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and also some of my shots at being creative
in that way we can enjoy a creation in infinite number of ways
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Chapter 3 Part (a)
The first bud of Spring
.like tea-breaks..fresh flowers..and raghav's work..not only it gave a sense of passage of time (intended) it also helps in maintaining the consistency... i loved subtle continuity
...makes the read much more enjoyable 
...at this point of time to the fact that Sia is acting as if the-normal-soap heroine-having infinite-patience-never opening her mouth-at the face of injustice...attitude.
..i mean this FF is far far far more better the everyday crap they dish out as soaps in TV..and if we get to see the same pattern here too...its...irritating?? (for lack of correct word)..... although consistency is important in stories...in reality there is hardly anything which is consistent ever in life
..and hence change is the norm of life...this last sentence was a gem and also acts like a peg which is holding this piece of imaginative writing down to the base of reality...a gentle reminder of sorts that "hey!! these things do happen in real life too..." 
...may be the day to day office scenario was so akin to real life..or i could just imagine raghav or rather HC
in an office setting...or may be we as workers do face it on a common basis..,,or may be i could relate very well to the off- mood of R due to cancelled appointments..dunno.. the tone says it was a known fact...what am i missing di? how can i oversee this? 
...lol i can imagine Hc's face with lot of internal thinking..and restlessness all cos of u) of FF...! awwwieee his hair...and that tooo messed up!! killer di.....no amount of reasoning can be taken as excuse to his stupid behaviour..my hand was so itching to give a tight slap to him for his pricking words!! what he things himself? lord governor?
does he control sia's breath too grrr...pathetic behaviour
...i hate raghav for this at present...ok fine he lost his family..so?? so what? its not end of the world..nor world's biggest trajedy..and neither a loss nobody has ever gone through grrr ..there are many who have gone through much more terrible things boss!! (i think sia is one such
)..can't he cut some slack for sia? grrr..in her irritatingly "calm-understanding -reassuring-as well as slightly disconnected "way...R sooo needs that kinda reality check....am so so happy!! yippeee
if i was in sia's place i would melt...hai neee then again these qualities making R's charecter much more humane and convincing!! awesome confrontation...although frankly i felt at start that sia was putting her hand staight inside lion's mouth he he he 
...i know the way R would have got the jhatka...lol first of all sia was brave to talk in an eye contact...dint quail under his death stare...on top of that completely unexpected dealing she did...very very very funny and sad too...sad cos R was so hurt he NEEDs some one to talk and trust..again...
...it might change the whole way of looking at things for raghav
..bring about charecter fortification....its very very significant talk!! and as it matters hearts...i am very sure Raghav has slipped for sia( a wishfull fangirl dream )..even though he is not in what you might say "right frame of mind"....The following 6 member(s) liked the above post:
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lakshmi_3004
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Chapter 3 Part (b)
...not only it adds some light moments but also shows the day-to-day happenings of a normal household....what struck me was the motherly behaviour sia displayed... is there any significant pointer thrown in there
is her past includes any kid the more the FF progress the more the mystery around sia deepens ..hmpf.
...am impatient ...in white kurtha
*heart beat stopped*...oh so handsome!! awieee *hyperventilating* thank you for showing HC///,,i mean raghav in white kurta di...grr ..the heart to heart talk (much needed)...can't he be grateful? y he has to be rude all time? would his bhabi maa approve of his actions?..i mean moments before he rained fire on sia..and here he is sweetly apologizing to his nephew...is it cos of the loss or is it because of the confused state he is in now?
..thanks for including it..as its almost scanty in actual show..as if sia deliberately avoided him..as if there was something she was hiding ..cho chweet...you are too good in capturing raghav's exact reactions ...as much as i want this to be the first love symbol...i am looking forward to much more friendlier relations between raghav and sia for startersshe not only deserved an apology ..she also deserves a lot of respect......its actually the teachings of his bhabhi...making him repent for his obvious irrational behavior..more importantly feeling of shame flooding him...(although its not shown here as such)? like Raghav's "as soon as possible" is not gonna come so soon..and that some or other kind of distraction may occur? probably souring the relation much more? i hope it isn't like that........balances the story as well as nudges it in right direction and leaves the reader relaxed,expectant (as many leads can open up) and forges a strong "connect" between the reader and the story told di so yeah LOVED it your way diThe following 3 member(s) liked the above post:
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lakshmi_3004
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...finally am starting on your Vms..so sorry for extreme delay...was missing HC so much before he joined SB...he usually is silent ...as in no news of him when he is not doing any show.
.and getting any news of him was like a celebration...as it was once in a blue moon :- ...and my heart skipped a beat !! HC smile is the best smile in entire telly world!!...in fact the shot of him from down {0.21-0.24} was..."maardaala" and kaathilaana......i was all blushing hai mein marjawaan...i mean HC looks like an innocent child whenever he scratches his head like that while concentrating on something ...awesome sync diand his finger combing it!!! i can imagine how you would be lost in dream seeing that .....(partly cos i got see HC from head to toe in different different angles) and perfect song for the occasion ..and i can't even imagine comparing it]The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:
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