridhima- ye sab kya ho raha hai meri jindagi mein...
Kyun mujhe khushi milte milte rah jati hain...
Kyun 8 saal baad armaan mujhe mila...
Kyun mein arushi ko aache se nahi sambhal pai...
Aab toh armaan ne sab dekh liya hai usse sab pata chal jayega...
Kahin vo atul ko phone na karle.,...
Kahin vo kuch karne na nikal padhe...
Kyun armaan kyun tum aaj bhi mujhse itna pyaar...
Kyun tum dil mein aaj bhi mera intajar kar rahe ho..
Kyun tum aapni khushiyo ke bare mein nahi sochte...
Tum kuch toh jarur karoge aur ye hi baat mujhe bahut pareshan kar rahi hai Tum hamesha aapni jeed mein khud ko hi chot pahuchate ho...
Armaan kyun mein tumhari jaisi naho ban pai kyun armaan kyun...




Scene shift..
Mumbai-sanjeevni-locker room.

Atul-anjali pata hai aaj mein bahut khush hun
anji- kyun aisa kya hua hai jo itna khush ho..
Atul-pata hai anji aaj armaan ka mera bhai ka 8 saal baad phone aaya tha..
Anji-kya sach mein
atul-hain anji sach mein.. Pata phone karte hai 8 saal purani baat puchne laga..
Anji-what!!!! Par kya.. Kya puch us idiot ne
Atul-pata nahi puch raha ta aisa 8 saal pehle kya hua tha jo aab ridhz-sid saath nahi hai.. Mein ne usse sab baata diya
anji-phir kya kaha usne
kuch nahi bich mein karne laga kuch kam hai aur phone cut karke chala gaya..
Anji-atul kuch toh hai...
Aise kuch toh hua hai 8 saal pehle jo sid-armaan-ridhz ye teeno hum sab se chupa rahe hain.
Nahi toh armaan ka yun phone aana achanak se phone cutna.
Kuch toh hai aur mein ye pata laga Kar rahungi...
Atul-tum akeli nahi ho anji mein bhi tumhare saath hum..
Hum milke pata lagayenga...




Some day passed...
Armaan visiting ridhima's home for meeting arushi n arushi love to spend tym with her buddy armaan some time find chance to tolk to ridhima but ridhima keep ignoring..
Sometimes when armaan n arushi were playing on bed they do so much fun n seeing this a big smile come on ridhima's face seeing arushi happy n armaan smiling with his original smile when he is with arushi...


Ridhima(mind)- ye haasi jo mein chahti thi ki kabhi bhi tum aapne dil se na ko vo mein ne hi jane anjane mein tumse hamesha ke liya cheen li.. I m sorry armaan i really very sorry...






Ridhima(mind)- ye haasi jo mein chahti thi ki kabhi bhi tum aapne dil se na ko vo mein ne hi jane anjane mein tumse hamesha ke liya cheen li.. I m sorry armaan i really very sorry...

A month has been flew away after arushi's n armaan's operation...
Armaan spend time with arushi and thats best period for him n arushima n ridhima too as during this she can see him smiling whole heartedly...

Today after a month...
Ridhima was back to her duty n armaan has also joined the hospital as doctor as his mother is being admitted there...
Today armaan n ridhima have to attened a surgery together
they both were made to wear their OT apron they were looking each other and talking was done by their silence...

In OT
ridhima n armaan was operating n open heart sergury
in between armaan ask ridhima for a appratus but didn't get it.
He look at her the cidded her for going personal betwen professional tym and in OT Ridhima come back to the real senses n went on with surgery.

After the 2 more hrs total 5 hrs
they came out of the OT n the surgery was sucessfull...
Armaan just stood washing his hands n by his side ridhima stand to wash her hands...
Ridhima-vo ar...arma...armaan i m sry vo mein...vo surgery mein...vo..
Armaan-its ok dr. Ridhima aagli baar dhayan rakhna..
N he is done n saying this he went.

Ridhima stood there n thought if this surgery would have went wrong bcoz of her then she would not forgive herself for let the men die n the whole blame would come at armaan... She didn't want to punish him more just at her flaut...
In evening armaan went to ridhima to talk to her as he know that she would me blaming herself for the situation..

Arman-knok on door
ridhima-1st she didn't answer n another knok that make armaan thinking correct.
He can never be wrong about his basket n her felling n emotion he know Her more then anyone n she herself know about herself...
Armaan- again knok at the door this tym harder...
Ridhima- come back from her thought n pull her head up from her plams...
Come in please...
Armaan enters n ridhima look at him they share little eye lock n then ridhima break the lock n look here  there n invite him to sit...

He came n just stand infront of her...
Armaan kept mum... Ridhima to kept silent but then after sometime she get little irritated and ask ''kuch kam tha kya dr.armaan''
armaan-ridhima vo mein tumse baat karna chahata hun
ridhima-armaan abhi nahi plz aabhi mera mood nahi hai(as she knew he will ask about album n payal n kangan)
armaan-ridhima mujhe aabhi baat karni hai...
Ridhima-plz armaan n she start to leave but armaan block her way. She tried hard to get out but armaan didn't let her.
Armaan-ridhima mein janta hun.Plz bus 2 min.

