Posted: 19 October 2012 at 8:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by CutielovesChocsPREE.
I don't even know what to say. Actually, I'll start with the thing I loved the MOST about the OS. You can see where I'm going, can't you? THE HARRY POTTER REFERENCE! IT MADE MY DAYYY! I was all: I'm reading the series again and I had just passed this part when I read your OS.
Love the title by the way! It's much better than the previous one and somehow it's suitable perfectly. The order of their drinks defines them SO much. Him, a 'Vodka Redbull' and her, an 'Appletini'. AA, I love your detailing, sai mein!
Dude. Panchi Rastogi and such feisty? behaviour!? Man, that's unexpected! But we saw that in the show yesterday, so I'm pretty happy with that. Because I reaaally wanna see more of THIS Panchi in the show. :D
'She didn't give a flying shit about peace and care!' Brilliant! Love the humour weaved within the story. Especially with KD going all 'Wait, that was three right? Yep, he was drunk' Your writing amuses me, Pree. Kudos Oh dear. Perfectly adorable moment between KD and Panchi. I honestly can't imagine them to be a couple, because they give me more of a sibling-y vibe, but if I warp my mind enough, anything's possible! Honestly love the comfort level they share despite being complete strangers. 'She was not the girl he fell in love with, but that didn't matter.' INTRIIIGUINNGGG and yet, so simply stated. Loved it. He noticed her for who she was for the very first time and he liked who he was seeing.
OOOH. Kissy wissy! and OF COURSE she took off after that, leaving him staring once again at the moon his head plagued with thoughts.!
'You like Kiya. You like Ranveer' I fell over laughing, honestly. These two are two extremely confused and hungover souls. AND THEN the HP reference!
What was there NOT to like!?
Kudos woman! Beautiful piece of work, as always!
The previous title was just the working title, since I wrote it late at night. I have an old incomplete FF by that name, so I just nicked the title off there.
HP references in my OSes just happen. HP is such a great part of my writing life that I can't help but put it in there somehow.
Thank you for the compliment. I like putting details in because that makes it easier to imagine it happening.
I know, I wrote her being a little apologetic of her behavior and then deleted thinking what the heck, even this girls deserves to be rude at times! I just had to put in the Bite Me retort. She needed to say that, and KD needed to be told off someone!!
*Bows* Amusing you is a pleasure Darlin'. (Yes the "Darlin'" thing is a South American accent style).
Most of the PanSh fanbase here seems them as anything platonic - best friends, siblings. these was a little complicated, because honestly I'd still see them as platonic here. There are moments when you're just so frustrated with the current situation, that you need an escape, this kiss was a five minute escape. Nothing emotional, just physical. That line was meant to indicate just this fact.
There was nothing else she could've done other than leaving. She couldn't have apologized, she couldn't have cherished it.
Actually that is not confusion. What they were trying to state by those statements was, it's not me that you want, and nor do I. So let's just keep it our dirty little secrets and move on. It was actually them clearing out any confusion between them.