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SS~Sweet Poison~(AARYA)(UPDATING(TEASER-PG11))

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 2:22am | IP Logged
hey buddies, its "ANGELWORDS'
i like PV ...
so here is a small piece of work from my side...



                           ~
Sweet Poison~


"arti ji please stop.."
"why yash ji, why you want me to stop...isn't it enough what you have already done..."
"arti ji please don't say this..look i am really sorry.."
"your sorry will have no effect on me now yash ji...because of old arti is dead"
"arti ji i know i was wrong..but please try to understand me..."
"i am sorry yashi ji..i have made my decision..i am leaving.."
"no arti ji you can't leave palak and payal and our family...and and me..."
"yash ji please don't make it difficult for me..."
"please arti, don't take such a decision.."
"ok yash ji, i will change my decision if you sign these paper.."
"which paper.."
"without asking what this it.."
"but...ok i will..."

yash take the paper and sign it...tears were flowing from arti's eye
"i am sorry yash ji...i trapped you, but i don't have choice.."
and took her bag and ansh to the room..
totally ignoring yash..
who was totally confused with the event...
...

hope you like this
do comment and hit like button
waiting for your response..
hope you like it??
...





INDEX

PART1-PG1

 PART2-PG6



Edited by angelwords - 13 December 2012 at 10:19pm

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 2:46am | IP Logged
Ur work reminded me of Yash's anger scene where all fans were left to guess what happened between arya. Same is he case here. Hope u will update soon.

nicely written. hoping to see some more posts from you

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 2:54am | IP Logged
wish it was longer!!! Awesome work...

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 3:05am | IP Logged
wow nice prologue 
cont soon 
and dont frgt to pm me

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 3:08am | IP Logged
nice prologue, pls update soon. can u pls PM me?

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 3:13am | IP Logged
Nice start ,cont soon

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 3:24am | IP Logged

PART-1

"HAIN bauji, arti ji yahin hain.."

"hain thiek hain.." yash talked on the phone

he moved towards him room and saw arti busy seeing out of the window

he came near arti

"arti ji, past mein jo bhi hua..."

"i have to go yash ji, i have to see if ansh has set all the things.."

ignoring yash...

yash was shocked with such cold behavior of arti...

"why is arti ji behaving like this.."

arti came out of the room and leaned on the wall

" i am sorry yash ji, i Know you are hurt with my behaviour...but i have to do it..."

she moved towards ansh room

"mamma, i ma set everything.."

"arre vah, my ansh is very good boy.."

and kissed his forehead...

yash came out of the room, arti saw him coming

"mamma please tell me a story.."

"ansh you are  big boy now, learn to be like that...do you get it.." shouted arti..

yash was shocked with the anger of arti, arti never scolded children, than why sudden

"mamma, i am katti, i am going to papa..he is good, you are bad.."

and ran to yash and hugged him

"papa dekh nah mamma ko..." and cried

yash wiped his tears...

arti was crying...

"i am sorry ansh, apni mamma ko kaaf kar digiya ga..plzz..."

...

hope you like it

do comment and tell me your views...

 



Edited by angelwords - 06 October 2012 at 3:34am

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