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Posted: 09 October 2012 at 7:34pm | IP Logged


Teri Gehraiyon Mein Jhankne Ki Koshishein Karta Raha

Zindagi Guzar Gayi Main Raha Wahin Khada

 

Woh Poochte Hain Kia Hasil Kia

Main Kehta Hoon Ke Ae Suno, Tumhe Hai Kia Khabar Bhala

 

Woh Kehta Hain Khaali Haath Reh Gaya

Main Kehta Hoon Mujhe Khuda Mil Gaya

 

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Khuli Aankhein To Jahan Naya Tha

Zameen Nayi Thi Aasman Koi Aur Tha

 

Boondh Boondh Karke Har Qatra

Chere Pe Mere Sama Gaya

 

Phisalne Lagi Ret Haathon Se Mere Is Tarha

Zarre Zarre Pe Hukm Kisi Aur Ka Tha

 

Pattay Bhi Sharmane Lage Kuch Is Tarha

Hawaaon Ka Rukh Bhi Badal Gaya, Uska Hukm Tha

 

Lehrein Bhi Muskurane Lagi Paas Akey Mere

Gehraaiyon Ko Chupane Lagi Machalte Huye

 

Kuch main Bhi Has Diya Tere Kamaal Dekh Ke

Kuch Tu Bhi Has Diya Tere Karamaat Dekhe Ke

 

(^based on my sudden urge to teleport to a desterted island =D)


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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 7:40pm | IP Logged
Aaahhh and I wanna go to the deserted island WITH you!
Mujhe Khuda mil gaya <3
Beautiful..this was so diff and so surprising, but of course a good one! <3


Edited by OnlyHope - 11 October 2012 at 7:40pm

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Posted: 12 October 2012 at 8:29am | IP Logged
Beautiful...Big smile

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Posted: 12 October 2012 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
That was absolutely beautiful esp the first three stanzas. Well done. Clap

I have read your others posts too, you write beautiful and there is always a calmness to your post. Don't know how to put it but it feels very smooth and nice. :)

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Posted: 12 October 2012 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
so beautifully written, loved it! <3

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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 2:39am | IP Logged
Lovely Smile

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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Oh wow!!!

Like I've always told you you write beautifully!
I so loved each n every line of it!!!

Masha Allah!

Do write something more like this

Love you!!!

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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 11:27am | IP Logged
Really beautiful!!!
Lovely work Hug

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