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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 3:21am | IP Logged
Mere _Khwaabon_Mein_Jo_ Aaye


Far from Mumbai..St.Louis clg students are enjoying, spending time with each other, far from parents, far from busy mumbai and their hectic life. Five days for camp was indeed a best idea to calm down..Obviously these five days are giving them energy, strength to fight back with all bad things.



''Taani tell na!What would you like in your perfect Prince charming'' Neha said with a smile.



''Rich!With a huge big bunglow ", Priya, one of their friend shouted.

 



''A sexy stubble for me!''said another girl.



''Taani tell na!What would you like?' Neha asked her again.



Taani closed her eyes and whispered..



''Someone who will make me believe that all those fairytales I had read when I was five, did have some amount of truth in them-however cheesy and mushy.

Someone who would know what I want even without my speaking.

Someone who could make me smile despite everything.

Someone who would stay with me through hard times and good.

Someone who would love me despite knowing the crazy person I actual am"



 

''And?" Neha dreamily said.



''And...someone who would dance with me in pouring rain,

He doesn't need to be either tall,rich or muscular-but someone who gives me so much love that I would wonder if it's all a dream''



Rey unknowingly had been gazing at her as she spoke,the blush giving a soft tinge to her angular face.


Suddenly..



Mere Khwaabon Mein Jo Aaye,
Aake Mujhe Chhed Jaaye
Mere Khwaabon Mein Jo Aaye,
Aake Mujhe Chhed Jaaye 
Use Kahon Kabhi Saamne To Aaye 


He who comes into my dreams to tease me

Tell him to come around some time (in the daylight).

He who comes into my dreams to tease me

 Tell him to come around some time (in the daylight)


Neha turned around in pure shock and saw her best friend singing-after days in front a crowd.



Kaisa Hai Kaun Hai Woh Jaane Kahan Hai 
Jiske Liye Mere Hoton Pe haan Hai 



 What's he like?  Who is he?  God knows where he is,

that man for whom my lips say "yes!



He decided to leave the place and disappear when Taani saw him staring at her smile from the doorway.For absolutely no reason at all she blushed.


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It had been ages since she had last trashed her umbrella and just walked out into the rain.Her feet joyfully kicked off the slippers she had been wearing and ran forward on the wet grass. And indeed,the joy of dancing in rain is something which one cannot describe but only experience.


Water droplets snaked down her neck and her back soaking her T-shirt.Her legs which were bare from the knees kicked about the grass,sending droplets racing ahead to nowhere in particular. She stretched out both her hands,her wet hair now swishing to either side.



Rey stood on the porch watching her and surprisingly enough he didn't even feel as if he was invading her privacy.   



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He breathed in the scent of her damp hair,his fingers feeling her skin through the drenched fabric of her T-shirt.



 

Taani suddenly stiffened,realising the vulnerability of the moment she was caught in.She hadn't wanted to but she couldn't help shedding her facades in front of him.It was almost as if she knew she wouldn't be able to lie in front of this man.He would see right through it.

 

She suddenly pulled back from his arms and went a few paces back.He stared at her in confusion,his arms still in mid air -surrounding the vaccum she had just created.



''Taani...''he worded softly.

 

 

She turned around with her back to him.

 



Just leave.She told herself,her eyes squeezed shut.The moment her leg extended to take a step,his hand slipped through hers and gently but firmly pulled her back.She took deep breaths,inhaling all the oxygen she could find.Her eyelids refused to open up and though she could easily have pushed him off,she didn't.

 

 

His eyes surveyed the water drops adorning her milky face,moving down the smooth skin of her cheeks to the crevices of her slender neck.He couldn't help but notice the few glistening drops on her quivering lips as they let out warm breaths into the chilly air.A strand of hair tickled her forehead and his fingers gently moved on instinct to tuck it back.

 

 

She shivered at his touch,her face slightly tilting until his fingers lingered on her cold cheek.She could feel his hold on her wrist,gentle but strong enough to hold her close.

 

 

He suddenly left hold of her wrist,she opened her eyes on that indication.His melting orbs bore into her own eyes ,the strength of his gaze making her quiver with anticipation.Her eyes looked sideways at his left hand placed next to her cheek and then his right hand made their way to her other cheek too.

 

 

His hands cupped her face tenderly,so tenderly that one could almost believe that she was made of pure untainted glass.His thumb brushed on the skin next to her lips.



His lips touched her own wet ones,sending currents down her weakened legs.



Taani's first real kiss wasn't even close to what she had seen in movies.



It was way better.


His nose touched her's,a blush creeping up her face.He tasted the cherry flavoured lip balm ,their breath sucked out for those sixty long seconds.



                                                 Jadoo Se Jaise Koi Chalne Laga Hai 

                                      Main Kya Karun Dil Machalne Laga Hai

                                           Tera Deewana Kehata Hai Woh

                                     Chup Chup Se Phir Kyon Rahta Hai Woh



He's started to work on me like some enchantment.

What shall I do?  My heart's become restless (with longing).

I'm (the cause of) your madness, he says

Why does he then stay hidden from me?

 


the day you will be full I will be too.And sure enough Rey had found that person who completed him.



There is one moment in your life when you are with someone and you feel like the world has stopped and your life seems perfect, make sure you never lose that person.



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I know it's long... Just wanted to write something. The song is my fav. Hope you guys will love it.





Edited by Sweet-bird - 06 October 2012 at 3:43am

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 3:32am | IP Logged
Brilliant writingClap! BTW what is your name? You must write more oftenSmile

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 3:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by NikitaLuvsTaRey

Brilliant writingClap! BTW what is your name? You must write more oftenSmile


Hey, I am MistiEmbarrassed

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 3:39am | IP Logged
very nice os drClap.sorry forgot ur nameUnhappy
thanks a lot for this osHug
u wrote really well Smile
and ya nice song,and it's not that longLOLi love to read long osBig smile
thanks  a lotHug

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 3:43am | IP Logged
omg thnk u so much fr wonderful os
missing tarey badly...

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 5:31am | IP Logged
your name is misthi...your writing is also very misti...i hope you know bengali...do write more...and pm me...

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 5:49am | IP Logged
Misti this was amazing your writing style is incredible. I love how u describe perfectly Taarey emotions and the way the feel about each other. I love it
PS plz write more awesome OS like this one

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 5:58am | IP Logged
its beautiful...

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