Ridhima give up n look at him to continue.
He look at her n got his answer to continue...
Armaan-ridhima mein janta hun.. Aisa hota hai kabhi kabhi hum apni feeling par control nahi kar pate...(ridhima look at him in shock she remember the night she loose herself in armaan) Par it's okay don't think much... Tumhari koi galti nahi thi... Mein galat tha jo mein ne...(she was staring him)
ridhima- nahi armaan galti meri thi jo mein us samay kamjor pad gai thi
armaan-par aab chinta mat karo vo aadmi aab bilkul sahi hai...
Ridhima-koun sa aadmi..
Armaan was actually talking for OT scene n ridhima went in her own though...
Armaan-koun sa aadmi? Are jis patient kt bare mein mein bol raha hun...
Ridhima-kis patient... Then she remember today's operation..
Acha vo... Hainm vo meri galti thi...
Armaan-nahi thats okay..
Par tum kya soch rahi thi.
Ridhima-nahi kuch nahi
armaan wasn't convince but said-Bus mein ye hi kahna chahata tha ab mein chalta hun.

Armaan-Acha vo aab duty khatam ho gai hai meri aur tumhari
ridhima-hai meri bhi bus kuch report deni hain...
Armaan- kya mein tumhe drop kar dun.,... itni raat ko...vo tum,... Vo akeli jaogi toh...
Ridhima-nahi armaan i can manage...
Armaan-ridhima i can drop we have to go for same place...
Ridhima-(with anger) mein ne kaha na armaan mein manage kar lungi
armaan-his face drop n he just said okay n went out with heavy heart..
She too become little normal n thought why she fume at armaan without reasone...

(Song--kabhi na sukun aaya-koi aap sa)

situation-->
ridhima when done with reports she was walking through corridor n armaan went in parking n stood there thinking his n ridhima close momemts 9yrs back...

Ridhima-Jane kis mod pe le aai ye jindagi mein janu na

armaan-dhadkano ki ye bechaniyan aye humsafar pahchanu na..

Ridhima-Thari jami
thara hai pal

armaan-maan mein machi kyun halchal
cubti hai mujh ko kyun duriyan

Ridhima-koi na jane majhburiya majhburiyan
kabhi na sukun aaya
kabhi na karar aaya

jabse hai tumpe mujh ko pyaar aaya
kabhi na sukun aaya
kabhi na karar aaya

jabse hai tumpe mujh ko pyaar aaya
pyaar aaya
pyaar aaya
pyaar aaya





(Song--kabhi na sukun aaya-koi aap sa)
situation-->
ridhima when done with reports she was walking through corridor n armaan went in parking n stood there thinking his n ridhima close momemts 9yrs back...

Ridhima-Jane kis mod pe le aai ye jindagi mein janu na

armaan-dhadkano ki ye bechaniyan aye humsafar pahchanu na..

Ridhima-Thari jami
thara hai pal

armaan-maan mein machi kyun halchal
cubti hai mujh ko kyun duriyan

Ridhima-koi na jane majhburiya majhburiyan
kabhi na sukun aaya
kabhi na karar aaya

jabse hai tumpe mujh ko pyaar aaya
kabhi na sukun aaya
kabhi na karar aaya

jabse hai tumpe mujh ko pyaar aaya
pyaar aaya
pyaar aaya
pyaar aaya

ridhima reach in parking and waiting for taxi then she saw armaan sitting lost on his bike n thinking some thing with tears in his eyes that breaks ridhima's heart deep till its core... But she felt helpless n she stood there n stare at him n she too got tears in her eyes unkowning in a sec with a though that she made her armaan cry n what would be his state in last 8 years when she just said...

**Flashback**
ridhima-mein janti hun mera is faisle mein mera pyar mera sath dega.
Mein pyar ka nahi farj ka rasta apna ne ja rahi hun,
Tum mera saath doge na.
Armaan- through tears.Tumhara har faisla sir-ankhon par.
Ridhima left running while crying
**flashback ends**

she stood there staring... Then after some time he felt ridhima close to him... He clear his eyes n seach here n there but wouldn't spot her..
She actually hid behin pillor so he would not see her n understand her state that she is soo much concern about him till now even after she is same armaan's basket..

Armaan- mein janta hun tum yahin thin ridhima... Ye hawaein mujhe tumhare bare mein bata deti hain...
Mera dil aaj tak tumhare sparsh ko nahi bhula...
Aaj bhi mein tumhari ruh(soul) se juda hun...
Aaj bhi mein tumhari har chota sa dukh tumhari ankho mein dekh sakta hun,...
Aaj bhi mein tumhara chehra padh sakta hun...

Armaan speak all this to himself but as ridhima hid herself behin pillor near his bike she heard all that armaan spoke up n her tears roll down her checks n he felt happy n bad too at tha same time.

