Fan Fiction: Heaven on Earth

I was thinking about writing a fan fiction for SSLK, and this idea suddenly came to my mind. I know it's supernatural and completely different from what is shown in the show, it will have a lot of connection to the events in the show.

Tell me if you guys like it or not. If you do, only then I will write more. Please tell me soon, because I want to finish this before Thursday...

Heaven on Earth

Characters: The superpowers of the characters are listed in the parenthesis

The Deceivers

Gunjan (copy another person's powers)

Rachna (control someone's mind)

Chaya (transform into an animal)

Mintu (Memory Eraser) * Leader / Main Antagonist

The Killers

Mayank (control nature)

Rajiv (go to the past for 5 mins)

Aarav  (tracking someone)

Charu (super intelligence) *Leader / Main Antagonist

Story:

"The perfect couple; Mintu and Charu" As Mintu starts to train his group The Deceivers, the words of his friends bounces his mind about how he and Charu are sole mates.  He realizes that when you are young, you think everything is possible, but time teaches how things never turn out as you expect them to. The circumstances have dragged him to a point where his love of life Charu is his biggest enemy and he can do anything to defeat her. He still can't decide if he did the right thing to love her, but he is sure hating her is the finest thing he has done in his life. To completely destroy Charu, he has created The Deceiver which consists of Gunjan, Rachna, and Chaya, and they are his weapons to fight with Charu's group The Killers. None of the deceivers know the real reason to why they are fighting against The Killers. Mintu has erased all of their memory, and they believe he is their owner for whom they can even die. None of them know the people they want to kill are the ones they will fall in love with.