FF-Hail Storm in Thendral! (Page 10)

Nixkie IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 9:28am | IP Logged
Omg Gisel...i didn't stop reading after starting!...what a great job...feel through out was anyone going to save them or are u going to give us twistTongue...waiting for next!

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Pearl. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 10:18am | IP Logged
Good one GiselClap... very scary now... Is someone going to come to that house nowShocked? Can't wait for the next one.

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MindFreezer Goldie

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 11:04am | IP Logged
Wow so goodClap nerulle pakure maari iruku, greatClap waiting for the next part...

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Gisel Goldie

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 1:19am | IP Logged

Deepa grasps Praba's armEmbarrassed and looks at him nervously. There is an eerie silence and all they can hear is the river flowing and the hail tapping on the metallic car hood. Praba pats her hand and motions her to be silentEmbarrassed
Deepa, now aware that she is holding Praba, lets gostraight face, only to hold him again.Tongue Praba notices itEmbarrassed.
He whispers to her, "Car a vita vellila pogalam." Deepa nods no
Praba pats her hand again and assures herErmm, motioning her to open her door. She tries to open it but can'tConfused because a tree's trunk is blocking her wayOuch
Praba opens his door and comes out and then holds Deepa helping her come out through his doorWink(Please don't leave your key insideWink). Deepa holds him and comes out the car. She looses her balance and falls on PrabaShocked, who also looses his balanceShocked and both of them fall downhee hee. Deepa lies on Praba's chest hearing his heartbeat. A minute passes. The moon, the flowing river, the tree shielding the hail.
(Now, that is a scene to imagineDay Dreaming)
Praba holds her shouldersEmbarrassed. Deepa comes back to senses and gets up and looks awayEmbarrassed. Praba gets up too dusting his dress. A few hail falls near themOuch. Praba walks to the other side of the car near the tree. Deepa follows him. They stand close to each otherEmbarrassed. Just then a lightening strikes and there is a thunderWink. Deepa holds on to PrabaEmbarrassed. Deepa is very scared and on the verge of breaking into tearsShocked. Praba, after thinking twice, puts his hand around her, comforting herEmbarrassed. Something falls on her back slithering down from her shouldersI don't want to see
(Yikes! Is it a snake?nail biting)
Deepa is startled, screams and holds on to him tightly cryingCry. Praba, "Hei! Ena achu?" Deepa through her tears, "Theriyala! En mela etho...! Bayama iruku!Cry" and hugs him even more tightlyEmbarrassed.
Praba looks and sees a silhouette of a squirrel running awaywhew!. He breaks into a smile, "Una vida antha anil athigama baya patudichuTongue!" Deepa turns to see but nothing is there, "Anga onum illa.
Praba, "Ada athu nee kaththu natha pathu bayanthu poiduchu.LOL
Deepa slowly releases her grip but still holds on to himEmbarrassed *Sniff*, "Ippo ena panurathu? Night fulla ingaiya irrukanuma?Ouch Car kullaiya ukkanthirkalam.
Praba rubs off her tears gentlyEmbarrassed startling DeepaSmile, "Baya padathe. Enum 10 manineram carliya ukara poriya?Confused"


Edited by Gisel - 26 October 2012 at 1:21am

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vjayam Goldie

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 1:53am | IP Logged
great job gisel...the romance build up for deepa and prabha, in keeping with their relationship is amazing...
seriously u hv to put yr talent to good use...CT's listening?

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TTfan Goldie

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 7:58am | IP Logged
Good one Gisel... well explained.. interesting.. both TT/PD in between the highway..LOL waiting for next part..

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MindFreezer Goldie

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Lovely part GiselluStar, athu solli kathe thevai illai...the chemistry between them is so well defined, ama ippe TT and PD highway ille meet pannuvangela...can't wait for the next part...

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Shemmo IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
Nicee Gisel Clap So both on highway. Hope there is no animal or anything Shocked I hope both the couples meet LOL

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