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Posted: 29 January 2013 at 9:05am | IP Logged
Res...will unres soon :D
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Iam stunned Tongue!!! Finally you updated this one  ... ya this one( Gopi from FIR istyle) LOL 
 
Loved Loved Loved the update ...
 
Swayam has already fallen love with his fiance , though it was forced engagement to him LOL 
I like how he admire sharon Wink ...
 
He was admiring the various sides of his fiance ...a vulnerable delicate girl...an arrogant Diva...a mischievous chirping naughty little angel inside her …. his Miss Perfect...His Siren Sharon..."
 
Sharon falling-swayam holding-him dropping her LOL I can visualise any time ..have seen those scenes like zillion times Smile
 
Later whatever happend in cottage took me to swaron landBlushing..i better not  pin point anything from there Tongue .. it is just to be read and enjoyed Embarrassed
 
when I just thought , where is pen friend in this , the last few lines made it for that Smile 
 
Now iam eager to know what she mumbled Confused ..please update asap
 


Edited by Joshua_TANHA - 31 January 2013 at 11:06pm

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
finally unres 'd  ...update asap .. i dont want any delay

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Joshua_TANHA

finally unres 'd  ...update asap .. i dont want any delay
HAHA...mam...u need to unres ur comments on my other works as well...LOLLOL
thanx for the cute comment dearSmile
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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by deep_Tanha

Originally posted by Joshua_TANHA

finally unres 'd  ...update asap .. i dont want any delay
HAHA...mam...u need to unres ur comments on my other works as well...LOLLOL
thanx for the cute comment dearSmile
Unres'ng all :)

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Joshua_TANHA

Originally posted by deep_Tanha

Originally posted by Joshua_TANHA

finally unres 'd  ...update asap .. i dont want any delay
HAHA...mam...u need to unres ur comments on my other works as well...LOLLOL
thanx for the cute comment dearSmile
Unres'ng all :)
YEAH...i checked...thanx dear...ur comments mean a lotEmbarrassed

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Posted: 03 February 2013 at 12:44am | IP Logged
Deepika Di 1st of all im extremely sry fr commentin dis lte.. My silly mnd... I thought I cmmntd... Sry once again... D updte ws once again an awesme one!! D updte strtd wit full f romance.. Both f dem wre lst in each oder... Spcly Swayam... He ws completely drowning in her eyes.. :p nd sharon v kuch kam nahi thi.. :p dey bth wre rly lst in each oder.. Nd sharon's lyn "shadi k pehle ye haal h to shaadi k baad kya hga crckd me up"... Poor girl cnt resist Swayam :D... Nd Swayam let her fall.. Dat ws hillarious... Imagining Sharon's glares ws even mre hillarious.. Nd i luvd deir teasin session... D cottage prt ws rly romantic... Nd i luvd how u wrte bout deir chnged feelins aftr d engagement... Dat ws vry swt... Nd u lft d updte on a cliffhanger... Wt wud swayam thnk now???? Dats a small kinda hint.. Di i wud lyk to read mre bout Shantanu & Sneha's internet relationship... Wl we get sme f it in d nxt updte?? Waitin fr it eagerly.. Once again an awesme updte...

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Posted: 04 February 2013 at 3:33pm | IP Logged
Hey deepika,after reading all os and one completed ss "u'r.wish.my.command".. i just loved u'r writing skills.. u r great writer with great describer... u describe each and every moment of u'r story.. so so so...well and deeply..
now,this ss "pen friends"... its a unique and completely different concept.. i really like it...i just read all previous chapter.. and they all are awesome and a huge treat for reading further...so, swaron are engaged now and slowly... they fallen for each other... the cottage scene was really romantic and intense...well describe...
and yes, i am so glad that u select "sneha and shan..or shantannu" names for pen friends... i love both characters of.. "swaron"...
very neice concept.. so at last,i just loved it.. and waiting for next update..keep update as fast as possible...
pls add me in u'r pm list for next updates.. and send me pm also..
prateek

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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
its just tooo cute & awesome...loved it...waiting for the nxt update...plzzz update soon...Smile

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