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New FF! Bardash Nahi Hotha! Chapter 3 page 7 (Page 3)

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wow!!! seems nice... hope it will have some raji scenes...
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Interesting character sketch.. waiting for update  
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Chapter 1:

It was morning in rajpal nagar and the sunlight shone on 2 naughty yet fearless faces!!!! It was 7am in the morning, time for these 2 cousins to go college, today was their exams! But it was a terrible day for them because of 2 reasons, which they hate!
IN THE BEDROOM (RASHI AND GOPI):

The alarm rang!
Rashi: uffo, ye stupid alarm abhi hi bajna tha, oh god, plz, plz aaj meri raksha karna! Aur, aur ye gopi bhi na, pehle tho humse pehle uth jaathi thi but aaj uthne ka naam hi leh rahi hain! Hmmm, iss ki bhi kya galthi, aaj din hi toh itna bura hain, but uthna tho parega hi madam ko! Gopi, uth na, subah hongaye hain, college Nahi jana kya, aaj exams haina, jaldi uth! 7am baj Gaya hain!

Gopi: are yaar, raashi, Kyun yaar dilaya ki exams hain, hum Nahi uthe geh Aur tum bhi so jao! Baas main jo honga dekha jaega!
Rashi: tumse dekha jaega, humse Nahi, chalo utho, mummy aa gayi toh sar par tande paani se nahaye gi tumme! Wo toh accha lage ga na! (smiles)
Gopi: shut up rashi, Hume pata hain ki tum kya karne ki koshish kar Rahi ho, hum tumari baton mein Nahi aane wale aur waise bhi aaj tak aisa Tumare saath hi hua hain!
Rashi: hain Bhagwan, ok, humara saath hua hain, but Tumare saath bhi ho saktha hain na! Hum last time keh rahe hain ok, uth jao, warna hum chale jaenge phir akele aana!
Gopi: hum aayenge hi Nahi, Tumare saath jaane ka koi shok Nahi hain humme!
Rashi: ok, jab Tumari doli uthe gi na iss ghar se tab bhi hum Nahi honge tab bhi aisa hi kehna. (sad tone)!
Gopi:(got up right away)! Hey! Kabardaar dubara aisa kaha tho,(angry) hum jis ghar main bhi jaege tumme apne saath leke jaenge, by hook or by crook! (smile)
Rasi: hmmm, humme pata tha tum aisa hi Kaho gi, but asali duniya main aisa nahi hotha hain!
Gopi: but hum aisa karke dikhaaye ge, dekhna tum!
Rashi: ok madam, but iss waqt chalo, late ho rahe hain!!!
Gopi: hmmm, ok!!! But mami ji ki Baat Nahi Mano gi main, bilkul bhi Nahi!!!!
Rashi: ur right, but ab chale!
They quickly get ready and go downstairs for breakfast!
Urmila: toh aa gayi meri betiyaan!Kyun itni der lagai, wo bhi iss din itne zaroori di, ye buri Baat haina.
Rashi: yeh hi toh main iss madam ko samjah Rahi thi but humse chagra karne lagi even though she was right!
Urmila: rashi, iss se Bari hona, toh iss se samjane ki bajah iss ka saath Kyun deh Rahi ho!
Gopi: simple mami ji, because hum sahi hain!
Rashi: not really!
Urmila: ab bas Karo tum dono, waise aaj ghar jaldi aajana, wajah pata haina!
Gopi and rashi: haan, typical ladke wale dekhne aa rahe hain!!!
Urmila: haan, aur gopi tum, acche se Baat karna unse, agli baar ki tarah iss baar bhi Nahi chale gayi!
Gopi: are kami ji, iss me meri kya galthi hain, I mean kaise kaise ladke aate hain! Aur unke families, especially un Larkon ki maa, kya samajhthi hain khud ko!(angry)
Rashi: Teri hone wali sasu maa! (smirking)
Gopi: Kya!
Rashi: I mean, wo issi reason sai hi aati hain! Haina mummy!
Urmila: bilkul sach, ab chalo, college ka samme hon Gaya hain, exams sahi se dena! Air jaldi aajana, aaj Bohot bari ghar ke lok aane wale hain!
rashi: relax mummy!
Gopi: waise mami ji, aisa kon aane wala hain?(confused and curious)
Urmila: mamuli ghar ke lok Nahi, kokila behen modi ka beta!
Rashi and gopi: kokila behen modi, bura izzatdaar naam lag raha hain!
Urmila: aur Nahi tho kya, Bohot izzatdaar aur bare lok hain, iss baar koi galthi naa karna, ye rishtha paka hona chahiye!
Gopi: hmmm, waise, in ka koi dusra beta hain, I mean generally pooch Rahi hun!
Urmila: Haan, un ki jethani ka beta jigar hain, usko bhi shaadi ki umar hain, shahyad usko bhi saath leh aaye! (smiles)
Gopi: hmmm, interesting!!!!

Precap: kokila came to see gopi and rashi!
Gopi makes a deal!


So, this was my 1st chapter! I know we haven't discovered much, but hope u like it!
Ignore if I bored u!
Like and comment if enjoyed!


Anmol!!!

Ouch Big smile

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 12:26am | IP Logged
very nice startClap
can u plz write the dialouge in english??Confused
update soon

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nice part...continue soon... cn u plz write dialogues in english...

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really nice continue soon

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tht was really nice...plzz update soonSmile

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