Originally posted by cool_SK
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amaazing amazing chap...seriously...
so in luv with this Nidhi...the confident, matured and well established...
but still has the heart of gold...π€
ok...you must know what is my fav scene...yeah the KABIN ONE...
Loved the way you expressed Nidhi's emotions on seeing the two most imp people of her life sleeping so soundly with eachother...definately a moment to capture and she just did that when she came back from the car...
Ashu himself was stunned seeing Khushi n fell in luv with her...how cute n the drooling baby...
haha...she must be drooling on her to be father's looks...hahaπ
Nidhi handled the situation perfectly and was lost in the moment till ashutosh mentioned that he like to know more...that was a turn back but here...ASHU DESERVE THAT...πππ
Fabulous writing
Ranga surly need a lecture from Nidhi...but right now, i loved him here...
How thoughtful to leave khushi behind with ashu...GO GO RANGA...
Khushi had her mood swings and she want ashu to be with her...and Nidhi getting alert on that...
loved the casual moments u added like nidhi asking khushi how she will consume all that food she demanded, or how she installed her seater in ashu's car n explained him that she used to fumble up before but learnt it with time...a truly motherly gesture...
And on getting back home, Khushi put the cat out of the bag expalining ashu that she is not nidhi's biological daughter in her own sweet way...and ashu getting stunned though he had repare himself to meet her husband soon...
Man you should know this lil girl, is planning to make you thatπππ
The way Nidhi called anji n asking her to come over was a treat to read and i loved that part too...
Ashu caught ranga out n ask him to explain...n the much he explained added fuel to the fire...haha...
waise why ashu doubt that nidhi can be a good momπ‘...she is a fab one...
ashu kabhi tau trust her na...π
I LOVED RANGA N ANJI IN THIS WHOLE UPDATE MOREEE...
And now, ashu is left alone with Nidhi n taking care of khushi...lets c what they are gonna talk about...
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cont super soon janab...
loving this story sooo muchhh
hugsss
anaπ³π€
Ana, don't know what to say.π³
I am humbled by your review and your compliments.
Thank you for that...
I am glad you like the RanJi part. My favorite too. In this FF even though
AshNi are main characters, It the other people in their lives who will always be playing a bigger role.
I am so fed Up with AshNi always getting the bigger parts and the other characters being sidelined.
Yes My Khushi, is a real DOLL isn't she. My little baby always used to drool over her Daddy like that, and I thought it ws cutest thing in the world. So I had to put that in somewhere.
Ashutosh will find out what Khushi is planning in the next chap. But again
things are not that eaasy n life.π
Thanks Ana ur a Sweetheart
Love
Anu
Edited by Libra - 11 years ago