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This Time Forever: Chap10 parts 1&2 updtd 11/14 pg144 (Page 99)

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Posted: 25 January 2013 at 8:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by saibanu

Anu di , its beautiful chapter ...  everything is wonderfully explained Clap

Thanks Sai.Big smile


Good to see that Nidhi finally decided to give one more chance to Ashu , yes ...as you said mistakes happen and even ashu did hurt her ...But he himself suffered a lot for wrong choices he made but I am happy that now they are getting their share of happiness Embarrassed

Yes, as least for now.  But kitni  der last karti hai, kisko pata.Wink

Nidhi's turmoil is very well expressed , She want him but she dont want him also ..its quite natural to feel when the person she loved so much can hurt her so badly...its not easy to forgive and move on ...

Yes, poor thing is so afraid of getting hurt again.  Forgiveness is very very difficult at times, and it takes a very generous person to be  able to forgive as Nidhi has.Big smile

As Anjie said , yes Nidhi is very strong ...She carefully picked her life .. piece by piece and built is all over again and now Ashu is also back in her life ...Hope her happy days start from here and never end Smile
Happiness is Relative.  And what are the   ups  without the downs.Wink

Khushi and nishi and 2 little devils but they are very adorable ...Just loved their moments Smile

LOL yes, Both the girls are adorable angels.

And coming to their "Ahem Ahem" moments LOLLOL...wel what can I say, it just took my breath away ..Gosh! that was splendid Embarrassed

Glad you think so.  I had trouble breathing when I was writing it too.  I was so embarassed, everytime one of my kids or hubby came into the room, i frantically turned off my computer.  Nahin toh meri 
band baj jaati.
LOL
But I am just scared what will happen whn mallu come back !! I know ashu will stand by nidhi's side but still ...we all know how Mallu is ...Will wait for your next chapter 

Ab Mallu kya karego and Ahu kaise react karega, yeh toh aapko Chap mein padne ke liye wait karna padega.LOL

This is one of my Favorite FF..I love all characters in this FF ...Will be eagerly waiting for next chapter Anu di ..Thank you so much for this update ...Enjoyed a lot Clap



Thank you for being such a sweetheart Sai
I really appreciate your comments, and am
so glad that you enjoyed the update, specailly since it is your
favorite FF.

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Posted: 25 January 2013 at 9:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sukirti

Awesome chapter Anu...

Finally Nidhi gave one more chance to Ashu ... yes it was his mistake but he also suffered a lot.. This Khushi is such a cute kid and Nishi too, adorable and naughty... actually they are typical girls non stop chatter box ...

Loved the scene in the mandir when Ashu was waiting Nidhi and kids came and Ashu asked for kiss ... loved their consummation also ;) was nite expecting that so it was real surprise !!

Hi SukirtiBig smile
Thank you so much for your comments
I am glad that you liked the chap.
Yes, SR.  Well that was a surprise for me too.
I was not planning on that happening just yet.Embarrassed

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Posted: 25 January 2013 at 9:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aru29

Originally posted by Libra

Wow Arushi
that was quick. Hai naa...am super fastWinkLOL

Yes, Nidhi was angry with him.  But she loves him a lot, and mostly forgiveness does come with true love.  Plus she is also very fair.  So that had to kick in sometime.  She had to realize her own mistakes also.  Nahin toh story aage kaise badhti.Big smile
agree Big smile

Yes, Well...  It was needed here.  I was blushing through the whole writing process also.Embarrassed
can imagine thatLOLLOL

Yes Khushi does have impeccable timing ! Huh.LOL
Lekin abhi toh Ashu ki khair nahin.  bina soche samjhe promise jo kar diya.Wink
oh yaa bechara...phir phas gayaWinkLOLbut i doubt nidhi would mind complying to this demand that much??what say?WinkLOL

Thanks Arushi. for the awesome review and the lovely
compliments.
I am glad the chap appealed to you.
Anyway thank you for these comments, they
help me a lot and encourage me to write.
u are most welcome anuji!!!! am very glad if i wud have been able to contribute and do even 1% of that...Hugand sumwhere ur writing inspires me as well so i thank you for thatBig smile

Next update HHGA
eagerly waiting!!!!Day Dreamingwen would that be ??

