FF-Hail Storm in Thendral! - Page 8

Hahaha super Gisel 😛 T&T caught in rain and P&D too... Hope someone comes and saves them. Too good written, very excited to know whats gonna happen. 😉Edited by Shamz. - 11 years ago

Omg Gisel...i didn't stop reading after starting!...what a great job...feel through out was super...is anyone going to save them or are u going to give us twist😛...waiting for next!

Good one Gisel👏... very scary now... Is someone going to come to that house now😲? Can't wait for the next one.

Wow so good👏 nerulle pakure maari iruku, great👏 waiting for the next part...

Deepa grasps Praba's arm😳 and looks at him nervously. There is an eerie silence and all they can hear is the river flowing and the hail tapping on the metallic car hood. Praba pats her hand and motions her to be silent😳. 

Deepa, now aware that she is holding Praba, lets go, only to hold him again.😛 Praba notices it😳.

He whispers to her, "Car a vita vellila pogalam." Deepa nods no. 

Praba pats her hand again and assures her🤔, motioning her to open her door. She tries to open it but can't😕 because a tree's trunk is blocking her way. 

Praba opens his door and comes out and then holds Deepa helping her come out through his door😉. (Please don't leave your key inside😉). Deepa holds him and comes out the car. She looses her balance and falls on Praba😲, who also looses his balance😲 and both of them fall down. Deepa lies on Praba's chest hearing his heartbeat. A minute passes. The moon, the flowing river, the tree shielding the hail.

(Now, that is a scene to imagine). 

Praba holds her shoulders😳. Deepa comes back to senses and gets up and looks away😳. Praba gets up too dusting his dress. A few hail falls near them. Praba walks to the other side of the car near the tree. Deepa follows him. They stand close to each other😳. Just then a lightening strikes and there is a thunder😉. Deepa holds on to Praba😳. Deepa is very scared and on the verge of breaking into tears😲. Praba, after thinking twice, puts his hand around her, comforting her😳. Something falls on her back slithering down from her shoulders

(Yikes! Is it a snake?)

Deepa is startled, screams and holds on to him tightly crying😭. Praba, "Hei! Ena achu?" Deepa through her tears, "Theriyala! En mela etho...! Bayama iruku!😭" and hugs him even more tightly😳.

Praba looks and sees a silhouette of a squirrel running away. He breaks into a smile, "Una vida antha anil athigama baya patudichu😛!" Deepa turns to see but nothing is there, "Anga onum illa." 

Praba, "Ada athu nee kaththu natha pathu bayanthu poiduchu.😆" 

Deepa slowly releases her grip but still holds on to him😳 *Sniff*, "Ippo ena panurathu? Night fulla ingaiya irrukanuma? Car kullaiya ukkanthirkalam." 

Praba rubs off her tears gently😳 startling Deepa😊, "Baya padathe. Enum 10 manineram carliya ukara poriya?😕"

Thodarum!

Edited by Gisel - 11 years ago

great job gisel...the romance build up for deepa and prabha, in keeping with their relationship is amazing...

Good one Gisel... well explained.. interesting.. both TT/PD in between the highway..😆 waiting for next part..

Lovely part Gisellu⭐️, athu solli kathe thevai illai...the chemistry between them is so well defined, ama ippe TT and PD highway ille meet pannuvangela...can't wait for the next part...

Nicee Gisel 👏 So both on highway. Hope there is no animal or anything 😲 I hope both the couples meet 😆

The light inside is only from the window casting the moonlight.
Tamil walks to the TV and tries switching it on. After some buffering it comes on. He sits on the bed watching news😡. Thulasi comes and sits next to him. 

Tamil, "Cha. Remote illa." 
Thulasi, "Irunthutha matum😆." 
Tamil, "Kalaikriya?"

Thulasi, "Cha. Cha. Nan ein ungala kalaika porein? Neenga TV parunga"

Tamil keeps on watching TV😡.
Thulasi looks around, bored and lies on his shoulders, "Einga..*hic*...sorry...*hic*...anga...*hic*"

Tamil looks around he sees a coke bottle by the window still.
He takes it and gives it to Thulasi. 
She drinks it, "Ithu...*hic*...vera mathiri taste...*hic*...😲"

Tamil takes the bottle from her and smells it (Itha Thulasi kudakirathuku munadi pannirkialamai😡.)
Thulasi shakes her head, holding her forehead *hic*.

Tamil, "Thulasi..."

Thulasi looks at him vaguely. *hic*😲 

Tamil, "Thulasi..." shakes her not knowing what to do!

Thulasi, "Ena kuttipa?😲" twirling the bangs on his forehead.

Tamil,  "Thulasi calm down, nee kudichathu coke illa...😲"

Thulasi, "*hic* theirumai...seri atha vidu😕 *hic* inaiku mall la ena patheinu theriyuma?*hic*"

Tamil, "Charu...vaa?" carefully framing his sentence.

(Is this how you frame your sentence carefully😡? How on earth did you know Charu was there😕?)

Thulasi looks at him puzzled and intoxicated.

Thulasi, "Charu inga enga vantha?😲"
(Sir! Ungaluku inaiku adi confirm😛!)

Thodarum!

Edited by Gisel - 11 years ago