Happy that he still love her as much he loved her madly 8yrs back.
But sad that she hurt him very much without wanting too... She curse herself for his pain...

Armaan was driving his bike n remembering that happy time with his basket n their frndz...
Armaan today missing his champ badly as he was the one who made armaan happy after his disturbed mood
with his silly jokes n childish talks...alse nikki who can sence armaan's tensen even when he pretends to all that he is happy she is like his mate who can sence tension deep in his heart after ridhz

Armaan wanting to call them but stop as he was sure they will surly catch the tension in his talk..
Here ridhima got taxi n she was sitting in n staring out but lost in her own thoughts  n cursing herself more n more for giving pain to her armaan she curse herdelf more when his teary eyes flash in front of her eyes...

Both reached their apartments...
Armaan rang the bell n soni came to open it...
He came in
soni-sir vo mein ne aapka dinner table par laga diya hai.
Armaan-thankx
soni-sir aab mein ghar chalti hun subhe 7 baje aa jaungi
Armaan-okay
soni left n armaan went to freshen up n he spend some time in fresh air claming himself n then he went for dinner...

Ridhima came n open the door n comes in n saw arushi...
As arushi saw her mom after a long day she run to her n hug her...
Ridhima pull her in her arms n then ask arushi 'meri aru kaise hai'
arushi-mein theek hun mommy.
Par aap ko kya hua aap ki ankhen itni red red kyun ho gai hai..
Ridhima- lok away n hesitated vo mommy ki ankho mein koi tinka jir jaya tha
armaan-mommy tinke se itni red red ho gai aach hua hatti nahi tha...

They both giggle. Ridhima put arushi down n went to kitchen to get dinner then she put arushi on dinning table n ask her to start n she will came after freshen up...
Ridhima went to freshan up but she just went deep in thought...n came out with arushi's voice...
Arushi haven't started yet she want to start with her mommy so she cried in top of her voice

Mommy..!!!! Mommy..!!!!!...
Ridhima came n ask her ''kya hua chila kyun rahi ho''
arushi-vo mommy mein aapke saath hi khaungi..
Ridhima- acha toh ismein chila ne ki kya baat hai... Mein aa toh rahi thi... Tumhare pass... Tum bilkul armaan jaisi...(she stop in between)

Arushi-mommy ye armaan koun hain...
Ridhima-koi nahi tum... Chalo dinner karte hain mein aa gai...
Arushi-nahi mommy pehle batao armaan koun hain.!!!
Phir hi mein khaungi!!!
Ridhima didn't want to argue so she said '' vo mera dost the...''
arushi-vo jo basketball mein aapko jeetne dete the aur khud har jate tha janke
ridhima just look at arushi controling her emotions n tears..
''hain vo hi dost jo aapki mommmy ki hasi dekh kar khush jo jata the''
arushi-the matlab aab vo mar ...





Ridhima-nahi vo jinda hai..(tears) Aise nahi bolte
arushi-vaooo. Okaiess.
Then both start eating ridhima fedded arushi n remember when she fed armaan when he was sad bcoz of minny armaan's small girlfriend she was having cancer n she imagin armaan
At the arushi's sit n she imagin that she is fedding armaan n smile come on ridhima's face then arushi sob bcoz of chilly.
Then ridhima came out of her dream n bring water for arushi quickly.
And make her drink the water n hit littlly on her back to stop her coughing...
After some time arushi became normal.
Then ridhima make arushi sleep in the room n giving her little n gentle n slow hit to make her sleep n then she came to study room n took her dairy out n sat on study table n start writting out her pain n curse she gave herself for making armaan's life a just tym for sending he no more enjoy the life...He have made himself enveloped in his work n memories.


His routien was he get up n went to practice basketball n sit there n thinking n then he came home freshen up n went to hospital take care of his mom n then came home n took dinner n sleep with Teary eyes daily remembering the tough time he went throug from childhood n then his long sad n painful love..
Arman surly practice the basketball but never took part in competition...
He left visiting parties n he never goes to hang out with his frndz actually he enveloped himself that he hardly make new frndz he just have old senjeevni gang as his frndz that too was scared..
Frdnz status as all will be back one by one together at some cause unknowingly
Anjali-atul in mumbai (sanjeevni).
Rahul- new york (apolo)
muskan-patiyala (vardman)
nikki in pune (kouties)
abhi in dehli (forties)
nikki-abhi were not married till now n have get misunderstanding due to sid just vanish suddenly.