Abhi, I just got everyone settled in for the night.
I will start on it now.Embarrassed

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Posted: 25 January 2013 at 9:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepa17

Hi Anuji

Hi DeepajiBig smile
 
 
I am late but very busy with work you year end.

I understand, please don't worry about it.Big smile
 
First - thank you made up for the time in the update for this FF.

You are welcome.
I tried to make up for the delay.  Glad I was able too.Embarrassed
 
Liked the way Khushi makes Nidhi & Ashu to do as per her wishes. Getting them to spend almost all of their free time actually turned out to be a turning point for Nidhi.

Yes, being together all the time, will soften a person up.
And Khushi, knows exactly what buttons to push.  She is a determined little girl.LOL
 
Ranjie are great as ever and with DB with them - they cannot be beat in their efforts to get the couple together.
 
They all wants what's best for Nidhi.  Ashutosh has just come int the picture.  Uske saath
bond hone mein thoda waqt lagega.  But Ashutosh will manage to bring all of them around.Wink


Their plan worked - very nicely written  love scenes

Thank you Ji.  I am so glad you liked it.Embarrassed
 
And the wish - I don't think Nidhi would have a problem in complying with it but not before Ashu gets an earful of how he should not commit to Khushi's wishes blindly. Maybe the little sibling is already WIP.

Yes, earful to milega hi...and for the complying bit, Well lets see
yeh toh waqt hi bqtqyega.Wink
 
Waiting for the next update in this FF but know that it is now last in the pile again.
Clap Thank you once again - I know that you & your son were sick.

Yes, it is at the bottom of the pile.  But I will try and update a bit more frequently so hopefully it wont take so long.Embarrassed

You are most welcome.  
And I appreciate your concern. 
We are both fine now.Big smile

Thank you for your comments Deepa.
I really appreciate it... These kind of reviews make
 me feel so nice.

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Posted: 26 January 2013 at 1:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Libra

Originally posted by sss97

Thumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs Up
it was an absolute out of the world chapter really very wonderful and also the worth the looong wait . Big smile

Hey.  Big smile
Thanks.  and you are very welcome.
I am so glad you liked it.  And I made the chap super long to make up for the delay
from my side.  
Sorry really really sorry that it took me so long to reply. I was caught in some personal stuff.
And finally,  mera Review.Big smile

to begin with the review 
loved the way Angi had handled Nidhi in their conversation before the marriage night that is by scolding n also understanding her POV  ( kuch khatti aur kuch meeti daant) n also making her raazi for wearing the shaadi ka jooda which she had designed for her five years ago.

I have always loved Anji and Nidhi's  friendship.   I wish that they  would show more interaction between them in the show.
And I wanted to add a bit of nostalgia to this wedding scene, with  the lehenga, and also the jewelry.  also the different feelings and reactions of the two main characters.Big smile


Then i also loved khushi n nishi conversations a lot as they were simply awesome. They are like the angels of this story.
n this dialogue stands out 
--Haan, par picture mein toh yeh bhi dikhate hain, ke Mamma aur Papa ek doosre ko Kissi aur Hugs bhi dete hain. Papa, kya aap aur Mamma bhi hugs aur Kissi karoge?
ohh these children are like devils for ashni.Wink

Yes, they are precious.  I wanted to make Khushi play a very important role here.
And I wanted to show the start of another friendship with these two little girls.  Basically their mother's childhood revisited.


and i  also liked the way rangu has become a support not only in nidhi's life but also in DB's life.

He is super cute.Big smile

I even liked the description of the mangalsutra n the engagement ring.

Thanks.Big smile

The way khushi mad ashni sleep in the same room intentionally or unintentionally was very nice.

She knows how to get what she wants.  Plus she knows that both Ashutosh and Nidhi love her very much.Wink

Later the holiday plan was great n the idea of a single bedroom stands out.

Ab kissi na kissi tarha, inn dono ko HM par toh bhejna tha...Hain na?Wink


The beach scene was well set n the longing of nidhi's for ashutosh was very well written.

Thanks. I tried to show that after five years of forced separation, their longing for each other had also increased.Wink

the hotel room scene was the ultimate it was actually like the finale. It was very well executed. And I also loved the conversation between ashu n nidhi where her answer for this dialogue was very apt and beautiful 
--Nidhi tumne mujhe maaf...

