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Posted: 18 October 2012 at 3:52am | IP Logged
  1. Hey guys!! I am back with a new ff. But it's not at all related to the current track. 
I know I am very late. I am writing how I wanted ashwin issue to be held. So here I start writing..

Ashwin called Priya late at night. Ram gave her the cell and told to switch off the lights n pick up the phone. So Priya was not able to understand whose phone it was. So she thought it can be something important. So she picked up.

P: hello!!

A: hello Priya!

P: kaun?

A: Priya me ashwin.

Priya cuts the call. She thinks how dare he calls me at this time. 

P: ab kya karu? Mr kapoor ko Batana toh chahiye nahi toh koi misunderstanding hui toh?
Is bare me subah sochti hu abhi so jati hu.

MORNING

She calls her dad but unfortunately her mom picks her up.

Shipra: hello Priya kaisi hai tu? Aaj subah subah phone?

P: me thik hu ma. Aap kaisi ho? Kya kar rahi ho?

Shipra: aur kya karungi Diwali ki tayari kar rahi ho. Tu thik hai? Teri awaz bujhi bujhi lag rahi hai?

P: ha ma mujhe kya hon a hain me bilkul thik hu. Ma papa kahan hai?

ShiPar: vo toh market gaye hai.

P: me bad me call karti hu.

Shipra: kabhi mujhse bhi apni dil ki baat share kar liya kar?

P: ma aisi koi baat nahi hai. Achha baat yeh hai ki kal me Mr Kapoor k office gayi bonus dene toh vahan pata chala ashwin ne vahaan job le li hai. Or kal raat uska call bhi aya. Mujhe lagta hai mujhe Mr kapoor ko sab bataana chahiye.

Shipra: kya yeh ashwin? Tera pee ha kab tak karega ? Pagal ho gayi hai kya mat Bol Kuch bhi ram ko. Wakt ane par Bol dean but abhi nahi. Thik hai

Priya gets ready before ram and is sitting on the couch reading a book.
But not reading actually just disturbed because of ashwin.

Ram gets up.

R: good morning Priya !!

Priya is just lost thinking what she should do. Talk to papA or not?

R: good morning Priya!!!

P: good morning mr kapoor

R: kya hua? Tum thik ho?

P: ha me bilkul thik hu. Aap tayar ho jaiye.

R: ha thik hai


Edited by rampriyarocks - 16 December 2012 at 4:13am

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Posted: 18 October 2012 at 3:53am | IP Logged
PART 2

Priya and Ram are having breakfast

R: Priya tum sach me thik ho na?

P: ha mr kapoor. Apko kya ho Gaya hai?

R: nahi Kuch nahi. 

P: jaldi se breakfast kar lijiye fir humme office Jana hai. Mera toh ho Gaya. Aap jaldi se kha lijiye. Tab tak me books dal deti hu bag me.

R: par ye bag?

P: ha kyu?

R: tumne toh kaha tha ki special occasion pe use hogi.

P: ha toh yeh special occasion hai. Aap nahi jante ki mujhe teaching kitna
Pasand hai. teaching mere liye sirf mera job nahi passion hai. Aaj tak bacho ko padhaya tha ab employees ko bhi dekh lungi.

R: that's good Priya. Chalo chalte hai.

They reach office. Ram introduces Priya and goes.

Priya starts and sees ashwin there. And then she ignores him. She starts and it's 1 hr and suddenly ashwin phone rings n he tells her it's shrutis call n Priya tells him to get out. 
class is over.

Priya goes out. 

A: Priya itni bhi narazgi kya?

P: ashwin how dare u tum hamari purAni friendship aise sable samne.

A: m sorry Priya. 

P: not Priya. Mrs Priya ram kapoor or u can say mrs kapoor or mam.

A: sorry mam.

P: that's better.

Priya goes to rams room

R: ho gayi tumhari class?

P: ha ho gayi bht maze aya. Aisa lag hi nahi raha tha ki me employees ko Pada rahi thi. Thanks.

R: thanks kis liye?

P: apne mujhe Iske liye allow kiya. Isle liye thanks.

R: Tumhare pass kabiliyat hai is liye tum yeh kar rahi ho.

P: agar aap permission hi nahi dete toh kaise kar pati. Thanks.

R: it's okay

Priya picks up a pen.

R: Priya bura mat manna but kya tum kahi aur bait ke apna kam kar sakti ho. Mujhe room me akele baithna pasand hai.

P: ohh it's ok. Vaise bhi mujhe Kuch ppt me office staff ki help chahiye.
Me chalti hu

Priya goes out and calls aryan.

P: Aryan kya tum ppt me help karoge?

Aryan: mam vo mujhe sir ne ek file di hai isliye mujhe vo complete KARNA hai.
M sorry mam

P: it's ok. Koi help kar sakta hai?

Aryan: ashwin kar lega aapki help mam

Ashwin: Aryan kya hua? 

Aryan: ashwin tum mam ki help kar do sir ne mujhe ek file di hai. Unhe ppt me help kar do.

Ashwin: ha thik hai. Mam chaliye.

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Posted: 18 October 2012 at 5:28am | IP Logged
continue continue
i like it , in all the sep of raya the memories of when they were saath is so good!! kee pwriting Clap

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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 11:08pm | IP Logged
part 1

nice start awww u bring back the RaYa memories to us... nice start with aswin track... but i think it was same as show... but let's see what store for us in next...

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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
part 2

awww Priya putted aswine on his place so nice... sweet n cute small RaYa moment... awww btw end i think end was diffrent but not sure waiting for next do update soon...

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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 2:29am | IP Logged
Countinue soon

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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 2:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by leo4ever

continue continue
i like it , in all the sep of raya the memories of when they were saath is so good!! kee pwriting Clap
thanks. sure will continue soon

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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 2:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by leena04

part 2

awww Priya putted aswine on his place so nice... sweet n cute small RaYa moment... awww btw end i think end was diffrent but not sure waiting for next do update soon...
thanks

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