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hi all...i am Rimjhim(rimss)...i just love ariya and i keep

thinking abt them all the tymEmbarrassedso i am planning to
start writing an FF...this is my first time so please forgive me if i make any
mistake


and do tell me if i ever go wrong or do anything which is not
right! and please feel free to advise me!


<in my FF there will be lots of Ariya but aftr few chapters...almost
all the characters are the same as in the show..the name of my FF is "sunshine at midnight" which symbolizes how our ETF team acts like 'sunshine' for those who are under tough conditions or dark situations like the midnight and also how 'riya' is going to be the sunshine for arjun who is living in darkness after his wife's death...here is the introductory
chapter no1


Sunshine At Midnight


Chapter#1


(in the ETF office room. Rathore is explaining something to the team but only Arjun
is paying attention to him, rest all are busy talking about something else.)

Rathore- toh! tum log samjh gayekya karna hai?</font>

Arjun-haan.

Rathore-I said 'Tum sab' (stressing on the word 'sab')


(arjun and rathore looked at shree,riya and chotu who all were in no mood to respond)

Rathore-mai kuch pooch raha hoon..!

(still no response)

Arjun- tum log thodi der ke liye apni bakwaas band nahi karr sakte???


(that was loud enough for the three to shut their mouths and listen to what rathore was saying)


shree+riya+chotu(together)-sorry sir...!

rathore(looking at arjun)- thnks arjun...now listen all of you.</font>

(all pay attention to him)


rathore-hum log jiss serial killer ke peeche itne dino se bhaag rahe hain, vo meri nazar me science ka koi bohot bada genius lagta hai..


Riya-yes sir, mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai, uske killing weapons and techniques, sab kaafi hi-tech hote hain.


Arjun-riya sahi keh rahi hai, yaha tak ki uss killer ne toughest security systems ko break karke logo ko maara hai and then vaha se bhaag nikalne me bhi successful
raha hai...


Chotu-but sir, last time uske bag se ek laptop gir gaya tha, jo humaare paas hai.</font>

rathore-haan, uska laptop kaafi useful ho sakta hai uske plans janne me...(looks at shree) shree? tumne kuch kiya laptop ka?</font>

Shree-sir koi success nahi ho paayi hai, iss laptop ko operate karna mere liye
possible hi nahi hai, pata nahi Mr killer ne isme kaisa software daala hai...!</font>


Riya-agar killer itna bada science freak hai, toh iss duniya me aur bhi toh aiseinsaan honge jo usi ke jaise science freak hain! shaayad koi aisa hi humaarihelp karr sake jo bilkul aise hi complicated softwares se deal karta ho...</font>

Rathore-haan riya, you are right and I think mai ek ladki ko jaanta hoon jo humaari bohot acche se help karegi...lekin...use manaana thoda mushkil hai...</font>


Shree-LADKI? please sir, agar mai ye software handle nahi karr sakta, toh koi LADKI
kaise karegi?</font>

Rathore-vo karr legi...mai abhi jaake use yaha bula leta hoon.</font>

(rathore went out of the room to call that girl)</font>

(in the room)


Shree-yaar...ye rathore sir ek ladki ko kyu beech me laa rahe hain?

Arjun- shree...mujhe kisi ne kaha tha...(giving a side look to riya)...ki 'aurat ki kabiliyat parr kabhi shak nahi karna chahiye'

(a sweet smile crept on riya's faceEmbarrassedand she looked at arjun who smiled backSmile)

(shree and chotu exhchange their usual looks at this act of ariya)

(rathore comes inside)</font>


Rathore- vo bass 10 minutes me yaha pahuch jaayegi, tab tak mujhe arjun ke saath ek bohot important document ready karna hai'.plzz koi hum dono ko disturb matt karna.

