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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 3:16am | IP Logged


The light inside is only from the window casting the moonlightnail biting.
Tamil walks to the TV and tries switching it on. After some buffering it comes on. He sits on the bed watching newsAngry. Thulasi comes and sits next to him. 
Tamil, "Cha. Remote illa.
Thulasi, "
Irunthutha matumLOL.
Tamil, "
Kalaikriya?"
Thulasi, "Cha. Cha. Nan ein ungala kalaika porein? Neenga TV parunga"
Tamil keeps on watching TVAngry.
Thulasi looks around, boredOuch and lies on his shoulders,
 "Einga..*hic*...sorry...*hic*...anga...*hic*"
Tamil looks around he sees a coke bottle by the window still.
He takes it and gives it to Thulasi. 
She drinks it, "Ithu...*hic*...vera mathiri taste...*hic*...Shocked"
Tamil takes the bottle from her and smells it (Itha Thulasi kudakirathuku munadi pannirkialamaiAngry.)
Thulasi shakes her head, holding her forehead *hic*.
Tamil, "Thulasi..."
Thulasi looks at him vaguely. *hic*Shocked 
Tamil, "Thulasi..." shakes her not knowing what to do!
Thulasi, "Ena kuttipa?Shocked" twirling the bangs on his forehead.
Tamil,  "Thulasi calm down, nee kudichathu coke illa...Shocked"
Thulasi, "*hic* theirumai...seri atha viduConfused *hic* inaiku mall la ena patheinu theriyuma?*hic*"
Tamil, "Charu...vaa?" carefully framing his sentence.
(Is this how you frame your sentence carefullyAngry? How on earth did you know Charu was thereConfused?)
Thulasi looks at him puzzled and intoxicated.
Thulasi, "Charu inga enga vantha?Shocked"
(
Sir! Ungaluku inaiku adi confirmTongue!)

Thodarum!



Edited by Gisel - 27 October 2012 at 3:49am

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 7:28am | IP Logged
Thanks Gisel for Part 13 and 14... Beautifully written... Hug
 
P/D romance is so beautifully build upon... So sweet to read this.. As Jeya said... CV's please read..Tongue
 
TAku irunthaalum lollu thaangala... Why is he talking about Charu?? Is he assuming or did he saw herShockedConfused??
 
Waiting for next partBig smile

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 7:43am | IP Logged
Hahaha Charu vaa? ROFL Superb TA, how I wish to see this scene on TV Day DreamingOuch TA needs many beats, hope Thulasi gives him nicely LOL Why vera veetla drinks eduthu drinking?? What if there is poison? Confused

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 9:37am | IP Logged
Poison a? Shocked
It is alcohol! Tongue

Edited by Gisel - 19 November 2012 at 1:45am

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 9:46am | IP Logged
oh gisel,  what is this.. nitish's ideal..alcohol in coke bottle..rofl..
and of all the things to carefully talk, TA says this...looks like he is really worried abt the blr trip and abt T spotting the wrong person...
waiting...

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
Lol oh wow just caught up with the parts I missed and wow its super!!  What did Tulasi intake?

Ahem ahem Gisel, you write a romantic scene for Deepa and Prabha but not TT...lol...me waiting for something for TT.

I like the way you switch between sides. 

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Deepa goes and sits on a rock, tired at the day's happenings. The josiyar's words echoes to herOuch.
Praba, "Ena achu Deepa?"
Deepa, "Huh?..onum illanga"
Praba, "Hm..pasikitha?"
Deepa, "Huh? Illa. Ungaluku pasikutha? Dikeyla sapadu iruku."
Praba opens the dickey, "Ena koduvanthiruka?"
Deepa gets up, "Biryanidrooling" as she takes a lunch box.
Praba, "Wow! Super! Romba pasikithu. Thanks Deepa."
Deepa opens the lunch box and gives him a spoon.
Praba, "Ena Deepa ithu? Palaya sathaum?Confused"
Deepa, "Illa ga. Ithu Ice biryaniTongue. Palaya sathathila vengayam, mulavaka elam potu. Solumbothei naku urala?LOL"
Praba, "Ena Deepa ithu? Ippidi eimathitiya...Ouch" disappointed takes a bite.
Deepa, "Epdi iruku?" Praba keeps the lunch box on the car slowly savoring the taste, "Ah! Ah!Ouch"
Deepa, "Ena achu? Katha thinga Ena mirgam lan varapothunu theriyalaLOL."
Praba, "Thani...Thani...Mulaha...ah..." stamping his foot like a toddlerLOL.
Deepa, "Katha thinga!" Praba keeps on shouting, "Uh?" Deepa kisses him on his lipssurprise. Her eyes closed. His eyes open in shockWink. (raised eyebrowsPakathila than river. Caru kula coke kudu irunthithuTongue

****
Tamil, "Paru un vikal niniduchu.Sleepy"
Thulasi, "Oh! Seri manchitein. Oru super dress.." siting on the bed and drinking from the coke bottle againShocked, "Itho ithondu. Romba alaga irunthichu theriyuma."
Tamil takes the bottle from her and keeps it aside, "Appo atha vangirkalam la.Sleepy"
Thulasi, "Yaruku? UngalukaLOL?"
Tamil trying to keep her steady, "Lavanya kolantheiku kuduthirkalamDead." sits next to her.
Thulasi looks at him angrily, "Po ya..ne elam...Po poi TV parusurprise."
Tamil, "Ena ma muniyama lan velile vara?Tongue"
Thulasi again looks at him angrily and leans towards him looking at his lips. Tamil a little frightened leans back still sittinghee hee, "Vendam thulasi..." looks here and there for helpTongue.
*Thunder*
(Sorry pa! Athuka approm ena nadanthichunu theriyalaTongue. Camera shows the moon and the eerie forest. The bats pause while flying. The lightening stays still...Tongue)
Both of them are lying on the bed. Thulasi is sleeping on his handsEmbarrassed
Tamil, "Thulasi!" Thulasi, "Hm?"
Tamil, "Nee kudichathu coke illa..." Thulasi, "Theriyum"
Tamil, "Ana thums up.Shocked" Thulasi, "TheriyumShocked"  Tamil, "Huh?LOL"
Thulasi laughs, still eyes closedLOL. Just then they hear a loud shriekShocked

Thodarum!

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wow...good..TA using terror-like trick to cure T's hiccups..he is aware of the halloween week i guess...
 
great downpour..glad it is only thumps up switched for cola or is it something i missed?
waiting for next...
 

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