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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 12:15am | IP Logged
kya baat hai!!!


distance reducing between ariya Smilesharing beautiful romantic moments Smile


irritated at everybody glancing at their cuteness Big smile


shree-chotu ki toh kismat hi khrab hai LOL


want to know more..continue soon and thanks for the pm..

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 12:17am | IP Logged
Very romantic...riya kissed arjun!plz update soon vidya dear...thanks for pm..hope der wil be some ahem ahem moments...

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awesome update...kiss and run...what's next...i am waiting for the next part..

thanks for the pm dear..

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 3:48am | IP Logged
U r a very chalak types kis point pe end kiya just like gorkhy sir
trp kaise badhani hai aap ache se jante ho ji
awesome brilliant i was blushing reading it
lovely update.continue soon

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hello Ariyans...i am back with the next part...

i know many are surprised by Riya's kiss just like Arjun was...I too dont know why i made her kiss...Smile..anyways i have made an attempt to explain it better...

@samiya.059, chalak nahi yaar...i didnt know what to write after that...just like Gorky, i was confused...toh if that confusion is increasing the TRP, then i am happy...lol

thanks to all those sweet cute comments and likes...i hope u like this part too...

Part 8 

she felt ecstatic…….She was in fact over-excited by the whole feeling…… …she couldn't contain her excitement……and in the spur of the moment, she turned sideways, stretched towards him and kissed him on his cheek and instantly snapped out and ran away from his sight…….

He was shocked by her sudden kiss and rubbed his cheek in disbelief……."what was that??" he was confused to the core……

He quickly rushed and tried to catch up with her…….but she was already in Rathod's place surrounded by the entire team……all set to discuss the case!

His gaze was only on her…She was standing between Chotu and Sameer……He knew she was avoiding his eyes……but he had to talk to her……Before Sameer started briefing, Arjun spoke out in a stern voice……"Riya,mujhe kuch baat karni hai……zara idhar aana…."

Chotu and Shree raised their eyebrows and looked at each other….

But Riya wasn't giving up so soon……"Sir, pehle case discuss karle……sameer sir wait kar rahe hai….."

Sameer voiced in favor of Riya…."haan Arjun [he purposefully avoided calling him Rawte],  kaam ke baat pehle kar lethe hain…..baaki baatein hoti hi rahegi….." [Seeing Chotu and Shree's grin and meaningful nods, sameer turned to them and in a loud voice] now FOCUS team…..

On the other hand, Arjun was fuming inside…….he was not used to such negative replies nor rejections……..but he had no other go….he had to let the matter rest for some more time……but he, himself didn't know what he was going to ask her……"Riya, why did you kiss me??" was that a question?? He smacked himself…..or would he ask "Riya, what were you thinking when you did that??"  How could he ask such odd questions to her??? What would she think?? He was in a strange fix!

Asking questions to criminals and accused were damn simple, he smirked to himself! Never once had he faltered like this when he asked them questions

Arjun Rawte, the super cop was confused and entangled in stupid questions…… the guy, who never once got distracted from the case was thinking of weird silly things………ridiculous!!

 He seriously had to get out of all that and get into the case……..He brushed aside all other thoughts and concentrated on Sameer…….but once in a while, his eyes darted towards the lady who had done her bit of mischief and almost succeeded in knocking down the great Arjun Rawte's heart!

She stood there as if nothing happened…..as if nothing of this was even remotely related to her…She didn't even look at him…….for him, the worst part was that she looked normal and unperturbed…….

…She stood with her favorite diary, picking up instant notes and also occasionally showing off her proficiency in percentages and averages….……her indifferent attitude irked him too much that he clenched his jaws and turned away to face the wall as he usually did while discussions……

 

Riya's POV:

Well what did he know about the storm she was having inside her???she knew what he wanted to talk to her……but she purposefully avoided talking to him at that moment just to give it some time……some time to think sensibly and come up with a possible reason for her gesture……..yes, she herself didn't know why did that in the first place…..it was in an impulse that she did that…….it wasn't pre planned at all…….Fortunately for her, even if it was unknowingly, Sameer sir did her a great help by seconding her……moreover, she didn't want to talk about it here…..

