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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 10:26am | IP Logged
I wrote this OS for RaHi. But today I m not going to update "Can love happen twice?" because still I didn't write the next part. I hope I will write the next part soon. So here just a TaaRey version of my previous RaHi OS. Hope you guys will love it also. It's different. The creep Shivam is present here. But you can try it. It will not disappoint you guys.



~Broken Trust~


~Sometimes what you want isn't always what you get, but in the end what you get is so much better than what you had wanted~




"
I remember years ago
Someone told me I should take
 Caution when it comes to love
 I did, I did.."




"Shivam, Plz pick up the phone", She muttered.

Finally he received the call..

"Why couldn't you receive my call early?", She cried, "You know how important today is for us".

"I am busy yaar!! I am in a night club and can't leave now", he yelled right back.

"But", she whispered, "But before a year you proposed me this day!"

"So what? I don't care, okay?", he shouted. "I don't have time to remember all these stupid things".

"What happened to us?", she replied horrified.

"Nothing happened to us", just you started getting clingy, that's what happened!"




"And you were strong and I was not
My illusion, my mistake
 I was careless, I forgot
I did..."



***********************




"Shivam , today you have to come in my house. Today Mom's birthday", she said with a bright smile in he face.

"Sorry, I can't..I won't be able to go there", he said not even looking at her.

"But you promised me! It's Mom's birthday and she will look for you", she said with tears.

"Look Taani, I can't..I am sorry. Tell her that I love her".

"What is the use of words, if they were never proven", she thought dejectedly.



"And now when all is done
 There is nothing to say
You have gone and so effortlessly
 You have won
You can go ahead tell them
.."




**************************





"Can we go away for a while?", she asked, running her hand over his chest.

He hummed. '"Hmmm" before he went back to his phone.

"Shivam I feel we need this", she told again, cuddling into him.

"We will go another day..Now you should go home", he mumbled without looking her.



"Tell them all I know now
 Shout it from the roof tops
Write it on the sky line
 All we had is gone now..."



*****************************



"How could you do that?", she whispered, broken.

"What did you mean how could I do that? How could you?", he screamed.

"I am your girlfriend and you insulted me in front of others!", she cried.

"Taani, you slapped that girl, she just danced with me!! What did you expect me to do? hug you for it?", he asked sarcastically.




That is exactly what she had expected him to. She expected him to hug her, comfort her, tell her that everything will be all right.  Ya she slapped that girl, she expected her boyfriend to stand by her and fight for her, not with her.


How did they get here?


"Tell them I was happy
 And my heart is broken
All my scars are open
 Tell them what I hoped would be
 Impossible, impossible
 Impossible, impossible..."



*********************



Taani wanted to give him, them a final chance. No matter how much they had grown apart , she still rememberd their love. The smiles they shared, the kisses, the one-ness.



"She doesn't matter babe", he whispered into the phone.

Taani stopped in her tracks and listened with breath, hoping this was not true what she thought it was.

"Okay, I will see you tonight", he smiled, the smile he used to save for her.

She finally let herself feel the heart break. He did betray her, and she couldn't live in denial anymore.

She ran into the washroom of school and cried her heart out, finally letting it all out. Letting herself feel the loss.




"Falling out of love is hard
 Falling for betrayal is worst
Broken trust and broken hearts
 I know, I know..."



**************************



"I want break up", she said, looking straight at him , she didn't have anything ashamed of, he did.

"What?", he laughed. "Break up? Is it April fool today baby?" Shivam laughed.

"No, I am not fooling you. I want to end this relationship. I can't do this anymore", she shouted.

"What do you think you are doing? Have you lost it?"

"No, you did. You lost me, my love!!", she whispered furio
usly and walked away.



"Tell them all I know now
 Shout it from the roof tops
Write it on the sky line
 All we had is gone now..."



**********************


"Thank you for understanding me, thank you", she whispered with tears in his eyes."You don't know you supported me too much", she smiled.

"If that smile stays on your face, that is thanks enough", Rey smiled at her.

Suddenly,

"You..You bloody what you are doing with Taani? How dare you? Who gave you the right to take her with you?", Shivam shouted.

He was about to rise his hand when Taani caught it and yelled, "You did Shivam!! You gave him the right".

Shivam left the place with anger.

"I am so sorry Rey." Taani cried, "This is all my fault".

"No, it isn't Taani", Rey whispered, catching her chin, making her look at him, "But if you really do want to make it up to me, have dinner with me this Sunday?", he smiled.

She looked up into his eyes, astonished. After a minute she smiled a small, shy smile and nodded her head.



"Love is lovelier
The second time around
Just as wonderful
With both feet on the ground..
Love's more comfortable
The second time you fall.."



"Someone... someday will come along and make you finally realize why it never worked out with anyone else."



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How was it??? Good?? Bad?? Ya totally crap?? Let me know LOL. I am ready for Chappals and tomatoes from Taarey lovers. For pm plz send me buddy req, it will help me.Now plz like and comment, your one comment is very precious for me!!  Enjoy.
Thanks_Misti

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 10:42am | IP Logged
OMG FIRST TO COMMENT!!! Dancing

honestly i loved this os! it was amazing! you showed a reality of relationships in it, esp since alot of girls do go through a shivam in their life (not me personally but my friends have)

the song - impossible I LOVE THAT SONG SO MUCH! 

loved how rey was comforting taani in the end and loved how u made it diff from d3

basically in general i loved loved loved this os Clap

thanks for such an amazing os Embarrassed


Edited by desigirlx5 - 06 October 2012 at 10:43am

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Okay when I started reading I was like SHIVAM :O Dead But as the story progressed I really liked it :D Loved that Rey was their to protect her and save her from Shivam :'D Do pm me :)

P.s I love the song 'Impossible' <3 and it fits perfectly with the situation :D

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 10:48am | IP Logged
res


I have so many res on so many os..

Il unres each and evry res it tonight only

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 10:48am | IP Logged
love the os...though its different from the d3 story...but its really sweet...

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 10:52am | IP Logged
omg chappalsShocked...no no dear hum itne bhi bure nahi haiWink especially coz it's all together a very different story anyways i really really liked it Clap love really deserves a second chance ...and the best part was this which really touched my heart coz this is totally applicable to taarey's story
 
"Love is lovelier
The second time around
Just as wonderful
With both feet on the ground..
Love's more comfortable
The second time you fall.."



"Someone... someday will come along and make you finally realize why it never worked out with anyone else."



Edited by pixi26angel - 06 October 2012 at 10:53am

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 11:03am | IP Logged
Ok to be honest when I first started to read the OS  I was like what the hell shivam Angrybut as I read more into it I love it LOL Shivam will always be a jerk ROFL and he dont  deserve our Taani. I so wish Rey give him a beating at the end. It was amazing. Only Rey can make her happy. Taarey forever

Edited by Natasha. - 06 October 2012 at 11:09am

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 11:57am | IP Logged
chappal to abhi nahi de saktiLOLu try hard next time to get one LOL
u started all along with shivam and i was like i'm going i won't read it completelyWackostill i continued reading and it was getting betterBig smileand nice song in btw.when it came to the last it really ended wellApprove.so no chappals this time as it is a good os.so better luck next time,chappal ke liyeWink

thanks a lot for the os

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