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Libra

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 8:08am | IP Logged

Originally posted by achiever

amazing chapter.. Clap

will need a second read to comment properly to cover everything in this looong chapter... Embarrassed

Thanx Manisha.

I will wait. Big smile

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 8:09am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Vidishaa

super liked it ji...

Ashu and Nidhi are finally one...but Mallika had warned him against marrying Nidhi na...kkya hoga? will the threat materialise or has she found her happiness elsewhere...

A little sis or bro...work is already in progress Wink

So happy you liked it Vidishaaji

I don't know abhi kya works mein hai.

Woh next chap mein Ashutosh aur Nidhi

mujhe bataayenge tab mainlikhungi. LOL

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 8:13am | IP Logged

Originally posted by turags

finally!!! Good to see Ashu put out of his misery!!! and in Goa..waah ji waah...

and looks like Khushi is on a roll...first dad and now baby brother or sis...cool kid...

nice chapter Anu... Clap

and looks like you are getting a good hang of writing "the" scenes... Wink

Hey Sujatha. Thanx.

Yep, Goa. I have never been, But was recently reading up on its history

and liked what I read. Maybe will go and visit when I go to India in june.

And as far as getting the "hang"of the scenes.

I don't know I have that down pat as yet, but I am trying.

and The intensity and passion was the needed in this for this reunion.

After 5 years of separation, and all the pain they went through

I had to try and portray the intensity also. Tongue

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 8:18am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Libra

HI EVERYONE

I HAVE GOTTEN A LOT OF PM'S REGARDING THIS CHAP.

JUST WANTED YOU ALL TO KNOW

THIS IS NOT THE LAST CHAPTER OF THIS FF

THE STORY HAS SOME MORE WAYS TO GO.

YES THEY HAVE RE UNITED, BUT THAT DOES OT MEAN THAT

EVERYTHING IS FINE. ABHI TOH THEY ARE ON HOLIDAY.

REAL TEST OF THEIR FAITH AND LOVE, AND ALSO REAL LIFE

WILL START WHEN THEY GET BACK HOME.

SO. YOU GUYS WILLBE HAVING MORE TO READ HERE BEFORE I AM DONE.

HOPE YOU WILL BEAR WITH ME.

AND IF YOU ALL WANT ME TO END THIS HERE PLEASE LET ME KNOW.

I AM OK WITH THAT TOO.

nooo.. obviously not! he he he..

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 8:21am | IP Logged

Originally posted by achiever

Originally posted by turags

finally!!! Good to see Ashu put out of his misery!!! and in Goa..waah ji waah...

and looks like Khushi is on a roll...first dad and now baby brother or sis...cool kid...

nice chapter Anu... Clap

and looks like you are getting a good hang of writing "the" scenes... Wink

lolz.. she puts it brilliantly.. differently yet brilliantly.. i like her style..its simple bt goes deep into psyche of characters.. and protrays things around thm and within thm so brilliantly...

u put it so differently... gives me feeling tht u feel a bit shy wen u write those scenes.. bt still.. i luv the way u protray those passionate moments..

and thn wen i read my scenes..

it gets me wondering..how many diffrnt ways dffrnt styles to put the same thing.. Embarrassed

Manisha

I really appreciate the awesome compliment

that you have given to my writing.

I meant a lot coming from you. Embarrassed

And yes you are right about me feeling shy. I do.

but This reunion required more on an OOmph factor.

I mean after all the pain and suffering and 5 year separation

the intensity of the passion was the need of the day in this chap.

But There is only so much I can write. So if you notice that while

my FFs do have intimate scenes, there is only One very hot scene per FF. Big smile

And I owe you a review. Will be writing it shortly, as soon as I finish here.

Edited by Libra - 23 January 2013 at 8:21am

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 8:27am | IP Logged

After so many posts of "I am waiting" - i was floored by the length of the update. Will give detailed review in a bit.

Edited by deepa17 - 23 January 2013 at 8:23am

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 8:32am | IP Logged

Oh atlast u posted it! Great one as always! How cute that khushi nd nishi is! Nd their continuous chattering is fun to read! I thought d seperation will b placed after their marrige also! Bt i was wrong nd i'm happy that i'm wrong! Khushi was able to make her parents close at last,haan! Great! Liked d rain part nd ashu's possisiveness...nd then d thunder make my day! Wah!wah!wah! What a chapter! Enjoyed fully! Pls nw start to write hhgak!pls..pls..pls! This time don't make us wait!! Love u...

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 8:33am | IP Logged

Originally posted by vidyasabde

omg ...that was a hot sizzling union ...awesome Ashni love ...concurring every obstacle...Khushi the angel here...is really very much lovable.

Anji ..Rangu...Nishi...Khushi...all with the help of destiny played their part very well. Circumstances , misdeeds , misunderstanding..nothing could stop the Ashni union

loved the chapter Anu. Clap

Thanx Vidya

I am glad that you liked the chap.

And I am glad that you liked rang anji and the kids role here.

You see a story is not all just the main characters

I feel that family and friends should have an important

role to play also. That is why I am stressing the role of the side characters.

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