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Here is part 9 enjoy and please ignore any grammatical errors😊
Part 9
Khanak: shaan i think hamne puri tayari kardi hai to kaal investors ke
samne, hum apna issue solve karlenge, woh shaan raat bohut ho
chuki hai toh hume sojana chahiye
Khaank : woh tume kuch chahiye tha kya, she didn't meet her gaze
Shaan was just looking at her n thought " khanak ese kyu baat karhahi hai ."
Shaan: nahi muhje kuch nahi chahiye...tum batao kya baat
hai...tabyat kharab hai kya...(concerned)
Khanak: nahi mein thikh hu
Shaan: khanak tum wahase bina bataye kyu chali ayi...zaruru koi
baat hai...( move close to her )...kya baat hai khanak
Khanak: shaan mene kaha na kuch nahi aur tum jao yahase muje
neendh arahihe
Shaan: thikh hai pehle muhje yeh batao baat kya hai...( cupped her
face and make her looked into his eyes )
Khanak looked into his eyed but " U R MY GF ." capture her mind
Khanak moved from there shaan was surpised
Khanak back was facing shaan
Khanak: abh jao muje neendh arahihe
Khanak didn't let shaan to talk more, she bid him good night and shaan left
thinking what goes wrong
After shaan left Khanak was still thinking about Riya and shaan , after some
time sleep took over her
Next morning
Khanak and shaan meet the investors they sort out their problems and they
finalize the deal, khanak didn't looked at shaan, she was hurt, shaan sensed
but he didn't asked her anything
In Mumbai
Sunil and Madhvi in their room
Madhvi: sunil tume kya lagta hai shaan aur khanak , kya woh ek dusre
se pyar karte hai, bachpan se khanak aur shaan ko dekha hai, wo ek
dusre ki kitna care karte hai
Sunil was thinking some things else, he send shaan with khanak, so as they
come close coz he saw how they didn't talk much after shaan came from
London
He was expected them to be close as shaan came after 3 years but all was
different.
Madhvi: sunil tu sunrareho me kya keh rahihu
Sunil : ha Madhvi tum kya kerahi thi ... woh !!...
Madhvi : sunil !!!!!!!!!!! me khanak aur shaan ki baat kar rahihu
Sunil and Madhvi talk about shanak, he told madhvi why he send shaan with
khanak
Sunil: Madhvi mein shaan koi isiliye bheja hai..takeh woh khanak se
baat karpae...muhje esa lagta hai woh useh kuch kehna chahta
hai... lekin nai kaha yah shayad moka nahi mila
Madhvi: sunil mein bhi toh yahi chahti hu...abh dono shadi keh
layak hogae...toh hum kyu nah khanak se kahe shaan se shaadi
karneko
Sunil: nahi Madhvi tum khanak se kuch maat kehna ...agar tum
kahogi toh shayad woh ha bhi karle aur kuch na kahe...
Madhvi: lekin sunil yeh toh bohut acha hai agar usne ha kardi toh
Sunil: nahi Madhvi ...mein yeh kehne ki koshish kar rahahu ke
khanak ko yeh na lage keh kyuki woh hamere pass rahihe toh hum
isiliye yeh chahtehe...aur shayad woh ha karde hamara ehsan
chukane keliye
Madhvi: mene hamesha use apni beti mana hai ... aur aabh meh use
apne shaan ki dulhan banana chahti hu
Sunil: pehle hum yeh janneki koshish karenge keh kya woh shaan seh
shaadi karna chahti hai
Madhvi: thikh hai...sunil tum sahi kehraheho
At breakfast table
Akki left early and boo resting in her room, dadi , madhvi and sunil were
having breakfast
Dadi: sunil tum ne shaan aur khanak ko akela bhej kar bohut acha
kiya woh, dono yaha khulke baat nai kar rahethe, pata nai kya baat
hai, khanak to kitni khush thi shaan keh ane ki khabarse ,phir jab wo
aya to pata
nahi Kya huwa, khoi khoi rehne lagi hai dono
Madhvi : ha mummy ji, lekin aab jab wo dono waha saath hai toh woh
thikse baat karenge.
Sunil : mene khanak ko apni beti bananah chahta hu hamesha ke liya
Uske liya shaan koh kuch karna hoga
They talk more about them and then sunil left for work
Later shaan called his dad and told about their meeting that all went well so
they are coming back , sunil thought and said " woh shaan tume aaj ke
liye phirse wahi rukna parega ,woh investors ne waha par choti si
party rakhi hai to tume aur khanak ka waha rehna zaruri hai ."
Shaan didn't understand anything and thought why investors didn't told them
but he felt happy, we will get much time to spend with khanak ,and told her
how much he love her.
Khanak came to shaan as they were leaving that day shaan told her they will
have to stay there for one more day
Khanak: Kyu ? hume aaj phir rukna parega woh deal toh finalize
hagai na
Shaan: ha lakin abhi abhi dad ka phone aya tha ke investor's ne party
organise ki ha to hame woh attend karni hogi
Khanak was surprise of sudden change, he told shaan, she don't have a
party dress to wear in the evening
Khanak : shaan ase achanak party
Shaan : yeah khanak , we have to attend this
Khanak: lekin shaan mere pass party wear nahi hai, i mean i didn't
know keh esa Kuch hoga so i didn't take any dress for the party
Shaan: khanak , wese bhi we are free today aur party evening me hai
, toh we can shop now
Khanak: lekin shaan ...
