ARIYAFF:Unconditional Love Part 10 Pg15 31/3 (Page 11)

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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Hermione1234

Back with another update. Hope you like it and thanks for your wonderful comments.


"Rathore sir? It's me, Shree."

"What is it Shree? Where are you? You went to Riya's house hours ago. Did you find anything?", asked Rathore.

He was sitting on a chair in front of the ICU. While replying to Shree Rathore moved towards Arjun, who was standing beside the glass doors. He put the phone on speaker mode so that Arjun can hear the news.

"Well, sir..."

"What is it Shree?"

"You should see this house, sir. It looks like a museum. All the walls are occupied by photos of Rahul. He seems to be a football player. There are photos of him running in sports, playing basketball, eating icecream. It is as if Riya had been living in memories. Whoever this Rahul Varma is, he is the most luckiest guy in the world."

"Enough, Shree." interrupted Rathore, giving a glace to Arjun. He was standing next to him stunned. "We will talk about it later, after you come back. Tell me. What did you and Chottu find?"

Suddenly Chottu's voice came over the phone. "She doesn't seem to have any relations. Her diary says that on finding out about her 'said' role in the dissappearence of a boy they dissowned her. They allowed her to stay on with them till she turned 18. And then she has to leave. So we think ..."

"Alright Chottu. Come back quickly.", cutting the call in haste he turned towards Arjun. He placed a hand on Arjun's shoulder. He was about to talk, when,

"The patient is out of danger. We are changing her to the ward. One of you should come in and sign these papers.", a nurse called out and went back in.

"Go to the ward Raute. I will sign the papers and come. I will also go and wait for Chottu and Shree", saying this Rathore left.

"The room number is 301.", the nurse called out.

"301", repeating this Arjun walked to the room. 

An Hour Later

"So Arjun sir and Rahul Varma are the same!" 

Chottu and Shree  cried out in unison. They were walking along the parking lot of the hospital.

"Yes", replied Rathore, shaking his head at their disbelief.

ROOM 301


Riya was stirring awake from her painful slumber. Hearing her voice Arjun rushed towards the bed. He had been standing near the window for about 1 hour. He clasped his hands around her.

It was as if Riya suddenly felt at peace. She stopped writhing in her bed and slowly opened her eyes.She could not discern at first the image in front of her. By each passing second Arjun's image began to become mor eclear. At last after minutes of painful struggle she held her eyes open. In front of her was the image that she had dreamed of always. But in her pain, she failed to see him clearly. She did not his eyes filled with love. Love, only for her.

"Arjun sir"

Arjun was shocked. He had thought that the first name that would come to her lips would be Rahul. But now. 


His words got stuck in his throat when he realised the reason for her reaction. She still believed everything that he had told her before she fainted. Suddenly, witha heart so full of sorrow, but with a smile on her face, he said:

"I open my eyes to look upon thee,
 You, the rising sun, and me?
 The withered moon, so weak,
 Your light making me look divine"

Riya slowly raised her eyes looking at him in disbelief. These were the lines that she had written at school. Lines that, she once said to him, conveyed how she saw herself and him.

She suddenly realised it. The man sitting in front of her was not Arjun. He was Rahul. No, she corrected herself. My Rahul. 

A longing to be in his arms suddenly filled her. As if he could read her mind, he tenderly held her. Before she knew it she was in heaven, his arms. The only thing that both of them could feel was the warmth of the other. They felt bliss.


I am not going to end this FF. There are more updates coming up. 
Hope you liked it. Please continue leaving your valuable comments.

awesomeee update . continue soon

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-Beth- Senior Member

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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 12:49am | IP Logged
Hey, guys.
I am going to change the name Rahul to Aditya. There is no particular reason. It is just it that feels more comfortable. Anyways, the name will only be occuring once or twice. Arjun should be the dominating one, right?

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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 2:31am | IP Logged
Hey I just read it
It's awesome continue soon and pm me if u can

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_mahi_ IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 3:14am | IP Logged
hey hun.. i just read your ffSmile.. it is a beautiful story dearEmbarrassed
it was so emotional and when riya confronted arjun for hiding his identity and arjun's reaction, it touched my heart..Heart
this story is so unique.. ihave never read anything like this beforeClap
but who would use aditya's picture after the robberyErmm
so excited to read the next updatesBig smile
continue soon dear..