N rahul still on his own words not to marry muskan just for his own fault he have... While muskan have no objection for that...
Ridhima n armaan- in USA.
(life savers)
(soon fate is going its way so just waiting to have them together but not so soon u just have to wait ;))
as atul-anjli planing to know what had happend 8 yrs back they plan to go n meet ridhz.
Anji call ridhz...
Ridhima pick up the call without looking caller id
ridhima-hello
anji-hi ridhz kaise hai
ridhima-di... Mein theek hun di aap kaise ho... Aur aaj aachanak se...
Anji-kya abh mein aapni behan ko bhi phone nahi kar sakti
ridhima-nahi di mera vo matlab nahi tha.
Anji-toh aur kya kahana chahati thi tu... Ab mujhe aapni behan se baat karne ke liya bhi...
Ridhima cut her - di.,...di...di.,.. Mera vo matlab nahi tha...,
acha batao aap kaise ho...Aur jeeju kaise hain.,..n meri angel kaise hai...(anjali-atul's daughter 5yrs)

anji-hum sab theek hain ridhz... Tu suna kya chal raha hai..
Ridhima-kuch nahi di bus hospital ka work load n phir arushi ki baatien...bolti hi rahti hai aur phir arm... But she stop thinking not to mention armaan's name...
Anji-ridhz teri bahut yaad aa rahi hai.. Tu toh wahin ja ke rah gai...
Ridhz-di mujhe bhi aap sab ki bahut yaad aati hai... Par aapko pata hai na mein kahan kyun nahi aana chahati... Itna sab hone ke baad mein...
Anji-acha chal vo sab batein chod (to little the atmosphere) ye bata hi tu meri princess ko sambhalti kaise hai mein toh khusi ko sabhal hi nahi paati...but hai princess itni aachi hai vo khud hi samajh jati hogi...par khusi
Ridhz-aaisa kuch nahi hai di aapki princess bahut bolne lagi hain aaj kal n meri angel toh itni pyaari hai aap bekar mein usko bol rahi hain...
Anji-acha aapni di ki jagha aapni angel ka saath de rahi hai tu ridhz mein na..

Tujhe dekh lungi
ridhz-sure di dekh lena jab aaogi...
Arman heard every thing actually he was coing for taking some suggesions for the patient's treatment..
But he went after listening to her talk n deciede to talk her later
After duty hrs ridhima went to her apartment n open the door n shocked to see lights close she run to arushi's room she was sleeping soundly... She then came back n puts the light on then turn to get water without looking in her front
when she turns n was about to leave for kitchen she heard
2 voice-hello miss ridhima
ridhima was shocked she turn around little scary.. When she turn a big smile was wore on her face...
Ridhima-aap dono yahan...
Voice1- kyun nahi aana chaiye tha..
Ridhima-nahi par achanak...
Voice2-vo kya hai na we were missing u ridhz alot n hug her she hug him back
voice1-vo kya hain na kisi ne kaha tha mujhe jab aaogi dekh lena toh hum dekhne aaye hain...






Voice2-vo kya hai na we were missing u ridhz alot n hug her she hug him back
voice1-vo kya hain na kisi ne kaha tha mujhe jab aaogi dekh lena toh hum dekhne aaye hain...

Ridhz-di aap bhi na mujhe bataya kyun nahi aap aa rahe ho...
Anjli-vo kya hai na hum tujhe surprise dena chahte the...
Kaise hai..
Ridhz-aapke saamne hun... Theek thak...
Here armaan was in hospital he though to discuss ridhima tomorrow about the patient but the patient was going critical.. Armaan tried to call ridhima but her cell was off.
So he deceide to go to her apartment...
He came to her apartment to discuss the case but he was unaware that atul n anjali were present there...
He rang the bell of the apartment...
Ridhz came excusing for a min..
Ridhz open the door
ridhz-armaan tum yahan is waaqt
armaan-hain.. Vo mujhe tumse kuch puchna tha vo ye patient ke baare mein...
Tum pehle iski attendent thi toh mein ne soch tum se puch lun...
Ridhima-koun (still on door) kis ward ke hain vo aur name kya hai..
Arman-vo cancer ward ke hai... Mr. Jaiswal... Unshe ek dum fit ki problem aa rahi hai n BP Bhi toh bhada hua hai n sugar level toh control hai par fitts are more problematic.
Ridhima-acha toh ye jo mein ne priscribe ki thi vo change kar do n uski jagah ye waali de do...
Armaan- okay... Chalo theek hai mein chalta hun... Waise kya mein ek baar arushi...
Ridhima- hain jarur!!! Then she realize that anji n atul are there so she stop him before he come in...


In between anji was caming to door as ridhz was taking long on door...
Ridhima-vo armaan arushi actually vo... Vo so chuki hai...
Armaan- oh okay mein usse baad mein mil lunga...
He start leaving he took 2 step forward n ridhima watching him going then he return n said ridhima tumhe aaj tak jhoot bolna nahi aaya... Koi aaya hai toh i can go no problem... Par jhoot tum nahi bol sakti...(ridhima lock at him with sock that how still he know her that much)
He again start leaving but this tym anji saw him...
Anji-armaan!!!! Tum yahan!!! Hain Vo actually...
He was cut by anji
anji- what a surprise..
Armaan-hi anji..!!! I have to rush see u later
anji-armaan humare saath baat nahi karoge.. Mujhe hug nahi karoge mein tumse itna dino baad...(anji had tears in her eyes)
arman-hug her n felt little tears... He n anjli both recall the old memories in a sec while hugging...
Kaise ho anjali... Aur atul kaisa hai..
Anji-armaan tum itna formal kyun behave kar rahe ho...
Armaan- matlab!!!!
Anji-matlab ki tum mujhe anji kehte the remember anjali nahi n atul ko champ... Now u r sounding so formal..
Aise chodo aur chalo aandar
anji took him in n ridhz just close the door behin n come with them...

