feedback for @megz
OS: First Time
here goes my feed back..as i tend to write too much
i have posted in my own thread with lots of other Fbs...
1]first thing first...you gave me a completely different aspect to look at Raghav's character .
to be entirely frank i couldn't connect to Raghav at teh start of the story as i couldn't imagine him as biz school student
...but as i read further he grew on me
...and came to love your characterization so much!!
2]i felt "hiding" was not Raghav's style
...BUT that small detail is very important for the logical meaning...
3]"You don't look like you've come from Ambani's house either
," you cracked me up hon
4]i can imagine his smile
!! how did you resist slipping into dream land??
5]how can you show Raghav as gap toothed
...but then AGAIN he used to get into brawls
...and hence logically it HAS to be mentioned
..superb work on maintaing logic dear
not like the daily soaps
..were even after getting beaten to pulp no scars are present on the charecter
6]i guess Raghav is rebellious cos he DOES think that its he who caused Dev's death
..you know self blame can push man to greater length
7]nice to know you added a touch of realization
...something which is very important for character as well as story development...
thanks for bringing back my mechanic Raghav back!!
loved his description...
..equally looking forward to further development of story!!
as for my reaction?? . "Raghav only gave him a gap-toothed smile