m sorry too mate !...replied so late. gt  yr & Moeens pm too bt actually m having a  hectic time !...assignments.. projects.. labs ..r nearly suffocating me !...dnt 've time fr my football coaching too ! lifes miserable ! ...o.k enough of my laments ...nw abt yr SS ...its really nice !...u 've really improved so so  much...  english is much better  & u 've used the punctuations too properly!...nice nice i like it ...keep it up mate !...i like tht yr story hs Sid as the bad guy !...what i want islike ... spice it up more nw ...want Armaan to throw a few knockout punches on him & a few straight kicks  at his face & groin ...put in sum kickass action !.hope yr getting me ! i want Armaan to give a severe blow on Sids face like WHACK !!! ...ie after  he cums to know the truth abt Sid  !  Want Sid to fall like a sack of potato!!!  only then my evil soul will find a strange sadist satisfaction !!!!! ...u gt my point na ...nw pls continue likewise !!