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FF: Ishq Wala Love(LAST PART) 10.10.13 pg-136 (Page 48)

ushankitvc IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 March 2013 at 10:08am | IP Logged
awesum!!!awesum updt...loved it to the core...hating to this supriya...what did the doc say supriya abt nakusha's health????tasha convo mindblowing...specially nakkus dialogue...," yeh pyar ki nahin..aur na hi kisi .." pausing for a second before adding further," bhookh ki ..balki sirf aur sirf dard ki nishani hai." ...a damn touching line which is pure reality in their life...continue sooon...

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aishwish IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 March 2013 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
hey..a little it's nakusha who says that "dard ki nishani part" (thanks to member who posted above me)...anyways it doesn't takes away all those praises I've showered on dutta...but facilitates me with a different point of's great to have those words from nakusha's should sooth dutta to the core...he's ashamed of what happened that night...but I think the constant justification from the equal partner that it wasn't lust, must be a great relieve for him, dutta is a kind of man whom can't be imagined to do something with lust..naah dur dur tak koi chance nahin!!! And again it portrays nakusha as the someone in his life understanding his pain...anyone can sense physical pain (ye alag baat hai that wifey jee is failing to do that too)...but it's the pain buried deep down, concealed with cold exteriors that needs clinical attendance...If dutta is getting drawn to that someone...issme galat bhi kya hai...isn't we all crave and dream for that one person jo khamoshiyon ki bhasha samjhe!!! okay...i realize that I'm being biased (kambakth IshqLOL) but when she said dard, it was for both of them...dutta have always been receptive to naku's changing expression from happeir ones to painful ones...I hope someday he understands it completely 

Edited by aishwish - 02 March 2013 at 11:56pm

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dilse14 Goldie

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Posted: 03 March 2013 at 9:19am | IP Logged
hi rose
awesome to have you backSmile
nice ud
felt sad for dutta & naku
the child reminds them of guilt not luv
sups seems to no good
waiting for next ud
missed you alot

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jedy25 Senior Member

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Posted: 04 March 2013 at 9:54am | IP Logged
hi rose
superb ud ..good to have you back..pls ud soonSmile

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mirage123 Goldie

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Posted: 05 March 2013 at 9:28am | IP Logged
hi rose
fab ud are back welcomeSmile
sups will realise the mistake she did..dutta & naku both don't how to react the good news..pls do ud soon

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sona89 Goldie

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Posted: 06 March 2013 at 9:38am | IP Logged
Hi rose
quite awaited postSmile...actuallyLOL..nice ud with suspense over Doc & sups convo...dutta had sadness which ...this child reminds him of his 'll tough for him...sups too is jealous now.good turn ...pls next ud soon

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stranger2rose IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 March 2013 at 3:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aishwish

res :)

and i'm editing it,,,and i am pleasantly surprised,,,,,, ab toh izzat ka sawal haiLOL

edit add ****

You were wrong''hum woh nahin jo dar jaye waada kar ke muqar i know how to extract a timely comment from u Wink

Chapter 12

Rose rose rose''''wow!!Star3 times Rose, was it that good? Now I understand what was missing but you didnt tell me that something was missing Unhappy, sometimes it's necessary to create ripples in a silent ocean..hmm right, that update is that ripple..yeah may be it was the right time to bring in a twist or jolt to move the story ahead , after reading this update I realized that  all the previous 11 chapters were just establishing the story, of course there have been developments like the two bonding together..yes this ff is actually slow if compared to my previous ones things will build up gradually, but still kahani toh ab shuru hui hai, it was never about how they fall in love, it's about, the destiny of that love!!! Okay the opening scene''''the absence of dutta was quite appropriate but I hope that someday he's there, not only witnessing their baby but also the mixed emotions first time parents go through, which nakusha went through..your wish is under consideration LOL''that makes me remember clap for you  very good move''..what supriya witnessed was happiness or may be euphoria even but naku witnessed  mixed emotion, which cannot be termed or categorized, it can only be felt Clap'.happy you could feel those emotions ..thanks a lot.I love how you make sure through these little things the biological mother stays distinguished from the 'ummm I don't know what term to use for ..even i am trying to figure out what should i call sups,LOL..okay what I loved next or say have been loving from the very first beginning''you as a narrator always justify supriya..thank u thank u aish , honestly you are the only one who doesn't pounce on sups ... what i am trying to show is that she is imperfect for dutta ...she is simply not meant for her because both of them are quite different from the other..agreed she has shades of grey but had she been a hardcore ruthless gangster's wife like anna then she would have been a perfect wife..i think i have told u this before, then you throw a circumstance where the readers only start expecting her to act negative (thanks to the brilliant characterization of yoursClap)..thanks so much for the appreciation''and nobody blames you that in order to justify the extra marital affair,you have created a negative character..there has to be some justification for an extra marital affair ..lack of compatibility came to my mind hence using it. The complication in the pregnancy came as a biggest blow to r not the only one who can give shocks'.was not expecting it, seriously'..and I can well imagine how fruitfull it's gonna be for the leads relationship bonding and by the help this one development you can weave the story in a way that no body will throw you out of the forum.LOL...we shall see that LOL

And the next shock, he asked what the doctor said, plz ek baar toh sirf dutta aur nakusha ka check up session plan karo '.there is time for that ..relax n wait patiently.and oh my my'..he doesn't get irritated at her inquiries!!.he is getting used to it..But seriously what followed next bring down all my sympathies for nakusha''this cunning woman Angryshe knows how kind hearted my sweetu is'that's why that's why' this was missing in your comments proposed that college idea'.in order to be mahan in my sweetu eyesAngryCry'and I don't understand why supriya was shocked when dutta supported nakusha'.mera aisa danveer pati hota toh main toh chill seriously that's understandable the reaction from supriya was quite expected''.but what I loved was imaging him engrossed in the work uff that hard look he has while doing that and when his commanding voice intervened supriya'uff my heart's beating fast.  Blushing

