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(Tanha) Swaron Dushman To Dosti To Love

Guys I'm writing a story of Swaron. Quite similar to the show d3, but only some characters a changed a bit. I know there is no Kriyaansh and Tanha in the show anymore but I m a big fan of Swaron ' Tanha and Kriyaansh- Arsha so I m writing a story where Arsha and Tanha is also there. And this is my first work on IF, so if there are any mistakes then I m sorry.

 

Character Sketch:Big smile

Swayam: A Handsome 19 year old boy. He was from a very rich family, he was the heartrobe of the college,sab ladkiyaan uspe fidha thi. He loved dancing he was very kind and caring. His best friend was Kriya. He hated Sharon. They both were enemies. Swayam's parents use to live in Australia. He was part of the weakling team


Sharon: the diva of the college, 19 year old girl. She was also from a rich family; she was the daughter of Gautam Raiprakash. Sharon was a daughter of a single parent. She always got whatever she wanted in her life. All things went her own way, she wanted. She was Rey's best friend. She hated Swayam. She was a dazzler. She is a very egoistic person.


Rey: He was also 19; he was the son of the business tycoon. He was Swayam's and Sharon'sbest friend. He loves kriya and is in a relationship with kriya, their relationship was a secret. He was the captain of team dazzlers.


Kriya: She was a child of a single mother. She was very passionate about dancing. Her best friend was Swayam. She loved Rey and is in a relationship with him. She was the captain of the team weaklings.

Vickey: He was Rey's best friend and was part of the dazzler team. He was in a relationship with Neha.


Neha: She was Kriya's best friend from the first day. She is a part of weakling team. She is in a relationship with Vickey.


Nilesh: Rey's friend. He is a part of a dazzling team.


Simmi: Sharon's close friend and part of dazzling team. She likes Nilesh.


Amar: He is part of a weakling team. He is a friend of Bharat and Swayam. He likes Rinni. He works in a coffee shop, after college.


Rinni: she is Sharon's close friend. She likes Amar.


Bharat: He is part of a weakling team. He is friend of Swayam and Amar. He works in a car store.


Vishaka: She is a part of a weakling team. She is a bit boyish person.  She is Kriya's friend.  


Concept: this story is basically about Sharon and Swayam hating each other in the beginning. But at some point they will have some feelings for each other.

         *But are going to express their feelings for each other?

         *Are going ignore their feelings?

         *Is she going to keep her ego on one side and accept that she loves a weakling?

 

So guys give me your opinions for these questions. So that I can write an awesome story of Swaron. I haven't decided how am I going to follow up the story but I'll write it on the basis of your opinion.

 

PLZ COMMENT'''Tongue

 

(Tanha) Swaron ' Dushman To Dosti To Love part 1

Chapter 1:

In the morning
whole gang was gathered in the canteen except Sharon and swayam. Kriyaansh was sitting together and were lost in each other.

Bharat: aree yaar yeh Swayam kaha reh gaya.
Rey: haan'.. aur yeh Sharon bhi abi tak nahi ayi'.
Neha: maybe CS aur ASC work doing.
Vishaka: yaa dude.

Swayam was near the door about to enter the canteen Sharon comes from the other sides and both bang on each other.

Sharon: Andhe ho kya? dekh ke nahi chal sakte kya?
Swayam: haan mein toh andha hu'..lagta hai mere saath saath tum bhi andhi ho'.
Sharon: kyu???
Swayam: tum bhi toh dekhar chal sakti thi na'
Sharon: mein dekhar hi chal rahi thi tum bich me aagaye'..
Swayam: ohh helllooo, mein tumse pehle yaha tha'..tum bich mein aagaayi
Sharon: whatever!!!

They walk towards where the gang was sitting.

Swayam: hey guys
Sharon: hii guys
All: Hii Sharon, Hii Swayam.
Bharat: Abe Swayam kya hua re phirse koyi  locha hua kya Sharon ke saath???
Swayam: kyu??
Bharat: Nahi who tum dono dawaze ke paas ladrahe the na'.
Swayam: nahi kuch kaas nahi'' (looking at sharon) ladna toh iss chudail ki khaasyat hai'..
Sharon: how dare you, tumnhe mujhe chudail bhulaya'..
Swayam: ab sach bol diya to hiss me galat kya hain'.
Sharon: u're disgusting.
Swayam:Thnk you and u too. (teasing)
Sharon: aaargghhh ( angry)
Swayam: guys lets leave for rehersals, iss Sharon se ladne se acha hum jaakar humare rehersals start karte he''
Vishaka: Yaa dude lets go
Neha: Bye babu'
Vicky: Bye Kagu.
Weaklings To Dazzlers: Bye guys
Dazzlers: Bye

Rey and Kriya smile At each other''..Team weaklings leave for their rehersals.

Sharon: yeh Swayam apne apko bohot smart samajta hai na''..ab dekho mein kya karti hoon
Simmi: sharon tum kya karne wali ho'.
Rey: chodo na sharon''.jo hua so hua'.
Sharon: No rey mein chup nahi betogi''..just wait and watch Mr Swayam Shekawat
Rey: ( In his mind) Swayam Beta sambalke, yeh aab kya karegi woh koyi nahi bata sakta.


Guys hope u enjoyed the chapter.

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(Tanha) Swaron ' Dushman To Dosti To Love part 2

chapter 2

In the class'..swayam was sitting alone'. Sharon goes and sits next to him.

