~Won't Give Up~ 12/12 UPDATED p16 - Page 4

Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for the quick update dear...😊
super update ,,,loved it ...
premeer scenes were awesome ...
can't wait for the next update...
please update soon ...
thanks for the pm ...
Posted: 11 years ago
aww..lovely story..
premeer is just awesome..loved the friendship they shares...and the underlying love for each other..
bt i'm confused abt marriage thing..how come heer's marriage fixed with someone else? and also prem attending it too? they are in love na..?
cant wait to read 3rd part to find things..
pls update soon..
thanks for pm
Posted: 11 years ago
Wow Grace quick update πŸ˜² that was really shocking. I was expecting to wait even months πŸ˜†
Thanks.

pg 4  part 2
PH friendship is very true and honest. 
That's what I got out of the way they both taking care of each other.
It kind of surprised me friendship taking a sudden turn.
I think you carefully chose words in a way no one can really 
guess for sure where this is going πŸ˜³
I still don't know what'll happen. It was a great read - v. interesting.
Loved Preet popping in between and his interaction with PH πŸ˜Ž 
He's so funny and caring. I wonder what role he plays between PH 
or if he's just a guest appearance in the story.
So Heer's leaving. Lookng forward to see what happens to her later 
and what new things happens to Prem.
Ginger is a lovely addition so cute. Loved the update.

Edited by AASUS - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update... how you showed the transform in their relationship..truly awesome... loved it


Posted: 11 years ago
wow grace
it was quite romantic update
loved premeer's romance and their cute fight at the end 😳
please cont soon
thanx 4 pm
Posted: 11 years ago
Awhhh omggg they are sooo cutee! Your writing is so good grace! I am always in my own world of premeer when i am reading your fan fictions! Amazing job! Thank you sooo muchhh! Loved it! Cant wait to read what happens in tonight's date! Love how heer tricked him into getting changed for the date! And oh my gosh preet<33 so glad you added a little bit of his part in this update! Do continue soon grace! Xoxoxo :)
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update..loved it😊

Posted: 11 years ago

another beautifull os.

luved it so much.😊

luved premeer's friendship,the way she gets jelous with ginger,the way he teased her,the way he manoo her,the way they get into relationship,their date,their romance luved every thing.😊

but i m confused about wedding.πŸ˜•

is she really going to marry with another guy?πŸ˜•after all this relationship and the moments they share.

and if she really is,then why the hell is he grinning like fool in her wedding.😑

i can't wait now plz update soon.

and by the way madam when are u going to update "awmarw"?

update sooon and

thanks for the pm.😊

Posted: 11 years ago
I m bck di. ;) :* 
Update? :D :) :D :) 

PS- This is my 6000 comment so Posting it here. My Fav Place. :D 
Posted: 11 years ago
Plzzz upppdaaattteee sssooonnn waitinggg

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