Posted: 18 October 2012 at 12:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mais
YOU HAD ME AT THE WARNING OF THIS BEING NOT PLATONIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
caution - lots of eeping :p
oh yes I did force you! oh yeah I did and I am freakin proud of it!!!! the title isnt suiting the OS. I am thinking maybe "Kiss & Tell" :p lolz,I am bad with titles and this title night give people a heart attack :p
uhum!!! so yeah...I was so shocked seeing this really in your face kind of Panchi. but I cant actually blame her...poor girl needs to let go sometimes. and aahhh!!! my feels when he initiated the "conversation" in his sarcastic manner! eepss!
honestly, I have this thing for girls being harassed and then being rescued by the guy. yeah I ain't a big feminist :p so you can imagine my excitement when she was outside and being harassed by a loser and KD coming to rescue her, drunk :D
I simply love that little humor you need in between the words. like KD losing count of the reasons, it makes me chuckle. there is such easy flowness to it...I really do get lost in your words and try my best to not miss anything and I succeed mostly as well :D
aaah! that reaction of hers when she realizes what happens and KD's silent support to her. eeepppsss!!!! lemme read again! aaah!! she was crying in his shirt and he just held her while she did so and then she was done and she looked up and then some small talk and then...and then..
OMFG!!!!!! THEY KISSED!!!!!!!!!!!
I will be honest I am not a huge fan of kisses being described in details but OH DEAR LORD!!!!! maybe it was due to my PanSh feels or the wait I had to go through to read this but I couldnt even blink! it was that goood!!
"he was not the guy she was in love with. she was not the girl he fell in love with. but that just didn't matter."
I died there...seriously I did!!! oh I could picture it and it didnt seem weird at all. just like that one possibly wrong moment felt completely write, the picture of it felt so right as well! oh how I love you for this!!
and then it was over and it was still right and she was gone. they the next time they were there again, indirectly saying that it wasnt right, it happened with a completely wrong person but in reality accepting whatever that happened and being at peace with that, ready to take a platonic step forward and just keeping it as their dirty little secret perhaps?
I wont go in the direction and tell you whether it was good or bad. because for me its just perfect and right...gaaah!! it made me write a crappy comment!
I regret nothing!!
love ya sooo much!!!!
Yes there was a lot of eeping in there! Sigh! What all you make me do Mardood!!
I'm still contemplating titles. TWILY is the title of one of my old FFs. Couldn't get anything that late in the night so I kept that.
I want this "in your face" Panchi in the show, saying "Bite me." to RV. Gonna be so amazing.
KD's style in her is inspired by my all time favorite character from an American drama. Whenever I'm writing a drunk rough and tough guy, I automatically fall back on his style.
There were a lot more instances of humor in between, hope you caught them.
Give me some credit too, you idiot!! I wrote the kiss well, it's not because of your PanSh spasms that you liked it so much!
Yes you wrote a crappy comment.
Love you too. And hate you too!!