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Hello everyone... well this is my first attempt on my favourite couple Shanak, there are awesome writer in this forum compare to that my is nothing but still got my courage n post here

Thank u sneha . you encourage me to write this FF n post  here . Thanx alot

This is my first ff so please guys ignore any grammatical errors ,

Criticisms are welcome... please guys do give me your feed back

 hope u guys like it

FF Pyaar

Intro

Khanak parents died when she was 6 years in a plane crash

Madhvi n sunil look after her, she was like their daughter to them

Sunil and khanak father Mr Kapoor were best friends 

Both families were rich and very close friends , khanak's father was a  business partner of Sunil , after their death, sunil  took care of the whole business and thought to involve Khanak when she become young and take his father's place

Shaan and khanak liked each other since childhood; they study together, play together and took care of each other.

When they grow up and start collage, shaan went to London for higher studies but khanak didn't go  as she was scared after her parent's dead in a plane crash  

they called each other and share how they spent their day frequently

 In collage khanak met a girl and a guy  ( Jaanvi and Romit)

Jaanvi is Romit's girl friend and they become a good  friends with Khanak.

Khanak and shaan has completed their studies in different state

Shaan was coming back from London after completing his studies but they both didn't tell about their friends to each other

After khanak complete her collage, Sunil involved khanak in their business to take care of her father's share ,Romit too  joined her and both were working  on a project.

Beside her studies at evening Khanak was taking dance classes as she love to dancing 

In London

Shaan  met a girl called Riya and she become his friend and only friend  but Riya was attracted to shaan, one day Shaan got to know about Riya that she liked him, he told her that he loves someone else but  didn't address the girls name  

  Part 1

Shaan was coming to India.

Khanak is very happy and dancing with joy, she will meet her partner, her friend  her lover, her burthal after 3 years.

Akshay, khusboo, khanak and shan's parent were very happy, they all planed  to arrange a party for shaan's arrival

Dadi came from Pune to meet her Ladla shaan , she has  dreamt  khanak as choti khandelwal bahu from her childhood, she is also dadi's ladli. 

All are doing preparations; every one took charged for certain things

Khanak and boo bhabhi are very closed, they are friends

Khanak share many things with her about her collage but she didn't tell her about shaan.

Shaan's entry

Shaan came to khandelwal house with his friend Riya, she wanted to see India and she will stay in khandelwal house as a guest

Shaan entered the house and took the blessing from dadi,from his parents and he hugged Akki, boo and Jay,

He scan the hall and his eyes were searching for only one person who was nowhere to  b seen

khanak was in the kitchen preparing kheer for her Burthal, and kept thinking about shaan with a wide grin on her lips

 shaan introduce Riya and all welcome her warmly , except boo  who felt something very odd about her, when khanak came from the kitchen  she saw shaan hugging a girl ( Riya ) . she  was giving  a peck on shaan 's cheek

seeing this  khanak felt very bad and something pinned her heart, she thought shaan with a girl ? and felt as he loves her

 shaan in his mind "where is Khanak ", he wanted too meet his love after 3 years

shaan turn and see khanak was looking at them, she composed herself, smile to shaan and they hug friendly.

shaan felt something is wrong seeing khanak as he didn't expect they will meet like this strangely, before he came to India, he thought he will give  khanak a tight hug  and wil tell her how much he missed her but when he come nothing happened like that way

shaan intro Riya but didn't say much about her

Shaan : Khanak yeh Riya hai aur . to Riya " yeah khanak hai my best friend." Khanak thought " Best friend ."and looked at shaan

Both girlies said hii to each other and then Riya start to talk to shaan
Riya : shaan i felt very happy meeting all, India me Joint family ke sath rehneka kitna alag mazaa hai, people share their worries and happiness together wow!! I am very excited

Khanak saw Riya talking dreamily and holding shaan's hands

Riya hugged shaan again and said  "thank you shaan"  tumare sath muhje yaha lane keliye  and she kept talking to shaan non stop

Khanak notice Riya's behaviour of holding shaan's hand and hugging him every time, she excused herself  and went to her room

She was very happy at the news shaan is coming to India but after seeing him with Riya she felt very bad and thought many things about them " may be shaan love Riya and she came with him to meet his family ."  after sometimes Khanak moved to the kitchen were she made Shaan favourite dishes

Dinner time

Shaan was pampered as he was there after 3 years, Akshay and Sunil met him when they go for their busness trip to London, all family members were very happy to have shaan back     Dinner dishes made by khanak were shaan's favourite and she served them lovingly.

Shaan gaze didn't leave on khanak as he was admiring her beautiful face.

after their dinner, all seated in the hall busy chatting with each other

Shaan wanted to meet khanak alone

Shaan: are yeh saab haya, muje khanak se akele mein  milna hai, khanak tum kaho ho yaar

Khanak was in the kitchen preparing for the desert, she came from the kitchen with small bowls full with kheer, she served all

Shaan : kheer, wow!! I missed this very much and he start eating kheer and said yummmyyy!!!!!!!!!!  Like a kid , Mom its too gud  and put a spoon full in his mouth.

Madhvi : shaan yeah mene nahi khanak ne banai hai and she too eat kheer and then added aaj ka dinner bhi khanak me hi banaya hai

Shaan looked at khanak  and she was too looking at him. They both stare each other.