Shaan cut her off and hold her hand and said " chalo come quick no
argument ok."
Khanak: lekin shaan hum kaha jarahehe...
Shaan: hum shopping jarahehe
Both get into the car
Khanak: shaan please kya hum yeah party skip nahi karsak teh,
muhje gar jana hai. Mein Adda se baat karlungi ( don't want to be with
shaan after what she heard the privious night )
Shaan: khanak mene dad se baat kithi, lekin uhnone kaha it's
important isiliye hume rukna parega
Khanak: thikh hai lekin hum sham ko party meh zyada nahi rukenge
Shaan: thikh hai jesa tum kaho
Shaan to himself while driving " kya mein khanak se puchu keh woh kaal
roomse kyu chaligai thi ... nai dude kaal jab mein kareme gaya
tha toh she was behaving differently ... , lagta hai muhje party mein
bi karna karega ."
Khanak: shaan...
Shaan started at her sweet voice
Shaan: Mmhhh!!!!!!!!!
Khanak: kya mmhhh!!!!!!!!!!! Shaan...tume pata hai nah shopping area kahahe
Shaan: khanak...mana keh mein 3 saal baad India ayahu iska matlab
yeh nahi ke muhje nahi pata...aur wese bhi i used to come here
with bhaiya for some work sometimes
Khanak thought " kya mein shaan se Riya keh bareme puchu... nahi
agar woh naraz hogaya toh... pehle usne kabhi bhi mujse kuch nahi
chupaya...lekin shayad yeh uska personal matter hai isilye muhje
nahi bataya ."
Shaan: khanak abh tum kaha khogai...
Khanak: kuch nahi shaan... ( looked at him her mind played with her
to ask or not )
Shaan: khanak woh muhje tumse kuch baat karni hai ...( want to ask
about romit)
Khanak: haa shaan kaho...( in her mind kya shaan Riya ki baat karna
chahta hae)
Shaan: woh...tum aur romit collage mein saath meh the...
Khanak: romit... ( in her mind and looked at shaan )... ha hum saath mein
the the...aur ... ( she wanted to say and jaanvi too )
Then shaan's phone rang and at the same time they reached the shopping
area
Shaan: bhaiya...
Akshay: chote tum log wapas kaab araheho...
Shaan: bhaiya hum kaal arahehe...kyu apko nahi pata...
Akshay: kaal kyu...aur muhje kya nahi pata
Shaan: dad neh nahi bataya...( surprised )
Akshay: kya nahi bataya... (confused too )
Shaan: woh bhaiya hum kaal arahehe...investors neh yaha party
organise ki hai toh aaj hum toh attend karni paregi
Akshay: party...muje dad neh nahi bataya...lekin shayad
bhulgae honge
Shaan: ha shayad ... lekin muje bhi laga party achanak
Akshay: kher chor ... yeh bata waha saab thikh se saab solved
hogaya na
Shaan: haa bhaiya saab sahise hogaya ...
Akshay: thikh ai chotey .. chal bye take care aur khanak ka bhi
Shaan : bye bhaiya
Khanak: kya huwa... kya kaha bhaa neh
Shaan: surprise khanak...bhaiya koh bhi party keh bareme kuch
nahi pata
Khanak: aes kese nahi pata...Ada neh nahi bataya
Shaan: shayad kaam zyada hoga isiliye bhulgae honge ...chalo hum
pohgaye hai...
They got out of the car shaan completely forget what khanak was saying
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This content was originally posted by: ktymfanlovely...:):):)...nEXT part soon...-saroj
This content was originally posted by: jaisyjazzOMG it seems like whole world r after our love birds why dont they leave them they want to talk for gods sake
really very excited for the party bcoz aisi parties kuch na kuch hota hai aur maja aata haii want khanak to wear a seductive dress for the party shan's expression will be worth to c :)
Awesome update heer …..loved it
Khanak's wired behaviour confused Shaan……thodi der pahle she was fine & suddenly she come out of his room without informing & when shaan asked her she didn't tell him anything but instead didn't let him stay in her room :P Shaan was worried abt her health but he had no idea that she heard his half convo
Shanak complited their work & cracked the deal too but Khanak didn't Talk to Shaan ……Loved the way you described Sunil & Madhavi's Convo ……….Sunil & mads both wanted Khanak to be with Shaan only …Sunil had senced that Shaan wanted to talk to Khanak so he send him with Khanak & on the other side Madhavi wants Khanak as her DIL. Loved Sunils Concern for her ……..thye want Shanak to get married but without any force,
Breakfast scene was superb Dadi too wants it …..Awesomeee .Sunil gave a nice excuse to shaan to make thm spand one more day together. Loved Shanak time …It was awesome ……..Finally Shanak started Behaving Normal …….please yaar solve karva kuch toh ab ……….but loved the part
Khanak didn't had any party dress & shaan took her out for Shopping too ………. Loved the way Shaan said he knows pune ……LOL nahi pata hoga toh bhejna mere pass main le jaungi :P hehehe Kidding …...Shanak wanted to talk to each other about Romit & Riya but couldn't …….Shaan finally started the topic but Khanak couldn't talk much dur to call ….LOL mujhe laga Akshay ka call bhanda phod dega :P lekin bach gaye :)
Waiting for the next part………..jaldi post karna
Continue soon
Love
Pranjal.
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