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Posted: 11 years ago
Uma


I love u for this. This is by far the most beautiful realization I could think of. U know how u kept Anandi's feelings , her fear of rejection and her acknowledgment that her feelings are just too deep for shiv. Wow... This is what I would like to see on the show... It's just too beautiful ... As beautiful as the feeling of love is... The feeling of belonging to someone is. You made
My day!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful Adi. Totally different style of writing. I so want to see a similar thought process for Anandi in the serial.

'my world is a better place b'coz  ShivRaj  Shekhar'.. Love this line. That is what she needs for once think about herself
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow  so nicely written and very well picturised u r a grt writer uma  u handle emotions well unlike me !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: dixie123

Beautiful Adi. Totally different style of writing. I so want to see a similar thought process for Anandi in the serial.

'my world is a better place b'coz  ShivRaj  Shekhar'.. Love this line. That is what she needs for once think about herself

 
Dixie.,
 
Glad u liked my take on this sensitive matter.
 
But frankly speaking...this is not a scene...that CV's can take a risk of potraying...though most of us would love it...the greater strata of audience may not connect to this monologue in a soap...😕
So, A/way...we cannot see it on the screen...I thought...why not put in my view here...😆😆
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: adi2512

 
Dixie.,
 
Glad u liked my take on this sensitive matter.
 
But frankly speaking...this is not a scene...that CV's can take a risk of potraying...though most of us would love it...the greater strata of audience may not connect to this monologue in a soap...😕
So, A/way...we cannot see it on the screen...I thought...why not put in my view here...😆😆
 
 

 

Agree Adi. What you have written can't be made a scene. It is too deep ! But, something on similar lines like we saw with Shiv's realization needs to come soon. We have never seen her thought process for Shiv post sagai.
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG!!!
Umaji...
What was that???
I am having goosebumps abhi...
I am your fan from now on!!!

Such beautiful feelings!!!
Loved the line 'My world is beatiful because it as Shivraj Shekhar in it...'...

Only you could write this...!!!!
My head is literally spinning!!
UMaji!
That was amazing!!!
Beyond words!!!

Waiting for the next part!!!

Thanks for this!!!
And thanks for making me feel so special!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWESOME!!!!! right npw too dazed will post my comments in detail after the second part (its a way of EBMing u to update quickly) 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
BEAUTIFUL piece of writing . Truly amazing .. take a bow . 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello Uma,

this was a very beautifully written thoughts of Anandi. I read it almost 5 times just now.  It is so subtle and  heart touching. 🤗 I just wish CVs show something similar to this. 

PS: I am a regular reader of ANSH AT so I know your name 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG UMA, you write beautifully...captured true reflection of her feelings. 👏 The way you have made Anandi open up about her true feelings ...gave me goose bumps ...very in depth & touching to the core!!