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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sitakshi
Lucky some times i hav this feeling golu won't stay put in the new show for long .It wud b most unnatural if he sticks to it.

lol..I dnt know y I have same gut feeling ..not about golu but his chacarcter😊 and show ,,I am wrd about fate of show that too on life ok

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lucky.m

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Posted: 11 years ago

okk ..so I dnt remember kaha end kiya tha last part so ..I think this is the contnution let me know if I miss any bits😛

Daksh and naina remembering flash back...

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Naina

Remembering that day when she met ayi...

She was going out for her classes...way goes through the market ..suddenly kahi beed jama hogayi ..naina rushes to look and sees a middle aged woman fainted...

Naina rushing towards her ; aap sabb log tamasha kyu dkh rahe hain.she sprinkles somewater from her bottle.as she comes into conciusos..Inspite of her resistence seeing her condition naina takes her to the hospital...admits her...Since she didnt have mobile naina calls her husband vidhyadahr from her mobile and informs him

Naina; aunty maine call kardiya.uncle ko...aate hi honge ..ab aap kaise feel kar rahi hain..

Ayi; main teek hu beta aur kya jaroorat thi itni talikf karne ki main ghr chali jaati...

Naina; aap kitne kamjor the..aise kaise jaati

Ayi; tumhara naam kya hain beta?

Naina; main naina bharadwaj..just then her mobile rings..from tutorials..

Ayi ; tumhe kahi jaana hain tho..

naina; aap ko aise chod kar..ek baar uncle aajaye phir main chali javungi...

just then baba comes there..wrdly..after all formalities..Baba thanks naina...just then baba gets a call ..

Baba; haan chintu main phauch gaya tu aaja...tu tension mat le .ab teri ayi teek hain ..acha main raktha hu..

Baton baton main pata chalta hain ki naina kunasi clg main pad rahi hain...

Ayi ; arey hamara chintu bhi ussi college main padta hain..

Naina; Chintu??

Baba; woh ghar main hum sab uske chintu bulate hain ..lekin clg main

Just then naina la mobile phir se bhaji ..

Naina; ab mujhe jaana hoga ..call pe call aa raha hain... comes naer ayi and says; aunty aap apna dya rakhiye ..ayi pyar se usko bless karti hain aur baba se bhi blseing leke..

Ayi; kbahi hamara ghar aana ...

Naina; haan ..jaroor wiase bhi mere paas uncle ka number hi haina...main call karlungi..ab main chalti hoon..bye ...bolke...naina nikalti hain ...just then daksh makes an entry ..but they dont meet...miss out in frrction of min...

Present ;

Naina

uske baad she becoame close to their family...so close ki she even started calling them ayi baba...and now ...very soon hopefully she will truly be a part of patwardhan family...

Daksh

Daksh remembering the same day...

Hoe he got call from baba..hoe he rushed to hospital...

Daksh ; entering into room; ayi..

ayi .main teek hu..chintu

Daksh; kitne baaar kaha tujhe ..akeli mat jaa ..akruthi ko saath le jaati ..lekin tu kaha sunti hain...sits near ayi holds her hand..tu teek hain na ayi...

Baba; puts a hand on dakhsu' shoulder ; daksh..teri ayi teek hain..

Daksh ; baba ..main jaake ek baar doctor se baat karke ..aur baaki formalities dekh leta hoon...goes out...

Chks with doctor who says just bcos of weakness...she can be taken home..daksh goes naer reception asks for bill & discharge papers..

Receptionist; yaha par sign kijiye. ..aur bill tho usne bardiya..

Daksh ; kisne??

R; wahi ladki jisne patient ko yaha laayi..usne hi saara bill bardiya treatment ki aur medicines ke bhi..

Daksh; how sweet he thinks..I should thank her ;looking at R ; uski kuch details..naam ya number..

R; ek min...chks register and says; ..number tho nahi hain...lekin naam..Naina bharadwaj

As soon as he listens the name..he's struck for few min ..;Naina bharadwaj...flashes of naina's b4 his eyes..but next min he's like what if hse is some other naina...only if he had her number...

He completes the remaining formalities...goes back to room..

daksh ; baba..saari formalities khtam hogaye..ab ayi ko ghar le jaasakthe hain..

Baba; aur bill bardiya tune?

Daksh; maine nahi..woh

Baba; naina. ne

Daksh mods his head..he helps out ayi in getting down...

Ayi; kitni achi ladki hain aur chintu tujhe pata hain woh teri hi clg main hi padti hain..

Daksh ; acha!...(that means its Naina)..

Finally they reach home...from that ayi never got tired of parsing naina..

Ayi;aaj kal sab log apne matalb sochthe hain..lekin woh ..mujhe jaanti tak nahi..phir bhi ek min bhi nahi socha..maine kitna mana kiya lekin woh maani hi nahi

Baba; sach vibha..usko dekh kar aisa laga ki bahut jaan pehechan waali hain

Ayi; aho aapke paas uska number hogana...ek baar ghar bulayiye usse

Baba; haan kyu nahi ..jaroor..

Next day while going to clg...

