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nature2

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 9:03pm | IP Logged
lovely start dips well written ClapClap
 
 
 

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 9:06pm | IP Logged
It was nice quite interesting yar.do continue and plz pm me.

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aish_swaron

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 9:16pm | IP Logged
The  first chapter was so awesum... 
jus loved it
it was nice they feeling comfortable with each other
and if im nt wrong i guess shan is swayam only. would love to know what happens next.
plz update fast

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swaron20

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 9:59pm | IP Logged
chapter 1 was awesome !!! Clap
loved it !!!! Smile 
waiting eagerly for the next part.
PM me wen u update.

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LuvAly_KriYansh

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
awesome update...
nice concept...
loved it...
thnx for pm...

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mrash

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 10:43pm | IP Logged

Hussshhh

Finally you update. But it was worth waiting. Nice start. Forced marriage to bring them together. And already thet are comfortable with each other.
 
Now please update fast.
 

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--Simren--

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
Awesome Concept and Amazing Chapter...Loved it...Thnkx for the PM dear and update the next chapter soon and do PM me as always.Star

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marauder

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
And Deepika you just nailed it. To see the story begin on such a interesting twist was simply amazing. Since we knew the concept so it was easy for us to understand what's going through Sharon's mind and why she wasn't happy. And your description did amazing job in explaining that to viewer. The way you wrote that entire sequence was seriously too good as one can feel like two different worlds were described in it. One where Sharon is in it and the other the rest of the world. Fabulously done. Swayam's and Sharon's conversation was too good and it was really good to see how easily they started conversing and became comfortable with each other. Good to see they were true and honest ot each other. And coming to the final part - I liked the pen name. Tongue Looking forward to see the comforts of these pen friends. Waiting for the next update. 

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