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Posted: 26 January 2013 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
Nahi karsakta... Subha padhai karni hoti hai.Ermm

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Okay.

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Posted: 12 February 2013 at 11:26am | IP Logged
AB just read d story 

sorry for a very late comment 

maaf kar de...Wink

now coming to story ...OMG kya part tha

Sweety ji in her hitler avatar

Ginny ko rooom mein lock kar diya

Ginnny disturbed

Ginny discussion wid rashi was awesum 

liked d way Ginny said no to Gautam in school n den sweety ji ki entry OMG dat was dramatic

i liked sweety ji n Gautam ki convo

n den last mein gautam explaining d truth 

n i liked d way u described d name of the story ...friendship , feeling n trouble...waah AB ...yeh interesting tha 

i think u shud write more 

BTW all d best for ur exams 

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Posted: 12 February 2013 at 11:34am | IP Logged
Jao, maaf kiya.LOL
Thanks for liking tani.Smile
Describing the name like that, came in my mind suddenly. So, whatever I had written, saara erase karke dobara woh explaination likhi.Tongue
And thanks for encouragment and for best wishes.Smile

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Posted: 12 February 2013 at 11:36am | IP Logged
@All,
Maine kaha tha nah... Gautam ka secret ke woh Ginny ke peechhe kyun pada hai will unfold later...
But, maine khud yeh nahi sochha tha ke woh last part main hoga.LOL

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 6:57am | IP Logged
Shwethaaa WHERE are youuu, i want you here right now.. ! ROFL hum dono ko mil ke Ahsaan ki bahat pitaai karni hai !! ROFL
Rocky gets slapped and 5 fingers get printed ?! ROFL and lucky dancing like MONKEY.. ?? ! ROFL ! ROFL
Saale, khud hero ban gaya... ! ROFL and rocky-lucky ko supporting character bana diya ! ! ROFL ... kya story thi bhai, i was only thinking during last 2/3 parts when will ginny also agree that she also loves him... (agar ginny agree kar leti na, toh teri khair nahi thi aaj ! ROFL ) ... but this is what i loved the most, ginny did not agree that she too loves him (you ! ROFL )... seriously bro, EXCELLENT STORY... I wonder why haven't you continued writing later... i loved writing style... it had a great story, fun, great one-liners, realistic feel and little much suspense too... just too good.. i did not know you actually write so well... fan bana diya tune mujhe aaj apna... too good... but so much less screen space for lucky-rocky ?? ! ROFL... lol.. this was really bad... where are you shwetha yaar... JAALDI AAO YAHA... ! ROFL aur EK stick le kar aana... bahat pitaai hogi aaj kisi ki ! ROFL

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 7:00am | IP Logged
Arey yeh kya hai?LOL

I have not read it yet PritamLOL
Will read and then bash AhsaanROFL

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 7:00am | IP Logged
WAH! Yaha toh sab writers hain LOL
The title is catchy, I'd read it soon Smile

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