Atul ye dekho koun aaya hai... Atul who was playing with khushi n arushi... Turn back..
Atul-'armaan tu yahan...!!!!'
He was totlly in shock...
'Mera bhai tu kaise hai...'
He run n hug armaan tightly n armaan hug him... Both girls just smile through tears...

Armaan came out of hug n then his glance fall on khushi.
He was about to ask when atul n anji together answer his un asked question...
Vo hamari beti hai khushi 5 saal ki hai...
Khushi n arushi look above n arushi just run to him n hug his legs.
Arman-buddy aap... Ye buddy ye mera masi n mosaji hain..
Arman- i know.. Mein janta hun... Meri basket kaise hai...
Arushi- mein achi hun aapko dekh ke aur achi ho gai...
Anji- basket!!!! Lekin is naam se toh tum ridhz ko...
Armaan- vo... Anji vo...
Arushi-wahooo toh aapka bhi naam armaan hai buddy!!
armaan n anji- aapka bhi matlab!!!!
Arushi- vo mommy ke bestest frnd ka naam bhi armaan tha...
Armaan look at ridhima with a shock look...
Armaan- acha ye chodo!!!! ye batao meri little basket ko kuch chaiye aapne buddy se...
Arushi- little thinking.. Hai mujhe chaiye chocholates...
Arman- jaise meri choti basket kaahe.


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part 32


RECAP


Ridhz-awww di... Mein aapko kaise bhul sakti hun mein ne aapka favourate low clorie breakfast n juice banaya hai...
Anji-u r the best sis ridhz..
Arushi-n best mommy too...
Khushi-n best massi too...
Ridhz- awww thank u...
All had their breakfast n ridhz left



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now the part


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Anji-u r the best sis ridhz..
Arushi-n best mommy too...
Khushi-n best massi too...
Ridhz- awww thank u...
All had their breakfast n ridhz left For the hospital... N ask anji that she will come at half day then they will go for shopping n roaming around the city...


Hospital..
Armaan bang into the ridhz cabin...
Armaan-i wanna talk to u.
Ridhz-yup say it...
Armaan- ridhima i wanna know that sid aur tumhare bich jo hua vo...
I mean mein arushi ka donor kaise ban paya...
Kyun tumne mujhe nahi bataya sid tumhe kis liya chod ke gaya...
Ridhz-armaan plz.. She start moving but stopped by armaan...
Arman-Kyun tum arushi ke pita ka naam usse nahi bataya..
Kyun tumne uss baachi se jhoot bola..
Kyun usse uske father ka naam nahi pata...
Kyun tum ne 8 saal usse uska haq nahi diya...
Ridhz-(crying) kyun ki mein nahi chahati
armaan-(angryly) kyun nahi chahati...
Kya tum nahi chahati tumhari beti ko uske pita ka pyaar mila..
Ridhima mein donor kaise bana...
Arushi kis ki beti hai ridhima...
Bolo ridhima kiski beti hai vo...

Ridhima-(crying loudly n Said in angry tone)
vo tumhari beti hai...
Tumhari beti hai arushi...
Tumhara khun hai vo...
Tumhari beti hai vo...(crying she settle down on the floor armaan went upto her)

armaan- kyun ridhima kyun kabhi tume mujhe nahi bataya...
Aapne samne aapni beti ko kisi aur ki beti soch kar...
Kyun ridhima kyun tumne mujhe nahi bataya... Kyun mujhe beri hi beti se dur raha...
Kyun tumne hum sab ki khushiyon ki parwa nahi ki...
Arushi ko uske pita ka pyaar nahi diya...
Mujhe meri zindagi se juda kar diya...
Aur khud bhi meri yaadon mein roti rahi...
Aur sid ne bhi suffer kiya...
Aur tumhare parents unko bhi tumne dukh diya aapne aapko itna dard de ke...
Kyun ridhima kyun kiya tumne aise... Kyu...

Ridhima-bcoz i loved u... Kyun ki mein aaj bhi tumse pyaar karti hun...
Armaan- ye kaise pyaar hai ridhima jis mein gum ke sivaye kuch na mila...
Agar mein us din mar...

Ridhima put her hands on his mouth Instantly to prevent him saying further...

Arman-ridhima tum mera muh se jo sun nahi sakti itna saalo tak mein usse gujra hun...
Tumhare bina mein sirf ek jinda laash ban gaya tha...
Aur tum har roz roti rahi arushi ko dono ka pyaar diya,... Meri yaad nahi aai tumhe kabhi... Kabhi nahi socha ki mein kaisa hun ga tumhare bina...
Ridhima- mein nahi chahati thi ki tum mera pass sirf isliya lout ke aao kyunki tum father bane wale the.. Mein chatati thi ki tum aapne pyaar ke liya...