But yeah, she will talk it out and clear the air…..she wanted to clear it off her head……Only talking openly would solve it….else it would remain like a dust in the eye always…..she, herself wished to understand it better……and yeah, she didn't want Arjun to think that she had thrown herself onto him just like that……naaah….it wasn't that easy to get me back Sir.……though she spoke loads about feminism, in this matter, she wanted all initiatives from his side..…….He shouldn't think that her kiss meant that she was ready for everything……she wanted to be sure of his feelings for her…..she wanted to know it from him that he loved her and wanted her as a wife……..she wanted a pakka confirmation that he was ready to move on in life with her as his wife……..

 

 Unaware of all these hidden scenes, Sameer was explaining the case…….

Hum sab resort se iss tour group ke saath usi bus mein nikhlenge………kal ke tour mein, almost dus spots cover hoga……..[handing few sheets of paper to Riya, Chotu and Shree] hum iss plan ke isaab se, koyi ek spot mein uthar jaayenge….i have talked to the tour guide….they don't mind if people start venturing on their own…….its just that they wont delay the bus for us……..…

But hum sab ek saath nahi jaayenge……Arjun aur Riya ek stop mein……main aur Sona ek stop mein……Shree aur chotu koyi aur spot………wahaan utharne ke baad, hum privately sab jagah ke teek se security checking karenge……par haan, sab kuch undercover hi hoga…….kisi ko koyi shak nahi……we go as tourists and come back also as tourists.….so, end of the day, hum sab isi bus mein paunch jaayenge…….last stop, and wahaan se time of departure, sab details iss sheet mein hai……

Koyi confusions nahi hone chahiye………sab ko yahoi lagna chahiye ke humhe uss jagah mein kuch aur dher rukhna tha….tho isiliye rukh gaye…………Is that clear??

All nod to him………he disperses the meet and then looks up at Riya……..aur Riya, maine pehle bhi kahaa tha ke Sir Sir bulaana chod dho…….koyi sunlega toh shak hoga……..kam se kam Arjun ko Sir matth bulaavo……..its your duty Riya!!!

Riya: hmmm…..[nods and looks at Arjun who is standing with his back to her]

Sameer: good…..dinner time…..[calls out to Sonali] Sona, Dinner???

Sonali: yes Sam…….food aa gaya hai…..aa jaavo tum sab…..

[All take their plates and serve themselves…..Arjun is aloof and he doesn't mingle much…..Riya feels a little bad for avoiding him……She was standing withShree and Chotu or Sonali most of the time not giving him a chance…..she kept checking if he is eating but he didn't move from his place……..even when Sameer offered him company, he just smiled and said that he will eat after some time…..She knew he was angry with her……So she serves a plate for him and goes towards him]

Riya: sir…..[immediately changes] Arjun……

Arjun: [his hands folded across his chest, turns to her] haan Riya?

Riya: [holding the plate to him] aapka dinner??

Arjun: mujhe abi bhook nahi hai Riya…..

Riya: main jaanthi hoom aap gussaa ho…….par khaana kha….[he gestures her to stop and takes the plate from her]

[Arjun looks at the items on the plate and wonders how well she knew his likes and dislikes….……he had never once given her the chance of knowing him better….then how did she manage to know it all……..all of a sudden, he felt guilty….he didn't know anything about her….her likes or dislikes…..He looked at her and she wasn't looking at him……She was looking lost in some deep thoughts……]

Arjun: [as he took the first bite] tumne khaaliya???

Riya: nahi bas abhi….[hoping that he would feed her but it was too early for that…….she also knew it but what could she do with her heart that was hopelessly hoping for such romantic gestures from him….pyar kya kuch nahi karvaatha…….kya kya umeedh karne par majhboor kartha hai!]

Arjun: [pointing towards the food table] jaao khaalo…..

Riya: Arjun…woh……[hesitantly tries to start speaking]

Arjun: nahi…yahaan nahi…...pehle dinner karlo…..phir…..[Riya stops speaking and goes to the table]

She joins back Shree and chotu…they chat away happily and don't seem to get tired of their efforts to irritate and make fun of Riya!!  

Arjun keeps glancing at the whole group and is amused by the playfulness…..He wonders what was so funny…… he says to himself they never fail to entertain her….make her smile and laugh so much…….She seems to forget herself when she is in their company……He wondered if he would ever succeed in doing that……

Once Riya finished her dinner, Arjun comes to the group……"Chalen Riya??"

