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Gisel

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 3:16am | IP Logged

The light inside is only from the window casting the moonlight nail biting

.
Tamil walks to the TV and tries switching it on. After some buffering it comes on. He sits on the bed watching news Angry

. Thulasi comes and sits next to him.

Tamil, "Cha. Remote illa."
Thulasi, "Irunthutha matum LOL

."
Tamil, "Kalaikriya?"

Thulasi, "Cha. Cha. Nan ein ungala kalaika porein? Neenga TV parunga"

Tamil keeps on watching TV Angry

.
Thulasi looks around, bored Ouch

and lies on his shoulders, "Einga..*hic*...sorry...*hic*...anga...*hic*"

Tamil looks around he sees a coke bottle by the window still.
He takes it and gives it to Thulasi.
She drinks it, "Ithu...*hic*...vera mathiri taste...*hic*... Shocked

Tamil takes the bottle from her and smells it (Itha Thulasi kudakirathuku munadi pannirkialamai.)
Thulasi shakes her head, holding her forehead *hic*.

Tamil, "Thulasi..."

Thulasi looks at him vaguely. *hic* Shocked

Tamil, "Thulasi..." shakes her not knowing what to do!

Thulasi, "Ena kuttipa? Shocked

" twirling the bangs on his forehead.

Tamil, "Thulasi calm down, nee kudichathu coke illa... Shocked

Thulasi, "*hic* theirumai...seri atha vidu Confused

*hic* inaiku mall la ena patheinu theriyuma?*hic*"

Tamil, "Charu...vaa?" carefully framing his sentence.

(Is this how you frame your sentence carefully? How on earth did you know Charu was there?)

Thulasi looks at him puzzled and intoxicated.

Thulasi, "Charu inga enga vantha? Shocked

"
(Sir! Ungaluku inaiku adi confirm!)

Thodarum!

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Edited by Gisel - 27 October 2012 at 3:49am

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 7:28am | IP Logged

Thanks Gisel for Part 13 and 14... Beautifully written...

P/D romance is so beautifully build upon... So sweet to read this.. As Jeya said... CV's please read..

TAku irunthaalum lollu thaangala... Why is he talking about Charu?? Is he assuming or did he saw her

Waiting for next part

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Hahaha Charu vaa? ROFL

Superb TA, how I wish to see this scene on TV Day Dreaming

TA needs many beats, hope Thulasi gives him nicely LOL

Why vera veetla drinks eduthu drinking?? What if there is poison? Confused

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Gisel

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Poison a?

It is alcohol! Tongue

Edited by Gisel - 19 November 2012 at 1:45am

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 9:46am | IP Logged

oh gisel, what is this.. nitish's ideal..alcohol in coke bottle..rofl..

and of all the things to carefully talk, TA says this...looks like he is really worried abt the blr trip and abt T spotting the wrong person...

waiting...

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 2:01pm | IP Logged

Lol oh wow just caught up with the parts I missed and wow its super!! What did Tulasi intake?

Ahem ahem Gisel, you write a romantic scene for Deepa and Prabha but not TT...lol...me waiting for something for TT.

I like the way you switch between sides.

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Deepa goes and sits on a rock, tired at the day's happenings. The josiyar's words echoes to her Ouch

Praba, "Ena achu Deepa?"

Deepa, "Huh?..onum illanga"

Praba, "Hm..pasikitha?"

Deepa, "Huh? Illa. Ungaluku pasikutha? Dikeyla sapadu iruku."

Praba opens the dickey, "Ena koduvanthiruka?"

Deepa gets up, "Biryani drooling

" as she takes a lunch box.

Praba, "Wow! Super! Romba pasikithu. Thanks Deepa."

Deepa opens the lunch box and gives him a spoon.

Praba, "Ena Deepa ithu? Palaya sathaum? Confused

Deepa, "Illa ga. Ithu Ice biryani Tongue

. Palaya sathathila vengayam, mulavaka elam potu. Solumbothei naku urala? LOL

Praba, "Ena Deepa ithu? Ippidi eimathitiya... Ouch

" disappointed takes a bite.

Deepa, "Epdi iruku?" Praba keeps the lunch box on the car slowly savoring the taste, "Ah! Ah! Ouch

Deepa, "Ena achu? Katha thinga Ena mirgam lan varapothunu theriyala LOL

Praba, "Thani...Thani...Mulaha...ah..." stamping his foot like a toddler LOL

Deepa, "Katha thinga!" Praba keeps on shouting, "Uh?" Deepa kisses him on his lips surprise

. Her eyes closed. His eyes open in shock Wink

. (

Pakathila than river. Caru kula coke kudu irunthithu Tongue

)

****

Tamil, "Paru un vikal niniduchu. Sleepy

"Thulasi, "Oh! Seri manchitein. Oru super dress.." siting on the bed and drinking from the coke bottle again Shocked

, "Itho ithondu. Romba alaga irunthichu theriyuma."Tamil takes the bottle from her and keeps it aside, "Appo atha vangirkalam la. Sleepy

"Thulasi, "Yaruku? Ungaluka LOL

?"Tamil trying to keep her steady, "Lavanya kolantheiku kuduthirkalam Dead

." sits next to her.Thulasi looks at him angrily, "Po ya..ne elam...Po poi TV paru surprise

."Tamil, "Ena ma muniyama lan velile vara? Tongue

"Thulasi again looks at him angrily and leans towards him looking at his lips. Tamil a little frightened leans back still sitting hee hee

, "Vendam thulasi..." looks here and there for help Tongue

.*Thunder*(Sorry pa! Athuka approm ena nadanthichunu theriyala. Camera shows the moon and the eerie forest. The bats pause while flying. The lightening stays still...)Both of them are lying on the bed. Thulasi is sleeping on his hands Embarrassed

. Tamil, "Thulasi!" Thulasi, "Hm?"Tamil, "Nee kudichathu coke illa..." Thulasi, "Theriyum"Tamil, "Ana thums up. Shocked

" Thulasi, "Theriyum Shocked

" Tamil, "Huh? LOL

"Thulasi laughs, still eyes closed LOL

. Just then they hear a loud shriek Shocked

Thodarum!

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wow...good..TA using terror-like trick to cure T's hiccups..he is aware of the halloween week i guess...

great downpour..glad it is only thumps up switched for cola or is it something i missed?

waiting for next...

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