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Sand_Princess

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 5:45am | IP Logged
So members of this forum... I am not sure if you know what a 'drabble shot' is... So I am going to introduce it to you. A drabble-shot is a form of writing were each part is very small about 300 or so words in total. The updates are daily and the plots are short and to the point. 

Beyond the pale...

Arnav pulled out the smoke from between the lips and looked at the woman in front of him. 

She had been married to her for the past 10 years. His seven year olds daughter was the apple of this life. He had been there for her, every birthday. This time it was special. She had wanted to spend the night with her parents. She was his little angel and he would have it no other way. 

"Payal, go inside. I'm coming out in a moment," he said as he put the cigarette out. 

"Baby, be quick. She's waiting!" His wife loved him. He loved her too... She was good to him. He entered the hotel hot on her heels and could see his little princess bouncing on her seat as she spotted him. My little princess

She ran to him, pulled him down to her and then giggled as she pulled him towards the table. "We are going to sit here, papa!" she was so excited, his little princess. he sat down beside her holding her hand. 

It was an hour later that he spotted her. She was wearing a red dress, which fit her snugly. She held onto the arms of the man she was with and kissed her cheeks. How could she?! 

Mine!

So should I continue this little thing?! Smile No PM's will be sent out if I do write this. Stay tuned. I will post everyday, if I write it. Its gonna be one ride to hell. Evil Smile

Update page 3, 5, 10, 14, 18, 28, 31, 35


Edited by Sand_Princess - 24 November 2012 at 9:33am

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 5:55am | IP Logged
Love it already
intriguing
Who is the wife?...She seems like a flirt
He smokes...

SlovesBSSI

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 5:55am | IP Logged
nice do continue

Sand_Princess

Goldie

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 6:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by april2003

Love it already
intriguing
Who is the wife?...She seems like a flirt
He smokes...

Payal is the wife. LOL I wrote that somewhere... didn't I? I need to check. Smile

Sand_Princess

Goldie

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 6:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by saaruipk

nice do continue

Hey. Thanks a lot. Will do... If people want it... Can't write for 5 or six people alone... can I now?! LOL

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 6:12am | IP Logged
how come you kept shifting from 3rd person to 1st? Confused

Sand_Princess

Goldie

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 6:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by blahblah16

how come you kept shifting from 3rd person to 1st? Confused

I'll be sure to check if I have made the mistake... But if you are referring to the words written in italics then they are the thoughts of Arnav. Smile Please ask me if you have any other questions to ask. 

Sand_Princess

Goldie

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 6:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by blahblah16

how come you kept shifting from 3rd person to 1st? Confused

Yes, I found the mistakes. Sorry. I am too used to writing in 1st, so I slipped. Thanks! Big smile

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