Riya suddenly felt a jolt inside her……The thought that they would be left with just each other was giving butterflies in her stomach! "itni jaldi??" she replied looking at him and then at Shree and Chotu as if seeking their help to stay on for some more time…..

Shree: haan sir, itni jaldi kya hai?? kuch dher aur rukhiye na???

Arjun: [clenching his jaws but controls himself] nahi……..raat bohat ho chukhi hai……aur mujhe neend bhi aa rahi hai!!

Chotu: [not leaving any chance to irritate him] toh aap chaliye na Sir?……[Arjun looks at Riya and so CHotu adds]...dont worry……hum Ri ko chodh dhenge….

Sameer: [adding more oil to the fire] waise Arjun, tumhe neend kabse aane lagi???

Arjun gave him a "tum bhi Rathod?" look and glared at him……

Shree: Arre sir, aisi trip mein hi toh hum enjoy kar sakthe hai na???

Sameer: [all eager to help his friend] bas guys, usse pakao matth……jaane dho…

Arjun: main chaltha hoom…..[turning to Riya] agar tumhe rukhna hai, toh rukh jaao…[pointing at Shree and Chotu]…jab yeh sab masti se mann barein tab aa jaana……[He steps out]

Riya: [understanding that he is annoyed with all this….] ek minute Arjun…[turning to the group]….Shree, Chotu, main bhi chalti hoom….mujhe na bohat neend aa rahi hai…….travel ke wajeh se bhi tired hoom…..kal subah milthe hai…..

Shree: [letting out a deep sigh and posing to be sad] teek hai….

[After Riya and Arjun leave]

Shree: ab hero chale gaye toh phir heroine ka pehar yahaan zameen pe kaise tikhegi…[winks]…samjhe ya samjaavum?? [they give a hi 5 and turn to face an angry face…..] Sameer Sir!!! [Shree almost screams like he had seen a ghost]

Sameer: bas hogaya??? [shree and Chotu nod while Sameer continues] ab tum dono bhi jaaao….[as they leave, he speaks up].Shree, yahaan ke security services ke baare mein jo bhi information nikhaal sakthe ho, nikhaalo……ab Riya toh kuch khaas kar nahi paayegi……[Shree nods and leaves]

[He literally drives them both out]

Once out, Shree imitates Sameer Sir and voices in his tone "Riya bechaari akheli kya kya Karein?? Ek sher ko sambaalna kuch kam hai kya?"

Chotu: [grinning] waise Shree, aaj toh humne Arjun sir ko kuch zyaada hi pakaa diya na??

Shree: hmm…..par koyi nahi….Ri sab kuch sambhaal legi…… dekha nahi, kaise beegi billi ke tarah Riya ke aage peeche ghoom rahe teh!!!

Chotu: toh kya sher ab billi hogaya???

Shree: lag toh aisa hi hai!!!! Dekhte hai!!!

They laugh and walk towards their room…

*************************************************************************

Our hero and heroine are walking silently…….Riya coughs and tries starting the conversation……She knows how awkward it would be for Arjun…..moreover, it was her responsibility and necessity that she explains her behavior…….She stealthily turns sideways to have a look at him….He was walking casually with his hands in his pocket……he seemed to be enjoying the night and the cool weather!

Riya: [closing in her jacket even tightly] aap itna matth sochiya Sir……I mean mera kiss karne ka galath matlab matth nikhaaliye…….

Arjun stops and looks at her enquiringly……"this girl will drive me nuts….pehle kiss karthi hai, aur ab!!!" but he waits for her to finish whatever she wanted to say

Riya: aap toh jaante ho ke hum kabhi dhost bhi nahi ban paaye…..….aur suddenly yeh shaadi…….phir yeh trip…….sab kuch itna achaanak ke main kuch samajh hi nahi paahi…….bohat confused thi iss relationship se….kya, kaise sab kuch unclear tha….…….bohat awkward aur uncomfortable feel kar rahi thi…….sach kahoom tho, mujhse zyaada mujhe aapki chintha ho rahi thi…I was scared of even facing you..…...par jab aapne , thodey rudely hi sahi, woh sab kahaa…[both get visions of the scene when Arjun told her that he didn't have a problem sharing the room with her]…mujhe bohat accha lagaa… …bohat zyaadha excited hogayi thi……isi khushi aur excitement mein…[pausing]…..u know what I mean, na? I couldn't contain my happiness and…..[looks at him without completing her statement]

Arjun was slightly impressed with her clear talk…."WOW…..yeh ladki jo apne bakwaas baat se sab ko confuse karthi hai, woh aaj itne matured baat kar rahi hai…."