The CD sequence''.. well it was expected that he'll have a second experience only but it was lovely, the way you have described his reactions the graphic details of his gestures is brilliant. I didn't understand what supriya ment when she said one down one more to go?..she had succeeded in diverting his mind now it was nakusha's turn so sent her to drink milk

Okay the next scene'.i loved the fact that their first proper conversation happened at the background of what an observation''this is how their feelings for the baby is not very bright not too dark either''okay a lot has changed she avoides sitting with her he ivites her to sit'great, yahi din dekhna baaki reh gaya tha!!Ouch

Wow'.beautifully worded the baby indeed is a "dard ki nishani" ..i am glad that your confusion as to who spoke those words cleared out and hey I quite liked the way dutta took a pause before using the word "bhook" he's like that too sophisticated in his talks and very shareefHeart..yeah very shareef ''okay fine I'll have to agree it's only nakusha who can sooth her, it's not that others..yeah even u don't stand a chance ..remember ..don't try but it's he who only prefers to hear her'.ab hum kya kahein kya karein jab dil baatein karne lageOuch'..aww'the reason he gave for wanting a girl child, heart touching'''.quite contrastive if asked from nakusha she'll never want a girl child due to her profession and he wants a girl because of his profession..she will go with what her sahab wants ..'..the last gesture''.awww'thats how people like dutta are if they care for someone the only thing they care is that person'..and wahi hua jo sadiyon se do pyaar karne walo ke saath hota aaya hai'..villan ki entryLOL'''.but I'm looking forward how you handle this'.now when supriya has an eye on them how will you arrange lovey dovey moments for us'.and how exactly supriya gonna handle her defeat that too against someone like nakusha'''and what's making me die'is what did the doctor said,,,,,andI know what your answer going to be !!!Angry

Waiting eagerly for the next installmentHeart ..thanks a lot dear (oh! I'm saying this after agesLOL)

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stranger2rose IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 March 2013 at 2:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -bharti-

Hi Rose..hey bharti
Brilliant comeback UD !..thanks a lot dear  Thumbs Up  and the wait was indeed worthwhile.. 
You have done full justice to the characters, their individual battles all beautifully penned...omg it feels so good to hear this ... you know u r one of those readers who i find really hard to convince, i still remember that in the last update where dutta was admiring nakku in a sari , they weren't doing anything except  sharing an eye lock but you didn't find it appropriate because dutta is married which is totally acceptable and i was like if you can not accept a mere eye lock then how will you digest when they shall fall in love LOL but seriously just like appreciation is important , these objections are also imp as they will only help me in writing better, so dear don't hold back your thoughts and openly share them with meEmbarrassed   
Loved seeing a different side of supriya,  her delight n desperation.  Supriya,s dream is about to be realised and naturally delighted to watch the foetus come alive on screen...  She is all serious with this high risk venture for which she has mortguaged her own the moment she is not aware that in realizing her dream she has put her marriage at stake.  She has been atleast honest in her dealings n stuck to her part...okay one more to appreciate sups ..i am liking it LOL 
Luckily naku too notices supriya,s happines n in time keeps her emotions under check.  Her momentary high comes crashing hearing supriya say "mera bachaa"...  She instead takes comfort in that the baby will be in safe hands having witnessed sups commitment.  But naku will have a hard time keeping her emotions at bay.  She is fighting a dual battle, her feelings for the father of the baby n her own maternal instincts.  It would be interesting to see if she can stick to her part of the contract. ..that's what the whole ff is about  
But we have a twist, the doc,s reaction is puzzling n indicates a complication...yeah  Supriya the shrewd lady catches it n is rightly worried... time for some wild theories where this Ff is headed, like it rose start guessing 
Nakusha again true to her character is nosey n easily impresses upon dutta to set up an educational institute rather than a shopping complex much to supriya,s irritation.  But its interesting this illiterate woman teaching the knowledgable couple a lesson in economics...actually she has a very short term view of the project ..she is overlooking the benefits that the project will reap in the long run , so her POV is actually not right economically so dutta is more a philanthrophist than a greedy don.  Ofcourse it makes great social sense but which businessman does it unless he,s sure of making a bigger moolah of it than the commercial venture. ..our large hearted don thinks otherwise   And my economics says a different story altogether you are in sups party ? lol ..not good.  
Dutta is drawn to the pics of the video shown by sups to deviate his attention.  But she fails to realise that dutta now is even more drawn towards naku than just the child. 
Hmm, very thought provoking convo between the two in the garden.  The garden seems to be playing a vital part in their bonding lol,..yeah right LOL each coming to terms with a painful past n grappling to move forward... 
Dutta comes clean and i especially liked his honest admission. To me he has commited a sin under dures n is paying the price, troubled by his conscience...but bharti, will you let the guy move ahead and forget that night? plz let him do so LOL Now with the arrival of the baby it will further complicate matters.  I wouldnt wish this dilemma even on my worse enemy.   But naku has a very simple solution and that is drawing him closer to her.  She has been healing him plus now giving him the joy of his life which will be a lethal combination for sups to match...yup she is threatening sups position in his life  
Finally supriya sees the emerging folly of her mission.. she will need some divine intervention to keep her dreams of a happy family from crumbling to pieces..sups is sups , she is a fighter, she will not lose so easily  
Thank you Rose for keeping your need for thanks , its wonderful writing for u all Hug.  Its been a pleasure.  Take too and thanks for changing the DP , he looks delicious TongueTongue Smile

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