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michelle281194

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 3:40am | IP Logged
This is just an OS whose idea I got from that article that says Shiv will make Anandi a servant after marriage. Kuch bhi! Anyway, here goes-

Backdrop: Epidemic is over, Jagya has not yet met CM and CM has gone to Udaipur for some work. In my head, Anandi knows that Shiv loves her, they've been on their day trip and she likes him too. They call each other Shiv and Anandi.

Shiv is driving Anandi home from school. It is routine for him to pick her up after both of them are done at school and work.

S: Toh Anandi, aap aaj mere liye dinner layengi na? Woh Choti Maa bhi nahi hai..
A: Um.. Woh mujhe.. Ghar mein zaruri kaam hai aaj.. Main Makhan Kaka ke haath dibba bhijwa dungi..
S: Ok... Ouch

Anandi doesn't want to bring food for Shiv because she knows CM doesn't like this. Shiv is disappointed. After the long fight against the epidemic, this would have been the first time that AnSh could have spent with each other. It had been so long since they both had had a nice conversation with each other. He missed her.. 'But obviously, she doesn't miss me!', thought Shiv.
Anandi wanted to spend time with Shiv but she felt it would be disrespectful to CM to do so. They reach Badi Haveli and Shiv goes on to Circuit House.

A: (in her room) Shiv kitne dukhi lag rahe the.. Woh akele pad gaye hain. Choti Maa bhi nahi hai aur main bhi.. Par main kya karu? Confused

The rest of the day, Anandi puts her heart into cooking for Shiv. She makes all the dishes that she knows he loves. Even engrossed in work, she keeps thinking about him. She wants to meet him!

A: Main unhe sirf dibba dekar toh aa hi sakti hu..

Anandi reaches CH with the food but there is a lock on the door. She is disappointed and feels that Shiv went out to eat without telling her. Shiv had gone for an evening walk out of boredom and met someone on the way. Now, he was rushing home.

S: Makhan Ji mere liye khana lekar ruke honge!

As he approaches the house, he is surprised to see Anandi standing outside the door, looking at the lock in anger. Angry

A: Yeh Shiv khud ko kya samajhte hai? Maine unke liye itne pyaar se itna sab banaya aur woh mujhe bina bataye bahar chale gaye? Maine keh kya diya ki main nahi aaungi toh unhone intezaar bhi nahi kiya! Mujhe unse milna tha.. Unki yaad aa rahi thi mujhe! Ek phone toh kar sakte the! Unhe toh meri yaad hi nahi aati.. Ab main unse bilkul baat nahi karungi! Angry

She turns around to leave and walks straight into Shiv. He is very happy to know that she misses him too! As he opens the door and invites her in-

S: Main toh sirf walk ke liye gaya tha.. Mujhe kya pata tha ki aap mujhe surprise dene aayi hai.. Main toh soch mein pad gaya tha ki Makhan Ji ne aaj ghagra-choli kyu peheni hai! (laughs) LOL

Anandi is still angry and a little embarrassed. She replies with a 'Hmph'.

S: Aap sach mein mujhse baat nahi karengi? Heart

Anandi just hands him the tiffin and begins to leave. Shiv takes her by the hand and pulls her close. Anandi gasps.. Shiv's eyes are like pools of deep, dark water. He whispers...

S: Please Anandi? Mere saath khana toh khaiye.. Smile

Anandi is lost in Shiv's eyes and follows him to the table. They both sit and Anandi serves enough food for both of them in one plate.

S:  I'm very sorry Anandi.. Mujhe pata nahi tha ki aap bhi mujhe miss kar rahi hai.. I missed you too.. Kya aap please mujhe maaf karke mujhse baat karengi? (with a stunning smile) Please? Embarrassed

Captivated, Anandi's heart hammers and she smiles-

A: Theek hai. Chaliye hum khana kha lete hai..

Shiv sees a fresh cut on Anandi's finger. She tells him that it happened while she was preparing food for him today.

S: Aapko mere liye itna sab banane ki kya zarurat thi? Ab aap khayengi kaise?

Anandi laughs and says that its not such a big deal. But Shiv sighs and begins to feed her..! AnSh spend the evening like this, feeding each other and talking about their day and.. the future. Embarrassed

S: Anandi, hum honeymoon ke liye kahaan jayenge?