Ayi ;.chintu naina tere clg main hi padti hain ..tu usse jaan ta nahi

Daksh ; ayi woh ..main ek naina ko jaanta hoo lekin ..

Baba; ye le uska number aur us se paise lautadena.. aur usse ghar par bhi bulana..phonepe bulaane se acha hoga ki tu khud balale..

Daksh nods his head and leaves to clg..

Present

Daksh

That day he had seen a new face of naina that naina..whom he had seen as a funloving care free not bothered abt anything ..but beanth all this there's a loving caring and selfless person..

That day after haering convo b/w naina and riya .

contd ..tommorow😉...

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sitakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Lucky am waiting for tom,

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lucky.m

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sitakshi
Lucky am waiting for tom,

lol if u want I will post it today ..lol😆

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sitakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

ok, post it but i hav to go now lucky shall be back after some time and if u won't b online then i say Dakshnaite and sweet dreams now itself and lucky the short form of bangalore is bgl.

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lucky.m

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sitakshi
ok, post it but i hav to go now lucky shall be back after some time and if u won't b online then i say Dakshnaite and sweet dreams now itself and lucky the short form of bangalore is bgl.

thanks for info will tk cr..tho kal post karti hoon😛

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sitakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

arre aaj koi nahi hai yahan ,lux where r u?

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lucky.m

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sitakshi
arre aaj koi nahi hai yahan ,lux where r u?

main tho yahi hu😊

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lucky.m

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Posted: 11 years ago

Contd...

In clg..he went looking for naina after the class in brk...finally he found her with her friend riya both seriuosly discussing something.walking in corridor...he wondered what would they be...them he thinks kya farak padta hain..he just needs to say thanks ...return the money and then...while going near them accidently he happens to haer the convo...

Riya; mujhe yajeen nahi hota ki apne saare paise hospital main de diya...ab tu kya karegi..

Naina; kya karungi...dance cls baaad main jaoin karungi..bas

Daksh

dance cls;??..he remebers seeing something in notice borad about this..very limited admissions..somrthing of tha sort...

Riya; bas!..kal tak tho kitne excited thi tu dance cls ko lekar ab...aur tune bin soche smajhe kisi anjaane

Naina;Nahi socha yaar...uss wqat mere dimmag main sirf ye tha ki mujhe uss aunty ko hospital leke jaane hain..aur aiwase bhi madat soch samajkar kiya nahi jaata..

Riya; lekin saara paise waha dediya..aur tujhe tho kisi se madat lene pasand nahi..mera bhi nahi ..aur tution cls bhi tho tune abhi join kiya...aur dance cls admission ka kal hi last date hain..iss baar nahi tho next saal hi ho ga..phir bhi tu ..

Naina; offo riya kitne fikr kati hain tu meri..hugs her and says.dekh ..paiso ka kya hain yaar aate jaate rehthe hain lekin jaan..???..aur wiase bhi mere papa hamesha kehte hian ki jab tum kisi ki madat karne ki situtation main hokar bhi uski madat nahi karogena uss jyada paap aur kuch nahi...aur dance iss saal nahi tho agla saal ..main bas khush hu ki meri wajahse kisi ko help mila...

Riya; Naina...tu bahut achi hain

Naina; woh tho main hu hi .bachpan se hi..(both have aluagh)

Naina;aur rahi baat paiso ki hain tho..main pane tutprial waalo se baat karke advance lungi agar milega tho..ok..nahi ho tujh se lungi..khush!

Riya;pakka..legi agar chaiye tho haan pakka

Naina; haan baba pakka..ok..waise woh sab chod..sun ek mazze waali baat batavu..

Riya; kya??

Naina; uss aunty ka beta bhi hamara clg main hi padta hain..

Daksh

does she know ki..ofcouse ayi ne batadiya hoga..

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Riya; really ..kaun hain naam kya hain

Naina; naam giggles and says...chintu

Daksh

Oh god isse kaisa pata ..chintu

Riya chintu/?...ye kaisa naam hain..ajeeb sa

Daksh ; waht do she mean by ajeeb??..

Naina; kya ajeeb? nick name hoga waise bhi mujhe tho acha laga bhaut sweet hain..

Riya; ohh..sirf naam ya phir..

Daksh smiles within himself...

Naina; chup kar ..sirf naam pata hiain won bhi ye waala..aur kuch nahi pata woh kaun hain kis cls main hain..wiase bhi hame kya lena dena hain..aur.. imagine ghar main sab usse kaise bulate honge uski mom kahegi chintu beta..chintu beta

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Riya; aur uski behen bolegi chintu dada...lol aur jab uski shaadi hogi tho uska wife kya bulayegi?

Naina; woh mujhe nahi pata ..lekin agar main hoti tho...

daksh listening with curiosity...

Naina; chintu darling...chintu darling idhar avona pls...brks out laughing and both clasp hands...

Naina; uss aunty milkar aisa laga ki koi rishtha hain hamara...aunty aur uncle na bahut sweet hain ..

