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SS Soulmates|Arhi Part 15,16 Last Part Pg # 72

-zunnilicious- Senior Member

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Posted: 16 October 2012 at 8:05am | IP Logged
Hey Folks,
Don't mad at me for starting a new story but I can't resist it though I've more than three pending FFs in my PC which I'm planning to post only after I complete them but I can't resist this one so I am posting it still unsure of the title, there are so many in my head but can't decide one.
Till then I'm just posting the Prologue
-Updates will be short and most probably with one day gap,
-Simply like this post or leave a comment to let me know you are interested in reading this story
-I am not going to say I'll continue it after getting response, I'll update even if I get zero comment here



Edited by -zunnilicious- - 15 August 2013 at 7:43am

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-zunnilicious- Senior Member

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Posted: 16 October 2012 at 8:05am | IP Logged

Life changes in moments. Till today she has just heard about it but today she has bystander it, felt it.  Shattered, she again held the papers which will alter her life or perhaps they had already. Lifting her gaze up she searched for him, she saw his shadow across the window of the room which opened somewhere she didn't know. He was sitting on some bench. Pushing her tears back she got up from the bed. Holding her heavy bridal attire taking small steps she stand near the window, she thought for a while and then slid the door open.

He turned his face at the sliding of door, here was standing his bride ….. no she is not his bride anymore, after giving her the papers he broke every relation with her. He turned back his face and she dejected as what she should speak now. She was so happy just an hour ago, feeling herself on the cloud nine, happily chattering with her friends, throughout rituals a beautiful smile was a part of her face but as she entered this room, no she was still happy when she entered the room anticipating her wedding night, blushing while imagining about this night, what her friends told her what her sister told her but! Her world turns upside down as he entered the room and throws her down from sky to the earth. All her dreams, her beautiful imagination all broken by him giving her this piece of paper.

"Ss ….Suniye" Controlling her tears she managed to speak. He turned his face again a bit confused. She felt herself go weak in knees and not bearing it anymore she knelt down in front of him and the tears which she was trying to control now breaking all the dams flowed down her cheeks. Now she was crying badly. He felt stabbed and next moment he was sitting down on knees in front of her

"Mujhe yeh shadi nahi kerni chahiye thi" His voice was merely a whisper but she heard it and shook her head

"Aa …aap aisa mat karein please …. Aap joh kahein ge ….. jaise kahein ge …. Main karoon gi …. Aap ki hr baat manoon gi …… per please iss …. Shad …. Iss rishte ko aik moka toh dain …… please …… main phir aap se kuch nahi mangoon gi …. Kabhi nahi …… please ….." She was stammering in her sobs and he was cursing his fate because of which he had to take this cruel decision. He thought it to be easy that he will give her divorce paper and she will agree to it, it isn't simple!

"I am sorry per ….." He paused, "Mere jaisa insaan tumhain kuch nahi de sakta" She could feel the pain in his voice

"Mujhe kuch nahi chahiye …. bus iss …. Iss rishte ko khatam mat karein please ….. mere babu jee …. woh nahi seh paaien ge …. Aap ne toh daikha tha na … ke aaj woh kitne khush the …. Phir main aik hi pal mein kaise unhain dukhi ker doon" She was pleading and he was not a heartless person

He silently got up and stepped towards room leaving her shocked. Wiping her tears she followed him to the room only to find him holding those papers. She closed her eyes as all her begging went vain but her eyes opened as she heard tearing of papers, she saw him tearing the divorce papers.

"I can't promise but I'll give it a try" He said and a smile touched her lips, a smile of relief

"Thank you" is all she could say, he smiled slightly and went to bathroom while she promised herself that she will make this marriage work


Edited by -zunnilicious- - 16 October 2012 at 8:06am

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shafy_MN IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 October 2012 at 8:23am | IP Logged
very nice start

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Crazy_soul IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 October 2012 at 8:57am | IP Logged
Great start.continue soon

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stunning.ayesha IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 16 October 2012 at 9:16am | IP Logged
Nice start
Update soon

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lovelyangel Senior Member

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Posted: 16 October 2012 at 9:50am | IP Logged

The story seems forceful and full of emotional drama.I liked the prologue and would love to continue reading it.You are not much a regular updater,so I am excited at the prospect of frequent updates.

Edited by lovelyangel - 16 October 2012 at 9:54am

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26_chaitra Senior Member

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Posted: 16 October 2012 at 11:36am | IP Logged
nyc concept :)
do continue soon...

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