Though it brought within him a slight disappointment that there was no romantic inclination for her gesture, he smiled at her innocent face…….

But before he could speak out something, she screamed "WOW…….woh dekhiye……."

She didn't wait for him to turn around and see what that was…….she just ran quickly towards the direction………out of the pathway, into the lawn, into the area where there was thick bushes and trees…….Arjun was puzzled and ran behind her "Riya…..rukho….kahaan jaa rahi ho???? Suno, akele matth jaao…."

As he entered the place, he saw the sight that fascinated her…..it was a fire fly which was flying around a short but thick bush……..as she neared the bush, by her touch or the sound of her foot steps, a whole lot of fire flies started flying around……..the bush was the home for a group of them………it started flying around the bush, around her…….

More than the fire flies, the sight which enchanted him was her……she looked beautiful aidst them……the light from them accentuated her beauty…..her oval face, her slender, lean body……..it was the first time that Arjun saw her in such a light…….He had never ever seen her like this or perhaps never paid so much attention to her……She looked like an angel from heaven jumping around trying to capture the light within her palms……hazaaron diye se sajaa hua mehfil ki pari lag rahi thi Riya……..

He stood still and his eyes were only fixed focused on her…...

But Riya was in a world of her own……she looked at Arjun "aisa nazaara kabhi Mumbai mein nahi milega….its just awesome……aap bhi aayiye na??" [she gestured him to come closer]

Arjun, as if hypnotized by her gesture….He walked towards her subconsciously……there were just 2 steps between them…….She didn't seem to be affected by Arjun's state…….all of a sudden, may be by Arjun's entry, the fire flies disappeared……Riya exclaimed childishly "arre kahaan gaye sab??"

She turned to Arjun in a complaining attitude "dekhiye na……aap aaye aur sab darr ke chale gaye!!" but he was silent and only then did she understand the effect all this was having on him…….his admiration for her was clearly evident in his eyes……she lowered her eyes blushing……her heart was playing weirdly with her….it seemed to skip beats in between…….

As if taking a clue to their hesitation…….the lights in the garden went off all of a sudden and it was all pitch dark………horrified, Riya just went into his arms…….She just put her hands around him and held him tightly……….He didnt respond immediately……but the sudden close encounter made him alive in love! The passion, the love, the attraction, the desire for a woman which had died with Roshni's death seemed to sprang up to life…all those dormant emotions came back and he responded to her hug in the most unexpected way……His hands went around her waist and he pulled her closer to him……burying his face into her neck……….breathing in the fragrance of her soft curly hair………he nuzzled deep into her……….She forgot all her resolves and responded with the same passion…….

His breath on her ears was sending shivers into her……she closed her eyes tightly…….the cold breeze that engulfed them was playing like a extra stimulant…..they held onto each other as if they were just one…Slowly, he parted from her and leaned forward once again closer to her lips, her closed eyes and her innocent face made him smile…….with a naughty smile, he stopped mid way and kissed her ears………she trembled…….As the passion grew, something strange and quite unexpected happened……visions of Roshni came to him……he whispered "Roshni"

That broke the moment……..it shattered Riya's heart into a zillion pieces…It brought her back into her senses….She seemed to have gone to a dream land for a few moments and now she was grounded with a heartbreak….She withdrew immediately……straightened her dress, brushed away the loose locks of hair on her face…..by then the lights had come back too…….

Riya: Sir, lets go back…..[she wasn't accusing him for it…….she blamed herself for being hasty!]

Arjun: [really shocked at whatever happened….he didn't understand why he acted like that in the first place…how could he lose control? What would Riya be thinking? And the visions of Roshni and also her painful death had somehow made him recoil back into his shell] hmmm…..chalo…….

They continue their walk to their cottage….but this time, their hearts continuosly speaking to each other…..and the pulses going random……they so wanted to talk and explain but something prevented…..this silence was worse than a thousand drums playing at the same time….and seemed like a serenity before a big storm!!

Precap: introducing a new character Rohan…….

[To be continued]

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awesome part... waiting for more... continue soon... thnx for PM

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awsome update
waiting for next part
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amazing as usual!!! Thumbs Up so next rohan will make arjun jealous?? 

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