Khushboo: khanak please muhje ekk aur bowl chahiye and broke their lovely stare

Khanak serve another round of kheer to all

They chat for some time and all retired to their room, shaan and khanak didn't get chance to meet alone, shaan showed Riya her room, khanak went to Riya's room to keep water bottle and saw Riya hugging shaan very tightly biding shaan good nite

Khanak left from there water bottle in her hand, she felt very bad and tears roll down her eyes

Shaan : stop it Riya!!!!  mene tuhme pehle bhi kahatha, i don't like your behaviour aur yeh bar bar gale garna, i don't like it, tum yaha isliye ho ke u wanted to see India coz tum yaha kisiko nahi janti aur me tum yaha mere garpe rehne ko kaha .

So from now maintain distance and shaan angrily left the room.


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Edited by heer_85 - 24 September 2013 at 11:23am

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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 10:49am | IP Logged
Wow its lovely heer...

Beautifully written...

Wow shanak childhood lovers and friends...Waah am loving it...Smile

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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 11:38am | IP Logged
WOW!!! i cant tell how much i love it seriously meri khushi ka toh koi andaja hi nahi 
getting a golden chance to read too many stories on my fav shanak from great writers like this what more could be asked for
shanak chidhood lovers this is different OMG they love each other from chidhood after staying apart from each other for 3 years they r still in love with each other
riyaAngry i know uska india me aane ka maksad kya hai b***** just get out of here i too expected a tight hug yaar but ye riya ne sab bigad diya 
heer kuch bhi ho ek tight hug toh dena chahiye tha first tight hug ki baat kuch alag hoti hai yaar 
plzz continue and update soonSmile

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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
Beautiful start Heer Clap

LOved the concept & charactarisation totally Clap Finally you started Posting the FF Big smile Thank you Sneha for forcing her to post it Big smile i completely loved it...U are awesome heer Clap

Shanak childhood lovers ...nice concept ...So Now missunderstandings hs already grown netween the lovely duo Ouch Riya & her chipku behaviour gave khanak a wrong signal & she thought Shaan has found out a girl for him in abroad Cry thats so unfair yaar ...bichaare theek se mile bhi nahi aur pahle hi panga shuru Angry i hated Riya seriously Angry

Kheer scene was fabulous ...i loved that eye lock & shaan serching for khanak everywhere Tongue he too was confused about her behaviour but poor guy didnt get the chance to meet & ask her Ouch i want this riya to get kicked out by khusboo .,...as khushboo is khanak's friend too & shaans bhabhi Big smile loved the bonding shared by the family Big smile ...Wonderful start Big smile Dadi wanted khanak to became her choti bahu Big smile supoerbbbClap

BTW one question who's jay?? & what is he doing in khandelwal house. sorry i didnt get this connection ..." Shaan entered the house and took the blessing from dadi,from his parents and he hugged Akki, boo and Jay,"

waiting for next one ...continue soon 

Love 
Pranjal.

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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ktym

Wow its lovely heer...

Beautifully written...

Wow shanak childhood lovers and friends...Waah am loving it...Smile
 
 Thank u for commenting n loving it 
i was scared to post but now i m happy u r loving it 

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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jaisyjazz

WOW!!! i cant tell how much i love it seriously meri khushi ka toh koi andaja hi nahi 
getting a golden chance to read too many stories on my fav shanak from great writers like this what more could be asked for
shanak chidhood lovers this is different OMG they love each other from chidhood after staying apart from each other for 3 years they r still in love with each other
riyaAngry i know uska india me aane ka maksad kya hai b***** just get out of here i too expected a tight hug yaar but ye riya ne sab bigad diya 
heer kuch bhi ho ek tight hug toh dena chahiye tha first tight hug ki baat kuch alag hoti hai yaar 
plzz continue and update soonSmile

 shanak are my favorite too, i love this jodi so thought to try it Smile
    yeah shaan expected a tight hug but didn fold as he though LOL Poor baby LOL
 age age dekhenge kitne hug milte hai shaan ko Wink

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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -pranjal-

Beautiful start Heer Clap

LOved the concept & charactarisation totally Clap Finally you started Posting the FF Big smile Thank you Sneha for forcing her to post it Big smile i completely loved it...U are awesome heer Clap

Shanak childhood lovers ...nice concept ...So Now missunderstandings hs already grown netween the lovely duo Ouch Riya & her chipku behaviour gave khanak a wrong signal & she thought Shaan has found out a girl for him in abroad Cry thats so unfair yaar ...bichaare theek se mile bhi nahi aur pahle hi panga shuru Angry i hated Riya seriously Angry

Kheer scene was fabulous ...i loved that eye lock & shaan serching for khanak everywhere Tongue he too was confused about her behaviour but poor guy didnt get the chance to meet & ask her Ouch i want this riya to get kicked out by khusboo .,...as khushboo is khanak's friend too & shaans bhabhi Big smile loved the bonding shared by the family Big smile ...Wonderful start Big smile Dadi wanted khanak to became her choti bahu Big smile supoerbbbClap

BTW one question who's jay?? & what is he doing in khandelwal house. sorry i didnt get this connection ..." Shaan entered the house and took the blessing from dadi,from his parents and he hugged Akki, boo and Jay,"

waiting for next one ...continue soon 

Love 
Pranjal.

 Thanx Pranjal for a long sweet comment and yeah thanx to Sneha Smile 
  Riya is chipkali LOL and Khanak took it wrong, the family bonding is awesome u wil love them more in next updates, Jay is Madhvi's sis son, leaving with khandelwal, in the next part wil knw abt Jay  

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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 4:20pm | IP Logged
sorry just came back from work..
but anyways loved the update babe cant wait to read more..
love how everyone still remember shanak and write om them...
keep up the goood work ..
xxx

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