Originally posted by Hamlet53
I,Me,&Myself is here..
wowww kya opening picture.. palang thoor!
chaal me here now.. IWL~ Chapter 12
Listen welcome back, great to have this feisty Naku back.. and you Rose..
~ so hospital visitation, reveals Supriya's priceless dream on the screen, really ironic as she pays
quite a price for it!so the dream is literally bought by this business woman. However great joy from both women..the wonders of technology!..Naku a tad realistic as to who the baby really belongs to?
~ Still as the baby's real mother, Naku goes so far as to judge Supriya's maternal instincts towards this baby as genuine, and something Supriya was determined to achieve no matter what.. of course this is an error on Naku's part , as the real fact is not that Supriya is desperate to be a mom.. but its to bind Dutta and all that comes with him, for
Naku caught in a whirlpool of hormonal changes, further soothes herself that as the baby's real mother she would at least be granted the initial nurturing moments with the infant..but eventually she would leave her/him in Supriya's caring hands... yes things are so positive..cause for contentment.. good tonic for pregnancy..
~ohh scan showing some fetal concern..here they tend to speak to the mother first , or is the doctor in doubt who the mother is..?yes naku has
gone to the loo, but doc could have waited ,unless she concludes
that Supriya lardki ke malkin hai..
~lovely to see Dutta showing paternal interest in welfare of baby, marred by Supriya's fibbing..Is she shielding Information from Dutta, as otherwise is
not specified clearly by the doctor..?
Makes me wonder how vital it is for doctors to report facts to patients and not leave room for doubts in a patient's mind about her/his medical condition.
~brilliant! Naku's objective point of view as a consumer, college more profitable in terms of investment of
human capital..as opposed to a shopping mall which will
be profitable to a few money making capitalists.. fantastic paragraph , very well written loved it..
looks like D
utta and N
aku think alike.. and Supriya stands alone!
~ ahhh the garden conversation between Dutta and Naku.. is a highlight of the chapter.. beautifullywritten..sums up the sweet reality that if two people are attracted to each other,they end up emotionally and spiritually
opening up,before each other with ease.. conversation just flows , spontaneously..From a distance they look a cozy couple, their tete a tete about what he would want a girl or boy ?is
something only an expectant wife ask her husband.. How easily she teases out his in depth emotions and he speaks readily. How simply she sets him right about their liaison.. that night..his regrets and her optimism..beautiful scene Rosie.. memories of Ltl1 convos between Dutta and Naku flash up..
~ohhh dear Supriya rattles! Rose ,many thanks for a fantastic UD.. please continue.. waiting for next chapter.. much love, as ever yours , hammie.