Riya-sir, hum log bahar jaake ek coffee pee ke ate hain

Rathore-theek hai, jab Samaara aa jaye toh usse kehna vo wait kare, jab document ready ho jaayega tabhi use andar aane dena, vo iss team ki member nahi hai.


Shree- uss ladki ka naam 'samaara' hai?


Rathore-haan

(shreeshrugs and moves out with riya and chotu, they take a cup of coffee and chat while having it. Suddenly they see a girl coming in, she is wearing casual top
and shorts with shoes. Her hairs are nearly open and her locks are flying all over her smooth face, she has a very girly look and she is about 20 in age. Shree's eyes are glued to her while she is walking
towards him with her cell phone in one hand a hand bag in the other...)</font>


Chotu-ye galti se kahi fashion show ki jagah ETF ke office toh nahi chali aayi?


Riya-chup raho chotu, kitni cute dikh rahi hai! hai na shree?


(riya tucks shree teasingly as she knows that he is lost in the girl's innocence)


(the girls comes to him)</font>


Girl-I want to meet Mr.Sameer Rathore'.

(her voice was sweet and pleasant but her tone was a bit arrogant)</font>

Shree-tum samaara ho?</font>

Girl-yes, my name is samaara'.</font>


Shree-tum yahi wait karo, sir abhi busy hain'</font>


Samaara- kya? Wait? Main?</font>

(it seemed that she wanted to say many things but she curbed her tongue and quietly
went and sat on a bench to wait)</font>

(shree riya and chotu went inside the room)</font>


Riya-sir' vo bahar..</font>


Shree-riyaaa'!!!! Sir ne kaha na ki bakwaas baato ke liye unhe disturb matt karna'..</font>


(rathore and arjun are not paying attention, they are busy)</font>


Riya-but shree, samaara bahar wait karr rahi hai'.</font>


Shree-karne do, use bhi toh pata chale, ki vo ETF ke chief se milne aayi hai, wait toh karna hi padega'..let her learn a lesson, spoilt brat lagti hai vo mujhe.</font>


Riya-(teasingly) haan, tumne 2 minute me use itne acche se ghooor liya ki tumhe sab samajh aa hi gaya hoga!</font>


Shree-chup raho ri'aisa kuch nahi hai!</font>

(few minutes pass)</font>

(all
of a sudden the door of the room opens far apart and samaara enters like a gale, red with anger.)</font>


(she goes to rathore and hits the desk with her hand. Rathore is shocked)</font>


Rathore-samaara? Tum iss tarah kyu ghus gayi?</font>


Samaara-(in angerAngry)- aap jaante hain'.mai pichle half-an-hour se wait karr rahi hoon'mai'..samaara''.wait karrr rahi hoon, just imagine!!!!! </font>


Rathore-tum'.vo'..</font>


Samaara-aap mere saath accha nahi karr rahe hain mujhe wait karake, mai aap sab ko nai
chodungi''</font>


Shree-theek se baat karo, tum iss vakt ETF ke chief se baat karr rahi ho!</font>


Samaara(looking at rathoreAngry)-
honge aap ETF ke chief, but aap jaante hain mere bhaiya kaun hai??''agar maine apne bhaiya se bata diya ki aap logo ne mujhe wait karaaya hai, toh vo aap sab ka vo haal karenge ki aap soch bhi nahi sakte!</font>

(all are quiet but there is soft smile on arjun's faceSmile)</font>


Samaara-mai bahar jaa rahi hoon, and agar mujhe poore izzat se andar nahi bulaaya toh
mujhe apne bhaiya ko bataana padega!</font>


(samaara
moves out)</font>


(all of them look at each other)


Riya-sir, ye kaun thi?Shocked

Shree-haan sir, iska bhai koi gunda mavaali hai kya?</font>

Chotu-sir, iski dhamkiyon se toh mai bhi darr gaya. Aakhir iska bhai hai kaun?</font>