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Posted: 23 October 2012 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
I am back.PartyI  just escaped from a bundle of assignments. Hope you like this. And thank you for those wonderful comments.


3 days later...

"How are you feeling, Ms.Riya?"

"Fine doctor", replied Riya sleepily to the smiling doctor. 

"Had a good sleep?", continued the doctor jotting down in a notepad.

"Had a really good one, doctor.", said Riya, pushing herself up into a sitting position.

"How can that not have happened? Especially when she has has been sleeping for the past 3 days in the hands of...", Shree murmured to Chottu who was chuckling to himself.


Shree turned around to see Rathore who was gesturing him to stop. Even Rathore had a slight smile on his face. "Sorry sir!", said Shree and Chottu in unison.

"All right then Riya. Take care. We will discharge you by the tomorrow morning."

"Thank you doctor", said Riya followed by Rathore, Shree and Chottu.

7 pm

"You know what Shree? We should get going." mentioned Rathore.

As if they had been waiting for this moment Shree and Chottu rushed out. Rathore shook his head at their childishness, ruffled Riya's hair and followed them. Riya watched them leave and then laid her head back and closed her eyes, suddenly pulled back into torrents of memories.

She had always wished that she would get her old Arjun back. But now it had become real. Whenever she thought about him a warm, fuzzy feeling filled her. She could still feel his hands wrapped around her at night. His warm hands acted the way no other medicines could.

"Thinking about me?"

Riya's eyes shot open to collide with the two black orbs. In an instant she could feel herself slipping away. The sparkle in his eyes and his cologne were driving her senses insane. 


Riya snapped out of it and began concentrating on his whole person, though that was not helping either. Everything about him was...heaven.

Meanwhile Arjun was having fun looking at her uneasiness. He knew what was coming next, and was ready for it.

"Why should I think about you?", asked Riya. The quivering in her voice was clearly detectable and Arjun smirked at it. He had always thought of her as a strong person.He had loved her for her personality. But now lying on the hospital bed, he saw a new Riya. A riya who was ready to submit herself to him the moment he wanted her to. A riya who loved to be the prey and him the predator. And tonight that was exactly what he was going to do.

"Maybe because that is the only thing that you are going to think about the whole night?"

Riya's eyes shot up and she gasped suddenly. He was staring at her in a way he had never done before. Something told her what he was panning now.

"Wh...What?", stuttered Riya.

"You have any idea about the advantages of being a VIP in this hospital. There are no other rooms on the same floor. The patient lies on a king size bed instead of the hospital one, big enough to accompany 2. And... If we put a do not disturb sign on the rooms door, not even a doctor would enter. Something that I did before coming inside tonight." Arjun was chattering on while caressing Riya's face.

"Why...Why did you that?", Riya had already started shivering. Something that had nothing to do with the AC.


Arjun scooped down capturing her lips in his. Though Riya had been anticipating this for weeks she felt her heart going overdrive. Arjun continued biting her lower lip to gain entrance. She snaked her hand up and cluched his shirt along with opening her lips for him. As the kiss became more and more passionate Riya could feel her senses leaving her. She forgot the world around her. The only thing she could feel was his lips on hers and his hand around her waist.

They suddenly broke apart for air. Before Riya could steady her heart, she felt Arjun's kiss on her neck. Cluching the sheet on which she lay, she closed her eyes, giving herself up to him.


How was it? The next part is entirely dependent on your comments. If you want I will continue from exactly where I stopped. Other wise, the next part will begin with the case.

Do not forget to leave your comments.

Love ya all.

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Big smileawsomeee yaar

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 12:11am | IP Logged
so so so hot ...

i just can't believe romance in hospital...aur wo bhi VIP room mein..

ye to anokha hi arjun ka style hai...arjun you are so naughty ...

even i also feel in pool of shame awesome update dear...u really make me to laugh laud and try to hid my red cheeks

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Wow what a gud part!!! Luv it... Continue it soon...

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