Riys; tho chintu bhi sweet hoga

Naina; kya pata sweet hoga ya phir uss daksh pawradhan ki tarah khadoss hoga

daksh ; khadoos !!!😲

Riya; aagaya na DP ka naam..kisi bhi topic ko ghuma phirakar uss par hi aati hain..din main kitne baar japegi uska naam...ek min..kahi tu uspe fida tho nahi hogayi??

Naina; uss khadoos par ...gives along sigh and says ..fida ho kar bhi kya fayida..lekin ab maine sochliya ab main uske peeche nahi padungi bahut bhav deta hain...agar NB se dosti karna hain tho khud aayega...

Daksh oh really!///smiles

Riya; woh bhi dekhte hain...arey baaton main time nahi dekha ...cls ks time hogaya ..

Daksh;

she' sdiffrent ..for sure..and he thinks ..so sweet and good at hrt..and let her know him as Daksh patwradhan not chintu ..atlesat for few days.

He leaves from there smiling ..First rushes to nitice borad to chk the noteon dance cls..

Daksh ; kal last date..kya karu?..directly jaake pay karu..naa..kisi ne usse batadiya tho..??..paise MO karu kya?..pata nhi time par pahuchenge ya nahi agar kal tak nahi mila tho...risk nahi le saktha..hmm .jaakar khud dedu chintu ne diya bolke...bilkul nahi..daksh tu tho jhoot nahi bolsaktha aur uske saamne tho pakada jayega...

Iss tarah janab khayal main khoye huye hain...just then

Rajjev; kiske khayol main doobey huye ho daksh patwradhan...settles besides him..d

Daksh; aisa kuch nahi ..after few sec..rajjev ..tu ladies hostel main kisi ko jaanta hain kya?..matlab mujhe na

Rajeev;(lil shock )..tu aur ladies hostel??...teri tabiyat teek hainna(chking out for fever)..looking at dakshu ka exp..he smiles and says..okk..bol...no more mazaq

Daksh ;..woh..woh mujhe naina ka room number chhaiye..

Rajjev;ohhh..bhabhi ka...ab samaj aaya..(goes lil close and slowly says) kahi raat ko chori chupke snneak in karne ka irada tho nahi..

Daksh ; aisa kuch nahi usse kuch bhejna hain

Rajjev; kya?..love letter?.daksh says nahi ..

Rajeev;.greetng card..boquet..

Daksh; (apne aap main)

just money ...no..a thnk u card and boquet would be good...

Daksh; haan ..

Rajeev;daksh ..kya 360 degree turn maara tumne ek dumm saadhu se romatic hero bangaya ... itna romantic kab se hogya hain re.

Daksh about to say something...

.Rajeev;ha ha pata hain sab bhbahi ka pyar ka jaadu hain...

Daksh ;hogaya! ab ye bakwaas bnadh kar aur sun...clas khatam hote hi kahi bhag mat jaana...saath main chalte hain..pehle ye bata ki room number kaise pta chalega

Rajeev; tu uski fikr mat kar...cls kahtam hone tak poora address tere paas hoga..hamara network hi kuch aisa hain

Daksh ;ab chale..

Dono cls main gaye

Cls kahtam hogaya...

grreting shop...daksh pics up a thank u card.. and then takes one more cover usme paise daaalke

Rajjev ; paise kyu?

Daksh busy in wrtitng on card ; woh teri bhabhi...stops for a min I mean naina ki dance cls ke liye

Rajeev; patting on hsoulder ; kya baat hain..abhi se honewaali biwi ki kharche uta raha hain...lage raho beta..lage raho..

Daksh gives a killer look aur rajjev chup ho jaata hain..phir

Daksh and rajjev at bouquet shop..

Bouquet shop...

Daksh looking at bouquet

Daksh ; yaar tujhe kya lagta hain naina ko ye pasand aayega...

Rajjev; mujh se kya pooch raha hain..tujhe pata hogana bhabhi ki pasand..

Daksh finally after long selection settles for one..and then..sab kuch arrange karke..hogaya!..bas ab ye naina tak pahuch jaaye..address laya tu?

Rajjev; tu tension mat le...hojayega..aur ye kya..chintu...ab ye kaun hain ??...

Daksh ; usko pata nhi chalna chaiye ki maine bheja hain..aur chintu mera nic name tu agar kisi ko pata chala ...

Rajeev; hmm ab samaj aaya secret surprise ..wow..cool..aur pata nahi chalega chintu ji..I mean daksh..

Tho delivery ka order deke ..both leave from there after daks repaets number of times ki aaj raat tak mil jaana chaiye

On the way

Daksh; yaar pata kaise chalega ki naina ko mila ya nahi

Rajjev; ladkiyon ka doosra naam hota hain BBC...poora hostel main na halla machega ..pata chal jayega..tune itne pyar se bheja hain tho paaka milega bhabhi ko..

Finally dono gaye apne ghar

AYI aska daksh ki..kya hua naina ko ghar bulana etc etc..daksh says very soon he will bring her but he just want to give her asurprise..he asks ayi baba.to not to tell naina who chintu is...and money usne de diya aur tahnsk u card bhi bheja...

Contd..

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lucky.m

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Posted: 11 years ago

hello I am here ..kyu koi nahi hain sitakshi u there??

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