Thanks.  that was probably the hardest part of the whole chapter.Embarrassed

So i loved the update and also i am waiting for malika's entry n want to see the way ashu n nidhi tide over all the difficulties.

Haan Mallika ki entry toh honi hi hai.  Usske bina meri kahani poori kaise hogi.
Lekin she will not make an entry till may the end of the next update, or the beginning of the one after that. 
Big smile
so coming to the next update when is it coming eagerly waiting.

Writing it Ji.  Will let you know.Big smile

waiting for it eagerly waise which 1 r u gonna update
 n pl dont use JI pl u know i am much younger than u 

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Thank you so much the lovely lovely review, and your
wonderful comments.  It really makes my effort while when I get
such super feed backs.
Thank you so much.
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Posted: 26 January 2013 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
Nidhi's pain is depicted very well...how her dreams have come down crashing and she could not forget Ashu inspite of what happened and missed him and the pain that he dumped her.Unhappy
 
But Ashu's pain is more and why she is not realising...inspite of all that she had, he had the pain of dumping her and noone around, friends or Khushi or friends...Agree that most of it is due to his belief in Mallika.Unhappy
 
Anji tried to get that into Nidhi's head but she has suffered too much to forgive him and she lost the trust, it is difficult to re-build. But the point I have asked previously also...she thinks Ashu is marrying her for Khushi?Confused
 
So she wanted this marriage to be near Ashu?Blushing
 
House is up for sale? Good idea, one of the few things to get rid of to get back to normal life, Mallika yet to come..Are you saying Ashu is pennyless? I am imagining him asking money from Nidhi for spending..ROFL
 
I thought noone will be invited from hospital and the news will be hidden but Priyanka and Jyothika attended the wedding?
 
Nidhi also wants to be full fledged bride or she wouldnt have done all that makeup though Anji has put pressure..Embarrassed
 
Ashu's search for Nidhi and DB teasing and 2 little devils and their IQ and GK...Cool
 
The whole wedding ceremony is very senti...all the items carefully kept and used now...but how did he manage to do without Mallika's notice????D'oh
 
Sleeping on the same bed on the first day...this little devil has in built program...Nidhi already thinking of giving a try...Embarrassed
 
Khushi's request for song...she does not know others or she would have requested them also for AshNi...ROFL
 
Nidhi loves rain but scared of thunder? and the SR part was fabulous...Blushing
 
Ashu's phone conversation with Anji...not able to imagine Ashu on show doing it...Evil Smile
 
I expected the SR part in the end after all issues were sorted out and after Mallika's exit..
 
And the promise Khushi asked at the end..Cool
 
Thanks you for the update...we pestered you a lot for it...Clap
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 5:30pm | IP Logged
Once again, Anu, loved everything... from the caps to the last chapter I just read.  Sorry, for the late comments.  Have not been very active on the form.  Just catching up.  

Just re-read all the chapters, including chapter 7.  First of all, before commenting, had to cool down after reading chapter 7.  Way to go Anu...Wink

Chapter 7 - how sweet of Ashu to save the ring and the necklace.  And also for Dadi Bhua for saving the wedding dress and the jewelry.  Our little Khush... what a little devils Ashu and Nidhi have in their lives.  Khush for getting Ashu and Nidhi to sleep together.  Anji and Ranga, planning the entire vacation... up to sharing the room.. 

One more promise to Khush... is the baby on the way????  

This Time Forever is turning out to be forever.  Anu, you made my Sunday.  Waiting for next chapter.

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Posted: 29 January 2013 at 7:50pm | IP Logged
          Beautiful..! just beautiful update Anu...!!Thumbs Up Finally Nidhi accepted that she is incomplete without Ashutosh. Loved firstly  Khushi ..so innocently manipulative and  then Ranga-Anjii ...so deliberately manipulative to bring Ashni close.And such a sensuous update!!! but beautifully written of course. So heartiest congrats !!Clap
          And why will you end here ?? Abhi toh saath rahneki shuruaat hain yeh,its long way to go and prove that its 'this time for ever'...
          I am loving it Anu.This one is my favorite FF.
          Take care of your health first and then give us updates of your other FFs which also I love equally. Love you,God bless you.Anju. 

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