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Arshi SS Parents'Affairs ch 24 /148 13 jan (Page 9)

sweet-fairy IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 2:44pm | IP Logged
nice update...loved it
continue soon

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star_fan1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 5:17pm | IP Logged
a very nice update loved it
plz continue soon

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PoojaSheth Goldie

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 3:32am | IP Logged
nice concept.

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Arjuhisis IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 8:40am | IP Logged
Nice update naddiya - I commented before ur pm - [:D/]

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Arnav was fast a asleep when he felt someone shake him , he opened his half eyes , to saw some one leaning on him he hold the person and the next min that person was under him " who the hell are you" he try to see the face as the person was wearing  hoodie

Khushi  aah  as he put all his weight on her

Arnav you are trying to kill me

Khushi : i am just trying to wake you , i am Khushi

Arnav moved away the hoodie from her head "what the hell are you doing in my bedroom ?" he look at the time it was 6:45 "at 6:45"

Khushi: i called you over 100 time but you were asleep so i sneak in your home .

Arnav "oh" he was still lying on her " my cell was at silent "

Khushi if you dont mind can you move away from me as you are ,she paused  ,he roll on the other side of bed

Arnav: but what the hell are you doing here

Khushi: you get up

Arnav what

Khushi pull him up to sit, where is your hoodie " she opened his closet and trying to find

Arnav :helllo it is my closet

Khushi : wear this"throw on him

Arnav if i dont

Khushi:  grab his arm without giving him time made him wear the hoodie , held his arm  get up we have to spy on them

Arnav at 6 :45

Khushi: they are meeting in park for morning walk, see when their kids are sleeping they date each other

Arnav : look at her " were you crying" he look at her face as her eyes was swollen in triple size ,he feel sad for her 

Khushi " you were not picking my call and i was feeling sick,i cannot share this with anyone accpet you"

Arnav oh. let me freshen up

Khushi run her hairs in his hairs "hair combed " she opened his mouth by holding his chin placed a gum  in it " hogaya " she made a bubble, she wipe his eyes

Arnav you are really sick

Khushi: held his hand and run out ," you drive as i didnot bring my car"

Arnav how you came here ?

Khushi:"i  hide in my Mom car "

Arnav you are

Khushi " My mom made ladoos for your dad"

Arnav really , he hit brake

Khushi" you know they are meeting daily  ,as i over heard their conversation , Maa was saying today it is ladoo day, tomorrow it will be paratha"

Arnav: your MOM is trying to kill my dad he is heart patient

Khushi: do you think my Mom is uneducated ,she made it keeping your Dad diet chart in mind

Arnav hmmm , now what to do ?

Khushi lets find them

Arnav ok they walk in the   "where to find them the park is so big?"

Khushi: lets split

Arnav no then how i will find you?

Khushi hmm  you call me

Arnav shut up he hold her hand and they started walking on the path., they walk a km but they where not able to find them "are you sure they are here?"

Khushi: my Mom comes here

Arnav oh my DAD too

Khushi lets sit  for a while

Arnav hmmm it is being 10 mins they could not find them "but what we will do if we find them," he look at her she was lean on the other side"hello " he poke her she was about to fall down he grab her from her shoulder ."shit "she was asleep she placed her head on his shoulder " Khushi" she was sneezing in sleep  , he found his Dad her Mom the where coming close  , he wasnot getting what to do, at the same time she slide down and placed her head in his lap" oh God" he hide her face as  their parents where coming close .  he  started playing with his cell  let them pass

Garima" why they come to park if they have to sleep?"

Arnav :thank God she was asleep , he took few snaps for her , he was himself smiling at his act" this girl has made me crazy" she sneezed again "get up 'he pat her cheek , she was not able to sleep the whole night she was in deep sleep she didnot even moved , it was chilling ,he picked her up and walk to car" now where to drop her i even don't know her home"  as he start car . " i am taking her home "

Arnav was getting ready for office , he saw her sleeping, he smiled" look like she had cried the whole night" he wrote  a note and kept it on her side , he lock his bedroom and slide the  key in room from down.

Khushi woke up at 1 her head was heavy " buaji coffee" she shouted  smell some unfamiliar scent ,she open her eyes" where i am ?"  she saw a note

 you slept in  park , i try to woke you but  failed, i bring you back here as  i dont know your home.  the door key is under mat , you  ask drive he will drop you ,  by the way call me i want to tell you something.

Khushi  called him

Arnav was talking to Akash and Lavanya   he saw the number he smiled "excused me" he walk to the corner" oh finally you are awake"

Khushi why you didnot woke me?

Arnav i try but you were fast a sleep so i

Khushi i slept like an idiot , i missed my class too.

Arnav : my be you like my bed

Khushi: shut up

Arnav  i click few pics,

Khushi really

Arnav " i cannot send you  , can  you meet me in evening ?"

Khushi: hmmm

Arnav " yar i am with few people can i call you after few mins "

Khushi how to go home? my head,she sneezed

Arnav: " listen open the first drawer you will find medicine .you stay there i will drop you home myself, in 30 mins i will join you"

Khushi then you wake me  she without cutting turn other side .

Arnav sach mein yeh pagal hai , he look at his hand , he call HP to make soup .

Lavanya and Akash look at him he was smiling

Arnav what

Akash: why you are smiling  like that today?

Lavanya :yes aaj subha kis ma face dekha

Arnav " what we were discussing?"

Lavanya " whom you will join in 30mins?"

Arnav none of your business" he  

Akash : larki hai sure

Arnav: hain hai problem

Akash do you love her?

Arnav what?

Akash : as the way you were  talking i have never seen you talking like that.

Arnav: he slam his lappy and walk out 

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PhoenixRadar IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Ohkay! Yippee!! Me is first... again! LOL
Aww... That was cho cute!!!
Khushi cried the whole night?? But... Oh god! And she slept there in the park? Hahahahaa...ROFL I used to do that with dad!! He would take me on walks at 5 am, while I would snooze on him! heehee...LOL 
I loved that part!!

Aye haaye!! Chote Malik bade smile shile kar rahein hain!! Wink Kya baat hain, babua?? Lagta hain abhi kuch life changing experience hone waala hain, kuch hi dino mein!LOL


Edited by PhoenixRadar - 15 October 2012 at 12:09pm

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Arjuhisis IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
me second to read and comment
lovely lovely going naddiya
loving this pair
very different story
great updates

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sweet-fairy IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
nice update...continue soon

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