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NEW OS: Shot through the heart </3 (Page 4)

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Posted: 12 October 2012 at 6:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pinky.padda

awesome absolutely brilliant
thanks pinky Smile
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Posted: 22 October 2012 at 5:18am | IP Logged


Cry Cry Cry

i hate u sheetal.. Itna rulaya merr punjii ko

itnma sad os Cry ...btw so touchy

so beautifully written...love lyrics

keep writing

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Posted: 22 October 2012 at 7:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AAKMH2


Cry Cry Cry

i hate u sheetal.. Itna rulaya merr punjii ko

itnma sad os Cry ...btw so touchy

so beautifully written...love lyrics

keep writing

thank you for reading it mahi Hug and thanks for the comment... pls dont hate me Ouch

i know its a sad one but it was meant to be! some of them have requested a sequel where i make everything OK... i might write that for kittus birthday Big smile 

im glad that you liked it Embarrassed

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Posted: 22 October 2012 at 7:25am | IP Logged
Plz
Make sequel for this
I can't imagine arohi with another

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Posted: 22 October 2012 at 7:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cooljaya11

Plz
Make sequel for this
I can't imagine arohi with another
neither can arjun LOL ok i will! 

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Posted: 22 October 2012 at 8:05am | IP Logged
no thnkx at al. .its always treat to read ur work
yes yes yes

mujhe bhe sequl chahey

acha hate na krun? to phr is os ka part2 do aur ek new ss bhe. .bolo deal manzor?

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Posted: 22 October 2012 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by AAKMH2

no thnkx at al. .its always treat to read ur work
yes yes yes

mujhe bhe sequl chahey

acha hate na krun? to phr is os ka part2 do aur ek new ss bhe. .bolo deal manzor?
deal??? mahi tu businesswoman ban jaa... khandaan ka naam roshan karegi LOL 
waise iss deal ke bale mujhe kaunsa update de rahi ho??? 

ok writing sequel... ss ke liye thoda time de please Ouch
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Posted: 22 October 2012 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
wowww...this is such an excellent piece of wrtingClap 

especiallyy the part where arjun saw arohi ,,,, u have described it with such perfectionClap

Arjuns eyes lit up the moment he saw Arohi, standing at the entrance. He still could not hate her, or even be angry with her. Just one look and the longing in his eyes returned, softening his features and his heart. His gaze swept over her face hungrily, drinking in her beauty which he was devoid of, for the past one month. He had eyes only for her, completely ignoring the large male arm that she was clinging to.


infact the whole OS is just superbbbClap awesome description of expressionsClapClap

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