Shree-haan'kaun hai ye ladki? Kiski behen hai?</font>

Rathore-iss ladki ka naam hai Samaara Rathore, aur ye meri behen hai, mai hoon iska
bhai!</font>


(all are stunnedShocked Shockedwhile arjun gigglesLOL. This was the first time anyone saw him
giggling. Riya was lost for few seconds in the sweetness of his twinkling eyes)</font>


Shree-sir'yaani ye abhi-abhi aapki hi baat karr rahi thi?</font>


Rahore-haan shree. Vo meri hi baat karr rahi
thi'.</font>


Riya-wow! Aap ko hi aap ki hi dhamki de rahi thi? Gr8!!</font>

Rathore-mai use bula ke laata hoon, varna naraaz ho jaayegi'!</font>


(rathore goes and brings samaara to the room)</font>

Rathore-team.isse milo, samaara, meri behen'</font>

Samara-hi all'sorry for whatever I said just now'.mai gusse me thi'

(her way of speaking was so sweet that everyone felt a strong affection for her)

Riya-hi samaara'.i am riya'

Shree-I am shree'

Chotu-mai chotu'.

Samaara-hi riya mam, Mr.shree and chotu ji'..

(samaara looks at arjun who was smiling. Samaara's face lightened, she ran straight towards arjun and hugged him)</font>


Arjun-kaisi ho?


Samaara-theek'.and aap bhi yaha ho? Wow! Meri toh nikal padi sir'.

Shree(to riya)- ye dono ek doosre ko kaise jaante hain?


Riya-I guess rathore sir ne hi milvaaya hoga samaara ko arjun sir se'


Arjun-main tumhe poore 5 saal baad dekh raha
hoon'.


Samaara-mai toh rooz aapke hi baare me sochti hoon sir, aap duniya ke sabse good looking detective ho!LOL'.(laughs)


(arjun smilesSmile)

shree-(to riya)- kuch toh gadbad hai, 5 saal pehle arjun sir samaara se kyu mile honge?

riya- leave it shree...!


Rathore-accha abb jaldi se iss laptop ka software detect karke use operate karo..


Samaara-ok bhaiya..i mean..sir...

(she takes the laptop and does something and a screen opens which asks for a code)


Samara-code chahiye'

Shree-maine kaha tha tumse nahi hoga!

(samaara gives a 'i-will-see-to-it' look to shree and again gets engrossed in her work)

Samaara-code break karna hoga, I will do that, usme thoda tym lagega'..but


Rathore-but kya?

Samaara-you will have to promise me ki aap mujhe ETF ka member banaoge'


Shree-kya?? Are you mad''tum uss layak nahi ho!

Samaara-you are no1 to decide!

athore- sam, tum jaanti ho ki ETF ka memeber banna koi bachho ka khel nahi hai..

samaara- i know, but aap try karoge toh ye possible hai...and i want to be a member!!! thats it.!

rathore- ohk! i will try, mai commissioner sir se baat karoonga...

samara- mai karr chuki hoon, unhone mujhe ETF me appoint bhi karr diya hai...Big smile

rathore- what???

samara- yes...unhone kaha ETF ko meri zaroorat baar-baar ho sakti hai so...

rathore- lekin ye khatarnaak hai sam..

samara- trust me bhaiya...

shree- sir, ye theek nahi, iss ladki ko toh goons se fight karna bhi nahi aata hoga!

samaara-(going close to shree)- mujhe kya aata hai,aur kya nahi aata, vo toh time hi bataayega! samjhe Mr shree?

shree-get lost!

samaara- you get lost!

arjun- tum dono baccho ki tarah matt lado!...and samaara, tum apna kaam karo...

samaara-ok sir...

now all are busy doing their work)

(arjun goes to riya who was sitting alone)

arjun- riya...