Swayam: (in his mind) Iss ko kya ho gaya yeh mere saath kyun beti hai?
Sharon: Hii Swayam
Swayam: (puzzled look) hii
Rey: ( sees Sharon sitting nest to Swayam) and ( in his mind) yeh pakka Sharon ke plan ka part hai varna who aur Swayam ke saath betige, impossible.
Swayam: Oye chudail tum mere saath betiho kuch kaam hai kai.
Sharon: kyun mein tere saath nahi aise hi beth sakti hoon kya?
Swayam: smiles ( in his mind) yeh kuch toh karne wali hai, pata lagana padega ki kya kichdi paak rahi hai.
Sharon: (in mind) iss sadu ke saath kisko betna hai'..

lecture was finished. Professor walked out of the class.
Sharon: woh Swayam'.
Swayam stops.
Swayam: haan kuch kaam tha.
Sharon: haan who reports bana ne hai.
Swayam: kk I'll join u later'
Sharon: kyun abi tum busy ho'.
Swayam: nahi lekin'.
Sharon: lekin kya''.abhi chalet hai na jitna jaldi ho jayega utna aacha hoga.
Swayam: ok'.jaisa tum bolo.
Sharon: chale??
Swayam: haan.
On their way to the rehersel hall Swayam thinking.
Swayam: ( thinking) yeh chudail ek din mein itnakaise badal gayi.
Sharon: Swayam tum ek kaam karo tum rehersel hall joa, mein report ki file car mein bhool ayi hoon toh mein who file lecher ati hun, tum rehersal hall mein mera wait karo.
Swayam: ok
Sharon : walking towards the parking lot and smiling. She reached near the car''(says to herself) abb ayega maza.
Swayam: are yaar mein toh apna phone locker room mein bhool gaya''.jabtak Sharon ati hain'tab tak mein mera mobile lekhe ata hoon.
Swayam went to the locker room and Sharon coming back to the rehersal hall.
Sharon: ab taktoh Swayam rehersal hall ke andhar jakar hungama hua hoga. ( laughs)
Sharon opens the door of the rehersal hall, and the cowdung falls on her from top  from the bucket.
Sharon: ewww yucckkk
Sharon: yeh Swayam kaha hain who andhar kyun nahi aya.
Swayam: (enters the rehersal hall) yeh kya hogaya.
Sharon: tum kaha te?
Swayam: mein apna phone locker room mein bhool gaya tha'..isliye lene gaya tha,
Sharon: wat??
Swayam: haan''ohhh ohhh wait wait so this was your plan jab mein andhar ahunga tab yeh cowdung mere upper girenga'..wow!! chudail kaise kaise idear ate hain tume.
Sharon: w..w..w.woh..woh
Swayam: bolte hain na jo dusro ke saath bura karna chahta hain uske saath ki bura hota hain'..aur aaj bhi wohi hua'..
Sharon: whatever!!!

Sharon calls simmi..                         
phone convo
Simmi :Hello
Sharon: hey simmi
Simmi: haan Sharon bolo.
Sharon: simi woh mere locker mein ek bag hain who lekhar aao please.
Simmi: ok'..lekhin kaha aana hain.
Sharon: haan who mein rehersal hall mein hoon.
Simmi: ok I coming.
Sharon: thankx bye c u.
Simmi: bye
phone convo ends.
Sharon cuts the call

Sharon looking at Swayam angrily.
Swayam: tikhe toh mein chalta hoon'jab report bana hain toh mujhe bol dena.(chuckles)
Sharon: Tum I'm gonna kill u.
Swayam: wh'swayam could'nt complete the sentence simmi enters the rehrsal hall
Simmi: Sharon what happen to you, yeh kaise hua.
Sharon: who sab chodo simmi tum mera bag dedo please, mujhe change karna hai.
Swayam: mein chalta hoon'bye
Sharon: (looks angrily)
Simmi: Sharon yeh lo tumhara bag.
Sharon: thankx simmi. Mein washroom jake aati hoon.
Simmi: ok mein chalti hoon.
Sharon:kk
Sharon goes to the washroom gets freshen up and changes her clothes.
Sharon: (to herself)yeh mera plan toh mujpe hi baari padga'''''.goddd help me''

Guys how was it good bad worse''comment please
GUYS I HAVE A QUESTION...I UPDATED 2 CHAPTERS IT JUST WENT ON 1 PAGE HOW DO I UPDATE CHAPTERS ON ANOTHER PAGE? (EG: CHAPTER 3 ON PAGE 3) THIS IS MY FIRST WORK ON INDIA FORUMS SO I DON'T KNOW PLEASE REPLY...

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INDEX
chapter 1: page 1
chapter 2: page 1
chapter 3: page 4
chapter 4: page 5
chapter 5: page 6
chapter 6: page 7
 chapter 7: page 9
chapter 8: page 10
  chapter 9: page 11
chapter 10: page 12
chapter 11: page 13
chapter 12: page 15
chapter 13: page 17
chapter 14: page 18
chapter 15: page 19
chapter 16: page 21
chapter 17: page 23
chapter 18: page 25
Promo: page 28
chapter 19: page 29
chapter 20: page 32
chapter 21: page 35
chapter 22: page 37
Promo: page 44
chapter 23: page 46
chapter 24: page 60
chapter 25: page 63
*COMPLETED*


 My other work:
Swaron OS " Dooriyaan bhi hai zaroori''
Swaron OS '' Living a happy life after marriage''
Swaron FF ''Frienship can turn into love''



Edited by sweetsimi123 - 26 December 2012 at 5:17am

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