Arman-Mein tumhare bina ek pal bhi adhura hun ridhima...
Jab tumne kaha ki tum sid ko...
Mein bhagwan se dua ki, ki tum hamesha khush raho...
Mein itna tut chuka tha that i was walking aimlessly on road n met an accident doctor said no chance to survive... But then i remember when u come searching me in panchgani n the line u said that day ki ''jaise armaan ko lagta hain ridhima sirf uski hai sirf uska haq hain ridhima par ussi tarah ridhima ko lagta hai armaan sirf uska hain sirf uska haq hai armaan par''
ye mera brain mein evolve hoti rahi n mein miracally fit ho gaya...
Aur aaj phir tumhare samne waise hi khada hun...
Mera jeena ka reasone tumho ridhima...
(now both of them were crying badly n sitting on floor armaan holding ridhima from her shoulders n ridhima's hand on his laps)Toh humne kaise soch liya ki mein tumhe sirf isliya aapnaunga kyun ki mein father banne wala hun...
Nahi ridhima mein tumse itna pyaar karta hun jitna mein ne aapni puri jindagi mein kisi se nahi kiya yahan tak aapne aap se bhi itna pyaar nahi kiya jitna tumse pyaar kiya hai aur karta rahunga...
Tum mera dil ki dhadhkan ho chahe paas raho ya dur par dil dhadhkan ke bina nahi rah sakta...

Ridhima-plz armaan mujhe maaf kar do.. Mein ne tumhe itna ghalat kha.. Tumhare saath itna galat kiya phir bhi tumne aaj tak mera saath nahi choda...
Hamesha mera saath khade rahe..
Hamesha mujhe support kiya..
Hamesha mera liya aapne aap ko..
Arman put hands on his mouth...

Armaan-shhh basket... Chup ho jao...
Mein kahan kuch kar paya jab tumhe meri sab se jayad jarurt thi tab mein tumhe sahara nahi de paya...
Tumhe akele hi sab ke sawalo ka...

Ridhima-akele nahi armaan tabh bhi tum mera saath the...
Tumhara aansh mujhe hamesha sahara deta tha..
Himat deta tha ki mein sab se ladh sakun...
Sab ke sawalo ka jawab de sakun...

Armaan- i love u ridhima...
Mein tumse aaj aur bhi kai jayada pyaar karta hun...
Kya tum mera saath dogi jindagi baar ke liya...
Kya arushi ko uske dad dogi
u know i m crazy but in ur deep love for me .. In ur beauty .. in ur smile that make my day ... on ur eyes that always search for me... ur hairs that always kiss ur cheeks... ur hand that alway cares for my cheeks...
ur dhupatta that always falls on my face ... n ur heart which is my permnent address since i met u...
Kya tum mujhe ye haq dogi ki mein tumhare saath bhuda hun aur tumhare saath hi mar.
Ridhima just put her hand on his mouth n cryingly nodded her head in agreement..









part 33



Armaan- i love u ridhima...
Mein tumse aaj aur bhi kai jayada pyaar karta hun...
Kya tum mera saath dogi jindagi baar ke liya...
Kya arushi ko uske dad dogi
u know i m crazy but in ur deep love for me .. In ur beauty .. in ur smile that make my day ... on ur eyes that always search for me... ur hairs that always kiss ur cheeks... ur hand that alway cares for my cheeks...
ur dhupatta that always falls on my face ... n ur heart which is my permnent address since i met u...
Kya tum mujhe ye haq dogi ki mein tumhare saath bhuda hun aur tumhare saath hi mar.
Ridhima just put her hand on his mouth n cryingly nodded her head in agreement..

N hug him...
N wisper in his ears(smiling through tears)''i love u armaan... I love u like anything...''
arman(naughtily)-acha meri little basket se bhi nahi basket...
Ridhima-(smiling through tears)phir se bolo...
Arman-basket...
Ridhima-phir se...
Armaan-come on basket aab kitni baar bulwao gi...
Aacha meri little basket se bhi tum itna pyaar nahi karti jitna mujhse karti ho...
Ridhima-nahi mein tumse hi sabse jayada pyar karti hun aur karti rahungi...
Arman- par mein toh aapni little basket se jayada pyaar karta hun...
Ridhima's mouth left open..
Ridhima- how mean armaan.. Hit him playfull on his chest..
Arman-oucch!!! Basket mar kyun rahi ho.
Ridhima-kyun ki tum issi layak ho.(both smile)
Arman- i love u ridhima i just love u till eternity.
Ridhima-i love u to armaan i love u too.
They hug each other tightly.
Both were having the smile they have lost 9 yrs back.


Both aparted from hug n togetherly spoke to each other
Armaan/ridhima- tum aise hi hasti/haste raha karo aache lagte ho...
They then laughed...

