NEW OS: Shot through the heart </3 - Page 3

😭 😭 😭

i hate u sheetal.. Itna rulaya merr punjii ko

itnma sad os 😭 ...btw so touchy

so beautifully written...love lyrics

keep writing

thank you for reading it mahi 🤗 and thanks for the comment... pls dont hate me 

Plz
Make sequel for this
I can't imagine arohi with another

Originally posted by: cooljaya11

Plz
Make sequel for this
I can't imagine arohi with another

neither can arjun 😆 ok i will! 

no thnkx at al. .its always treat to read ur work
yes yes yes

mujhe bhe sequl chahey

acha hate na krun? to phr is os ka part2 do aur ek new ss bhe. .bolo deal manzor?

Originally posted by: AAKMH2

no thnkx at al. .its always treat to read ur work
yes yes yes

mujhe bhe sequl chahey

acha hate na krun? to phr is os ka part2 do aur ek new ss bhe. .bolo deal manzor?

deal??? mahi tu businesswoman ban jaa... khandaan ka naam roshan karegi 😆 

wowww...this is such an excellent piece of wrting👏 

especiallyy the part where arjun saw arohi ,,,, u have described it with such perfection👏

Arjuns eyes lit up the moment he saw Arohi, standing at the entrance. He still could not hate her, or even be angry with her. Just one look and the longing in his eyes returned, softening his features and his heart. His gaze swept over her face hungrily, drinking in her beauty which he was devoid of, for the past one month. He had eyes only for her, completely ignoring the large male arm that she was clinging to.


infact the whole OS is just superbbb👏 awesome description of expressions👏👏

Sad story hai? 😒
Main nahi padh paungi.. 😭 Baad mein bura lagta rehta hai.. incomplete-incomplete of sorts..
I got your PM, and from "Ek Bheegi si Love Story" i know you write really well..👏
But, sad kyu.. 😲

Originally posted by: cracked

wowww...this is such an excellent piece of wrting👏 

especiallyy the part where arjun saw arohi ,,,, u have described it with such perfection👏

Arjuns eyes lit up the moment he saw Arohi, standing at the entrance. He still could not hate her, or even be angry with her. Just one look and the longing in his eyes returned, softening his features and his heart. His gaze swept over her face hungrily, drinking in her beauty which he was devoid of, for the past one month. He had eyes only for her, completely ignoring the large male arm that she was clinging to.


infact the whole OS is just superbbb👏 awesome description of expressions👏👏

thanks dear... it was a very emotional one for me to write 😊 will be putting up a sequel soon!

Originally posted by: -sanju-

Sad story hai? 😒
Main nahi padh paungi.. 😭 Baad mein bura lagta rehta hai.. incomplete-incomplete of sorts..
I got your PM, and from "Ek Bheegi si Love Story" i know you write really well..👏
But, sad kyu.. 😲

padhle padhle! isska sequel is coming up 😉