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Destiny[FF]: Part 11 updated pg 27 (Page 21)

sheema_rajoo IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 3:27am | IP Logged
gosh...you nearly gave me a heart attack...I nearly cursed you...lol..
Please do update soon.. I'm eagerly waiting for the next part..  

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IsYaRoCHeR IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 December 2012 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Don't dare to stop! TongueTongue Please update soon! Want my hero entry to save his heroin! Big smile

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keerthus.9 Senior Member

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Posted: 20 January 2013 at 5:13am | IP Logged
You scared me , stopping the story at this point of it,when i am so worried for her
truly a bad joke,
update soon

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Kesha_H. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 January 2013 at 6:19am | IP Logged
I wuz hereTongue

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KS1000 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 January 2013 at 7:58am | IP Logged
wow damn interesting story dearClapClapClap
actually i'm new to this tread but i found this is so interestingEmbarrassed
and please don't ever think to stop writing Embarrassed
i really like this storyBig smile
and please continue soon dearEmbarrassed
and once you update please pm me tooEmbarrassed

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bhuvana90 Senior Member

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Posted: 12 February 2013 at 8:22am | IP Logged

Part 10:

Yash sat quiet in deep thoughts. Suddenly he heard somebody calling him and turned a nurse holding a prescription in her hands. She handed it to him and asked him to get them fast. He nodded and moved. He brought the medicines and gave them to her, and turned towards the ICU. She is sleeping but restless. He could sense the pain on her face. Her face bruised eyes sored, her left cheek had a small cut, her forehead and chin bared bandages, her elbow too...her foot, her legs..every part of hers' is hurt, and heart the most.

He then thoughts of calling her parents & informing them, but no, he didn't, he didn't dare to.!

He slowly got back to his seat and slowly recollected what happened that day.

He is driving home after talking to smriti and dialed to Aarti's number as a habit. When this time he heard a 'Hello', he stopped his car suddenly and answered back. "Aartiji", but he recognized it is not she!" Ji, I'm anitha, Aarti is not here, I've dropped her at hostel afternoon, but as I returned back I didn't find her, and the things in her room were all disordered and I've just complained to the warden". Yash was still he tried real hard to concentrate on what he is hearing, but he couldn't. the only thing crossing his mind is a rough image of Aarti running followed by some boys, which he assumed to be his dream. "No!" saying which he drove back.

He reached the place and searched for the place she could hide or could be hidden probably. He found a godown at the cellar of a shopping complex, Yash slowly moved inside without even sound of his steps. "mujhe chuna math.." is what he heard in Aarti's voice. She was frightening Dheeraj with a pen knife., but she fell down. Dheeraj tried to touch her, when he felt a thud on his head and before he could turn back completely he fell down with pain. He witnessed yash's stunts and fight with his friends but couldn't move. Finally yash defeated all of them and left from there taking Aarti into his arms.

"Mr. Yash" doctor Nawaz called his name for the second time, when Yash got back to the present.

"Mr. Yash, are you alright?"...

"yes doctor, any improvement in Aartiji's condition?"

"not yet, mr. yash, she is in a shock still, I think..."

"you are about to say something?"

" hmm..come with me..".. saying which he moved towards Aarti's room, followed by Yash.

Aarti is sleeping peacefully on her bed, while the nurse is arranging for her medicines. Doctor reached Aarti and is about to touch her hand to check the pulse, when Aarti suddenly reflexed herself away from the doctor. Yash was shocked to see her reaction, she is furious, and tensed. He could find pain and fear in her eyes. She moved away again when Yash tried to catch her. Yash couldn't digest it that the confident girl whom he met the first time, is the same girl who is afraid of a touch by somebody now.. he couldn't help but think

"Kaise ladki hain Aap  Aartiji?"... with tears in his dark eyes.

Edited by bhuvana90 - 09 December 2013 at 10:08am

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bhuvana90 Senior Member

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Posted: 12 February 2013 at 8:25am | IP Logged
sorry for the delay friendsOuch, got into job...
 schedule got too hectic...Cryso... 
but i'll try to get this updated regularlySmile...
thankyou for the response... sorry that i couldn't send Pm's to anybody...Ouch... feeling sleepy...Sleepy
good night friends.

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pvejani IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 February 2013 at 8:43am | IP Logged
after long time.Tongue
wow...nice update dear..loved itClap.
thanx for updateBig smile.waiting for next part.

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