Ridhima phone rang...
Ridhima get up from floor n attended the call arman too stand up
Ridhima-hello
voice- kahan hai tu... Aaj tu day off lene wali thi.. Bache kab se intazaar kar rahe hain ...
Ridhz- di bus abhi thodi der mein aai...
Anji-kya baat hai ridhz bahut khush hai..
Ridhz- di ek surprise hai kuch batana hai.. Aap sab ko...
Anji- kya jaldi baat na ridhz. Kya surprise hai...
Ridhz- di surprise hai... Wait n watch..
They hang up...


Armaan n ridhima having a huge smile on their face n once again hug each other tightly as crushing ribs...
Then both went together to sign their duty off n then went to ridhima's apartment...
Arman-ridhima i think some other day.. Pata nahi anji-champ kaise react karenge...
Ridhima-armaan come on tum jante ho unke reactions...

Remember vo tumhare sabse ache dost hain...
Armaan- ya isse liya bol raha hun...
Ridhima-armaannn...
Armaan- okay baba aa raha hun...
Ridhima rang the bell..
Anji open the door only to see ridhima...
Armaan was hidden
anji-chal jaldi aandar aa ridhz aur fresh ho ja aur jaldi chal bacho ne ghar sir pe utha rahka hai...
Pulling ridhima inside n on urge to close the door..
Voice- kya mein bhi andar aa sakta hun...
Anji n riddhima turn around..
Anji-armaan tum yahan..
Arman-kyun nahi aa sakta kya..
Anji-nahi aise baat nahi hai vo kal jo kuch...
Arman-anji jo ho gaya so ho gaya... Ab i have... Actually we have a good news...
Anji-we... Who we... Looking out...
Armaan-anji we matlab me n basket..
Anji-what.. Kya bola tumne...
Armaan- basket...
Anji- m i dreaming or...
Ridhima- no di its reality..
Mein aur armaan...
Arman just hold her hand tightly before she would complete..

Armaan- we r together forever now...
anji-what...but all of a sudden... Kahin isne tujhe blackmail waghra toh nahi kiya na ridhz... Bata mujhe mein abhi iski khabar leti hun... Bata ridhz
Ridhima-nahi di aise kuch nahi hai... Bus mein aur armaan...
Anji-par aachanak se kaise... Kal tak toh tum dono... Aur aaj... All of a sudden...
Armaan-anji kya mein andar aa sakta hun... Actually door ke pass khade ho kar baat karna u know thodha weird lag raha hai...
Anji- oh sry.. Ya come... I just forget.. Seing u guyies...
So aab baatao... Ye sab kaise... Kahan... Ab kab hua...
Aur kisne baat shuru ki...
I want each n every detail at their pin points...
Armaan- relex anji.. Batatein hain... Pehle saans toh le lo...
(Atul was not there he was with kids)
anji-armaan ridhz tum bata rahe ho ki nahi ye sab kaise hua.
Ridhz-di vo jab mein hospital gai... Toh..
Armaan-mein ghussa mein








part 34




anji-armaan ridhz tum bata rahe ho ki nahi ye sab kaise hua.
Ridhz-di vo jab mein hospital gai... Toh..
Armaan-mein ghussa mein ridhima ke cabin mein ghus gaya.
Then they narrate whole story armaan's blaming then their confession n then their proposal all of this talk went in mute mode just expression were changing on their face... Anji frown on blame part but smile on confession part n brodly smile through tears on proposal part n the proposal part they told together taking hands in hands n looking each other though tears.



Atul came just when they stop telling their story n looking into each others eyes...
Atul was rubbing his eyes in surprise..
Atul scream- naahhhiii
both AR holding hand n anji turn to him...
A,R, anji- kya hua..
Atul staring at their hands..
Atul-anji mujhe pinch karna...
Anji-par kyun atul...
Atul-mein bahut bada sapna dekh raha hun...
Armaan aur ridhima ne haath pakd rakhe hain
Armaan- hain toh...
Atul- anji mein sach mein sapna...
Ridhima-nahi atul tum koi sapna nahi dekh rahe...
Armaan-hain champ...
Ab mein ye haath kabhi nahi chodunga...
Atul- mera bhai...
Congrats.. Par ye sab...
Armaan-vo anji tumhe bad mein bata degi...
Abhi mein chalta hun mom ko bhi ye khush khabri deni hai...


Ridhima doesn't leave his hand, arman look at her. She was having tears of mixed emotions.
Arman-ridhima plz ye ansun pochlo... Ab inke din nahi rahe... Ab inhe aapna ghar kahin aur dhund na padega... Aur mein ne ye haath hamesha ke liya thama hai... Jo aab sirf mera maarne ke baad...
Ridhima put her hand on armaan's mouth...
Ridhima-kitni baar kaha hai aise baate mat kiya karo, tum se pehle mein is duniya se...