Shiv is just joking and expects Anandi to be mortified. But Anandi had been thinking about this herself but felt shy to bring it up. When he asks her suddenly, she blurts out-

A: Manali chalein? Embarrassed

Looking at Shiv's suprise, she realises that he was kidding and feels embarrassed.

S: Um.. Wow.. Manali? Haan sure.. Wow, that's very romantic Anandi.. Big smile

Anandi is now red as a beetroot. She fumbles with the empty plates and takes them to the sink. Shiv follows her into the kitchen. But when she begins to wash the utensils-

S: Anandi yeh aap kya kar rahi hai? Chodiye ye sab!
A: Main toh bas..
S: Aap meri mangetar hai, naukar nahi! Yeh bartan maine istemaal kiye hai toh main hi inhe dhounga..
A: (impressed and elated) Par maine bhi toh khana khaya hai!
S: Par banaya bhi toh aapne tha! Aapke haath mein chot bhi lagi hai. Bas, aap bartan nahi dhoyengi! Angry

Shiv is washing the dishes while Anandi looks on lovingly.

A: Aap shaadi ke baad bhi mujhe apna koi kaam nahi karne denge?
S: Aisa nahi hai Anandi.. Aap bas yeh mat sochiye ki mere kaam karna aapki koi zimmedari hai.
A: Aisi koi baat nahi hai. Mujhe aapke liye kuch bhi karna achcha lagta hai!
S: (smiles) Mujhe bhi! Toh hum dono shaadi ke baad saare kaam mil-baatkar karenge, ok?
A: Hmm.. Soch lijiye, Mr Shivraj Shekhar, main aapse ghar ke saare kaam karwaungi.. (laughing) LOL

Wiping his hands with a towel, Shiv walks towards Anandi. She has her back to the fridge. Shiv puts his hands on either side of her face. His face is inches away from hers. She gasps and her heart is beating really hard.

S: Jo hukum mere aaka.. Main toh aapka gulam hu.. Par mujhe salary deni padegi.. Evil Smile
A: Salary? Kitni?
S: Itni. (kisses her cheek) aur woh bhi har roz! (and he kisses her other cheek) Embarrassed

Anandi is blushing like hell and smiling in embarrassment. She pushes and he lets her go.

A: Aap bhi na.. Kuch bhi.. Embarrassed

They both head towards the door. Before Shiv can offer to leave her home, Anandi asks-

A: Aaj aap mujhe chhodne nahi aayenge, gulam ji?
S: Zaroor! Chaliye..

They walk to Badi Haveli in the beautiful moonlight and say good night to each other. As Shiv turns around to go..

A: Gulam Ji, aap inaam liye bina hi jaa rahe hai..? Embarrassed

Anandi is smiling. Shiv is happy to see that she likes him too.. More than a friend. He kisses her on the forehead and says-

S: Iss thankwa par toh main zindagi bhar aapki gulami karunga.. Maalkin bhi toh itni pyaari hai!
A: (laughing) par yaad rakhiyega, ab zindagibhar ek hi boss hai aapki!

She says this with a hint of insecurity and Shiv completely understands her feelings. He smiles, kisses her cheek and says-

S: Yes Ma'am! Smile

That night, they both fall asleep dreaming of a future lifetime of servitude to each other.. Beginning with the dishes and ending with the kisses. Embarrassed Blushing Heart

THE END.

Thank you for reading. Hope you liked it.


Edited by michelle281194 - 15 October 2012 at 3:40am

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 3:52am | IP Logged
Wow it's so sweet.Good jobClap

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 3:53am | IP Logged
Thank you for this Michelle! With the current track and the stupid news seggies, was getting depressed... 

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 3:57am | IP Logged
Wow ! Its so lovely dear Embarrassed Clap
kaash ye sab J dekh raha hota LOL LOL

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 4:04am | IP Logged
Great, a big sigh of relief, between all negatives stories going around our sweet ansh

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 4:28am | IP Logged
Yeh hui na baat...but seriously have not watched BV since last few episodes and just thriving on WUs...this is not a sensible serial anymore...one watches to relax and not get hyped up all the time...and nowhere in the world people are as unrealistic as in this track now...pal mein tosha pal mein mashaAngry

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 5:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by piya_anshian

Wow ! Its so lovely dear Embarrassed Clap
kaash ye sab J dekh raha hota LOL LOL
even i had thought of that but i've had enuf of J in the show... FF se toh usko dooor rakhu LOL

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 5:26am | IP Logged
Really nice and sweet OS. I love beginning with dishes and ending with kisses...loved it.

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