Posted: 19 October 2012 at 2:35am | IP Logged
This is my humble opinion on how this show can be saved.
Phir Subah Hogi started off a very strong footing about the Bedni Community and Takur Vikram Singh being their defender of these deprived women. After the show suffered set backs with exchange of characters, the show has fallen below standards and is collapsing.
Nandish being the lead and Adi with Sughni has spoilt everything. If Nandish was meant to be the lead then he should have been one from the beginning and should have been seen supporting the Bedni community. How on earth can Adi be the lead after throwing so many insults at Bednis and at Sughni?
These two characters have absolutely nothing in common except for Adi degrading Sugni & patronising her as she does the same to Vikram and both leaving their original partners getting superficially married for convenience, based on their illogical and unjustified principles.
Things (imho), have gone wrong are, for example:
- Bringing the dead back alive
- TVS continuing on with a broken marriage
- Bhanja fighting his Mama for wanting to marry Sughni and stealing her from him
- The disappearing act of the whole village,
All of these have had a negative impact on the show. Other comments from viewers & poor ratings prove this.
I'd rather this whole fiasco ends. The show is a mess. The only way forward is for TJS with Reeva to conspire against Vikram, leading to a huge scandal, about him being after Sughni. When he attempts to talk to Sughni, she misunderstands his intentions, while he tries to stop her from leaving, someone from behind the screen (e.g. TJS) shoots at him and blames him for trying to dishonour Sughni. He ends up with a physical injury, humiliated by the villagers and abandoned.
- Vikram needs justice, and needs to put all of them in their rightful place.
- Vikram's mother, Mother Takur, in the mean time starts to investigate the truth and coaches Vikram into telling her everything, which he does.
- When TVS finds out Reeva was behind this, he divorces her but gives her what she wants, a name & place - a separate house to live far away.
- Mother Takur meanwhile counsels Vikram into leaving the village for a while to recover from his injury and for his own peace of mind & safety.
Mother Takur has to play an active role as TVS's supporter and pay back to Sughni for all the pain she gave to TVS, by making her realise how wrong she is. This will be a slow process. At first MT invites Sughni to her home to talk with her about working as her servant (by now, she knows everything & that Sughni a bedni) when Sughni has no money and no where to go except the takurs who want to exploit her. MT will teach her how to do house chores, educate her, give her manners, values (sanskar), and how be a real takurain.
In the mean time, TVS finds out the culprit is TJS and fights him (like the character of Zoro), but no one knows who is helping the women of the town or attacking TJS. This way, he earns back his love, trust & respect of Sughni, her mother and the whole village. He should stay away for many years and do good for the Bednis without any of them knowing it, till the end, when Sughni realizes who is her hero.
In the mean time, Adi can play the main lead in helping this unknown hero and Adi will also realize it's his mama saving him from near death during the confrontation with TJS's gang, where Amrita paying a quick vist finds him unconscious and nurses Adi back to recovery.
Adi finally learns to respect his Mama and go back to marry Amrita, who is still waiting for Adi to realize his real love for her.
I hope this helps in some way.
Edited by Istila - 19 October 2012 at 2:52am