This tym armaan block her to speak further...
Ridhima- armaan mein ne mooth(death) 2 baar bahut karib se dekhi hai... Ek baar toh dar tha tum se dur na ho jaun...
Par dusri baar khushi thi ki duniya se dur ho rahi hun...
Par aab mujhe dar lagta hai mooth se. Mein tumhare bina apni life imagin bhi nahi karna chahati hun...
Plz aaise baatein dobara mat kehna. Mujhe aacha nahi lagta...
Armaan- ridhima mein toh busss... Okay baba i m sry.. Nahi karunga aise baatein... Ab toh khush.
Ridhima just nodded innocetly. Arman can't help just smile at her still adorable innocence n beauty flashing his dimples...
Seing his dimple ridhima too smile with her million dollor smile.
Ridhima-aab tym promise karo ki kabhi bhi ye cute se dimple miss nahi hone doge...
Armaan- vo toh nahi ho sakta kabhi bhi...
Kyunki jab tak tum mera saath ho toh ye dimples kabhi bhi nahi khatam honge...
Hamesha deep hote rahenga tumhare pyaar se...


Ridhima-pata hai armaan jab bhi tumhare ye cute se dimple miss hote hai toh mujhe bilkul aacha nahi lagta.
Specially tab jab ye meri wajhse miss hote hain...
Armaan chahe tum mujhe daato,maaro, jhaagdo ya pyaar karo... Tum meri zindagi ka vo hissa ho jisse mein chahakar bhi apne aapse juda nahi kar sakti...
Tum meri jeena ki wajha ho...
Mera wajud hi tumhi se hai armaan...
Meri dil ki har dor tumhare dil se judi hui hai...
I love u very very much armaan...
love u very very much
(watery voice)
Armaan-i love u too basket...
ridhima-very very much...
Both were standing in front of each other joining their forhead n tears of happiness in both of their eyes n hand clapps into each others hands...
Their was long pause n both of them share a beautiful eye lock... Promising never to leave each other ever again...



Armaan- ridhima mein ek baat puchoon...
Ridhima- hain puchoo...
Armaan-ridhima tumne kabhi...kabhi bhi...
Ridhima-bolo na armaan... Khabra kyun rahe ho...
Armaan- wo...Wo tumne kabhi bhi... Ye janne ki khoshish nahi ki...Ki mein zinda hun ya...
Ridhima-nahi...
Armaan face fell... After a pause...
Aur tumhe pata hai kyun mein ne kabhi aise nahi kiya...
Armaan nodded his head in disagrement making a puppy face...
Ridhima smile through tears still holding his hands in hers...
Ridhima-kyunki mujhe pata tha ki tum jahan kahin bhi ho bilkul sahi ho...
Armaan-kaise...
Ridhima-kyun ki ye jo dil hai na...(putting his hands on her heart) Ye is baat ka sabut hai... Ki tum jahan bhi ho sahi salamat ho...
Armaan-kaise...
Ridhima- kyunki ye dil ushi din dhadhakna chood dega jis din tumhe kuch bhi ho jaya...
Aur mera jinda rahna is baat ka sabut tha ki tum bhi kahin na theek ho mera liya...
Hamare pyaar ke liya...
Anji- ahem... Ahem
chalo guyies aab bahut ho gaya...
Atul-hain yaar aur kitna rulaoge humein tum dono...
Dekho bechari anjali kaise ro rahi hai...
Anji-shut up atul!!!!
Armaan-hey anji aab toh atul ko shut up mat bol.. Bechara kitna pyaara sa hai... Aur tum hamesha isse hi shut up bolti rahti ho..
Riudhima-shut up armaan..
Arman-arey aab tum bhi shuru ho gai...
Ridhima-armaan
arman-aacha baba sry...
Chalo aab mein chalta hun...
Anji(teasingly)-jao ridhz armaan ko bahar tak chod aao..
Ridhima(staring)- diii...
Anji-okay okay... Jao...
Armaan went n ridhima see him off till the door...



Ridhima was 2 step from door coming back inside again door bell rang. Ridhima open the door to find armaan.
Ridhima-kya hua..
Armaan-vo mein kuch bul gaya...
Ridhima- kya...
Armaan came forward n kiss her forhead n ridhima was lost in the moment in his touch after so long n that to with respect n love in whole world..
Armaan- ye.. Bye..


Ridhima came inside n was about to leave when again door bell rang...
Ridhima open the door n again found armaan
ridhima-aab Kya hua..
Armaan(making puppy face)-wo mein ... Mein good nyt nahi bola tha toh good nyt wish karne...
Ridhima- armaan tum bhi na... Gud nyt aab jao...
She turn to go inside smiling on his childish act...
WHEN...

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Hey actually i'm sorry i'd not checked the no's of the parts... But i knew something was fishy as the parts had some loose ends, i was even confused abt how atul and anjie reached ridzy's home... But i'd ignored it... Anyways you brought up the story very well:) i just luvd the confession and all the emotional scenes in these last few parts... At last we will get our old armaan back, and now that he's back, the whole gang will get together:) just hope it happens soon... Hey just another silly request... If ur ever bringing sid back den bring him back with tamanna... I really luvd their jodi... And bring together the other jodi's too... Continue soon...

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