SS:"Friendship,Feelings and TROUBLE"[pt8.pg#17] - Page 5

Posted: 11 years ago
Ok...
Friends...
Ready for the next part???
Posted: 11 years ago
READDYYY! 😛

Bring it ON! 🤣
Posted: 11 years ago
Ready Ready Ready ðŸ˜Š



HUmari Khidmat mein 5 part pesh kiya jaaye ðŸ˜†(Urdu fever is full on me..dese days )
Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry, Guys...
Due to some reasons... I cant update pt 5 now,😭
It surely will be updated tommorow...😊Edited by AhsaanBaig94 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
That's fine re!

Will wait for the next Part :)
Posted: 11 years ago
Part : 5

Just when, Ginny starts to fall, Gautam catches her...

Sweety sees that... Nd is shocked...
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For awhile everybody stunned...
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Ginny is unmovable... Sweety is speechless...

But, Finally Gautam leaves her, says sorry to Ginny and Sweety and leaves embarresly...

Sweety comes like an earthquake...

And asks "itni bari hogyee hai... Dekh kar nahi chal sakti"...

Ginny cant speak... She too is embarresed...

Sweety sees banana skin...

And then asks "yeh yaha kese aya?"...

Rocky Says sorry... MoM... And gets a hand by sweety...

Bammm..!!!(5 fingers Printed)

Sweety tell him to leave... And from now on... no friend of ur's will come to our house...

Ginny says "sorry Maa"...

Sweety tells "koi baat nahi beta... Ja apne kamre main ja"...


Next Day,

-At School:

Ginny comes to school, sees Gautam... Nd Gautam too sees her... And goes from there... Ginny is unable to understand what is the problem with that boy... She finally decides to say thank U to him... She goes to look for him... But, he hidding now, atlast Ginny calls him...

Gautam...!!!

He stops and turns towards her...

And again Says "sorry..."

But, Ginny says "Thanks..."

Gautam Thinks "Hain??... Kal tak to bhaag rahi thi aj achanak thanx..."

He says its ok and leaves...

Ginny smiles...


-At Ahluwalia's:

Nanu at home... Sweety is discussing the incident which happened yesterday... Ginny comes smiling... And hugs Nanu...

Nanu asks "Puttar tu theek toh hai...? Teri maa toh keh rahi thi k aj kall bujhi bujhi rehti hai..."

Ginny says " Nahi Nanu main theek hun... Maa aisay pareshan horahi hai..."

Nanu says to sweety... "Lo!! Yeh to theek hai... Ab toh khush hoja..."

Nanu goes...

Ginny asks for lunch...

And says "maa Hamare school main singing comp honey wala hai magar is baar Single nahi Duot hai... Kisi partner kay sath gana parrey ga..."

Sweety is happy that her daughter is happy... So she, allows her... To take part... Ignoring in the happiness that the partner will be a boy...


Next Day,

-At School:

Ginny Signs in, for comp... And knows after that her partner will be gautam...

She is shocked...

She asks for a change but, its not possible as, all teams have registered...

Teacher says, that as the time is less so, the practice will starts from today...

She goes in the Practice room,

Gautam is present there,

he asks Ginny " tum yaha??"...

She says main tumhari partner hun...

Gautam... Again "Hain???"😛

To be continued...


One Question: What do you think about Gautam. Good or Bad??

Note: Please Hit the "LIKE" button if you like. "COMMENT" to appreciate or to point out the mistakes. You are free to criticize.Edited by AhsaanBaig94 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing PART!

Woahh! I loved it yaar, Gautam and Ginny. This sounds amazing. Now Singing, arrey baap re. Sweety happily told her to participate, par uske baad kya? 😳

BUT, AMAZING Part!

What do you think about Gautam. Good or Bad??
- i personally feel Bad, because Sam had put him behind Ginny. But u never know, he can be good too. Sorry will tell! 😛

Waiting eagerly for the next part 😳
Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Amazing part Ahsaan 

So finally Rocky ko pada ðŸ˜†

Eager to know Sweety ji reaction , when she will realize Ginny n gautam are partners 

Now regarding d question :'Gautam is good or bad??'

Ans is : Still not sure , its just second part wid Gautam, and he is behaving very weirdly ,in  last part he smiled on luking at her. In this part , he s avoiding her. So still not sure about his motives.
Posted: 11 years ago
@Ridz-Tani,

Thnx for liking Guysss...😊...
Posted: 11 years ago
Want to know your opinion...

Guys,

Dont you all think that I'm dragging this story... Or its ok... Plzzz tell...

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