(riya looks at him, she feels a cold shiver go through her body)

riya- yes sir?

arjun- mujhe tumhaari help chahiye...

riya- jee sir boliye.

arjun- tum samaara se thodi jaan-pehchaan badhao, mujhe uspar shak ho raha hai..

riya(thinking)- arjun sir bhi na, bechaari itni cute si ladki pe shak karr rahe hain...

arjun- use itni aasaani se ETF me entry nahi mil sakti, kuch toh baat hai...

riya- ok sir...mai aapka kaam karr doongi...

samaara(who was sitting at the desk shouts loudly)- HO GAYA!!! code break ho gaya..! now we can see all details...sab aa jao yaha jaldi..

(arjun and riya looks at samaara)

arjun- vaise ye ladki hai toh kaam ki.

riya- sahi kaha sir...she is very talented.

arjun- just like you riya(with a faint smileSmile)

(riya blushesEmbarrassed)

PRECAP- arjunapologizing to riya for scolding her very badly, he wipes out riya's tears.

that's it...please comment and tell me how was it...i know there was very less Ariya but I promise next tym there will be more...feel free to give any type of comment...and again i want to remind you all that this is my first time so please forgive my mistakes...if u hv any doubts, plzz ask.Embarrassed

INDEX

Ch-1   Pg1

Ch-2   Pg2

Ch-3   Pg5

Ch-4  Pg6

Ch-5  Pg8

Ch-6 Pg12

Ch-7 Pg15

Ch-8 Pg18

Ch-9 Pg-20

Ch-10 Pg-23

Ch-11 Pg-25

Ch-12 pg-28

Ch-13 pg-31

Ch-14 Pg-34

Ch-15 Pg-36

Ch-16 Pg-40/43

Ch-17

part-1 pg 66/67





Edited by rimss19 - 27 October 2012 at 11:57pm

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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 6:28am | IP Logged
Finaly finaly nd finaly...i get a ray of hope for shree's romance...thnx dear
Loved d part
Precap sounds aheem..wow
Plz update soon
Nd plz pm me...m adding u as buddy :)

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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 6:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetdoc

Finaly finaly nd finaly...i get a ray of hope for shree's romance...thnx dear
Loved d part
Precap sounds aheem..wow
Plz update soon
Nd plz pm me...m adding u as buddy :)
thnks fr ur lovely reply Big smile and there will surely be lots of shree-samara romance along with ariya!

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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 6:40am | IP Logged
wow

hmmm i like ki arjun riya pe puri tarha se trust karata hai


but the main part which i like it Shree and sameera's fight

now we have one more love story

that is great ff ...good concept dear


keep it up all will like it...i'm sure




fight between Shree And Sameera




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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 6:46am | IP Logged
great start...
I loved that girl Samaara a lot..
Z way she threatened everyone including her brotherLOL
N the was she went and hugged Arjun, n told him he's the most good looking detective, (which i also agreeEmbarrassed)
but y does Arjun doubts her????
N by the way ARIYA scenes were simple but very sweetWink
N yeh kya kar diya??? Arjun scolding our Riya, but y??
Please update soon dearThumbs Up

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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 6:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by haruhi26

great start...
I loved that girl Samaara a lot..
Z way she threatened everyone including her brotherLOL
N the was she went and hugged Arjun, n told him he's the most good looking detective, (which i also agreeEmbarrassed)
but y does Arjun doubts her????
N by the way ARIYA scenes were simple but very sweetWink
N yeh kya kar diya??? Arjun scolding our Riya, but y??
Please update soon dearThumbs Up
thnks...i hv written this FF spcly fr samaara bcoz when her character came into my mind i thought she would be the best to play shree's love interest and rathore's sister...and whatever questions u hv will be cleared in the next part Big smile

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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 7:14am | IP Logged
Wow...what a cute concept...i loved it..
samaara is luking interesting..Wink
but plss more ariya scenes...Tongue
plzz do PM me wen u update..

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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 7:44am | IP Logged
wow..what an FF!!!!was lost in it...
please PM me too..
would be waiting for the precap Smile

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