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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 2:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by salmankh1

I'm so sorry Sheetal I haven't commented sooner but I really need to ask where you've been hiding this talent!  You are such a greater writer.   The way you've described Arjun and Arohi's pain and my poor Arjun's anguish...just Amazing.  And I loved the concept..how creative to weave the story around the song.  So well written and I felt for Arjun more then anything.  I know Arohi thought what was she was doing was for him but couldn't she see that compared to her everything else was trivial to him.   

I loved this paragraph, it sent chills down my spine.

"Amongst the din of music and chatter. she could hear the tiny sound of a ring dropping on the wooden floor behind her. The clang of metal against wood was too small a noise to be noticed, but to Arohi it sounded like a door banged shut, bolted. To Arjun it was a gunshot, fired straight to his heart."  

Wow!  That was so well written, totally grabbed me.  The words were just so powerful...so final.

Can't wait to read more of your work.  Will comment soon on the other ones too.Smile


now worries raman... i know you're busy! thanks for reading and the wonderful comment Hug 
my heart went out for arjun too Cry im glad i could get the emotions across Smile 

you're yet to comment on my new ss and one more os im putting up today... whenever you get time please do read it and comment Embarrassed 

and what is happening with aashiqui??? usska update also i want Day Dreaming

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
awesome OS sheetal
the title perfectly fitted
very well showed arjuhi's pain
yup in season1 punji suffered more

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...vibha...

awesome OS sheetal
the title perfectly fitted
very well showed arjuhi's pain
yup in season1 punji suffered more

thanks vibha Smile on public demand of a happy ending i've written a sequel to it... do give it a read and let me know how you find it! heres the link http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3254874&PID=67920864&#67920864

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cherry227

Originally posted by ...vibha...

awesome OS sheetal
the title perfectly fitted
very well showed arjuhi's pain
yup in season1 punji suffered more

thanks vibha Smile on public demand of a happy ending i've written a sequel to it... do give it a read and let me know how you find it! heres the link http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3254874&PID=67920864&#67920864


sheetal i read that tooTongue loved last part
will comment soon
sorry for late comment

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 12:21am | IP Logged
i know i am late... 
but a wonderful os dear... 
the song is a great one... i love it... 
and yeah the song does remind of kmh1 and arjun punj... 
arjun punj was a masterpiece... a guy who is very special and precious!! 

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 2:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mysticlover

i know i am late... 
but a wonderful os dear... 
the song is a great one... i love it... 
and yeah the song does remind of kmh1 and arjun punj... 
arjun punj was a masterpiece... a guy who is very special and precious!! 
thanks for reading achu... no worries on the late part Smile 

am glad you liked it! hope your exams went well Big smile 

punji truly was unique, special and very very precious Day Dreaming
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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 11:03pm | IP Logged
nice update
its so painful, I feel like crying, I remember when arohi was going to marry with karan after breaking my arjun's heart on kmh 1.
whatever the reason was but didn't like her decision.
he was madly in love with her... and she also, theat moment was very hurting Cry

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
Oh how I missed to read tis os... Cry sorry di and let me talk abt the os it was absolutely stunning di        kmh1 ki yaad diladi awww I cant see my arjun gng through tis much pain... Cry                                           pls jalde se un dono ko milade na... Clap I love u di...take care... Smile

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