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Jeevika leaves the house, Viren tries to find her (Page 3)

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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 3:36pm | IP Logged
wow thanks for the feedback guys. I will be putting part 2 today and will PM 

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good writing but i fear that she may be doing more than just leaving the house because she keeps saying death, after im gone.. i fear that she may hurt herself?
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on my god what have you done?  dont stop hurry up and start writing girlie
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plz continue...
it is really interesting!!!!
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Please continue soon and please PM me
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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
PART 2


Viren just kept on driving,  every second he would keep trying to ring her mobile but then just slammed it on the chair frustrated.

Kahaan ho tum Jeevika?!!! He thought..

Meanwhile Jeevika stepped out the Taxi, giving the fare and taking her one bag. As she stepped out she was near that exact temple where Viren had taken her, the one near the lake. She smiled remembering the moment they shared as he first introduced her to his favourite place which made her feel a part of it too. It was still dark and she could see the lake glisten with the moon looking beautiful and the temple was shining as if God had brought her there.  She walked up near the lake and just sat down broken, crying at what she had left behind and still trying to reason with herself
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Nahin, Manu teekh rahegi mere bina.. aur viren?...  She paused her thought and closed her eyes as her tears rolled down and touched her wedding ring on her left hand. She looked back at the lake and touched the water, she could see her reflection. She closed her eyes and as she opened it she could see Viren standing next to her.  She suddenly looked back but he wasn't there, it was just her imagination.  She then stood up and looked at her reflection in the lake as it glistened..  She remembers the flashbacks, losing her baby.. Swamini.. Manvi.. and Viren..

I .. I love you Virenji.. She said emotionally closing her eyes..

As she was about the slip through someone grabbed her arm and pulled her back...

I love you too!!.. He said hustingly with authority as she buried her head in his chest and opened her eyes slowly looking at him. It was Viren.. He held her arm tightly with intent in his eyes. She stared into his eyes in shock and a silent relief that she couldn't say...

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OMG sarah...again it was an awesome update... loved the part where viren holds J... do continue dear...
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Awww <3 Loved the last para the most

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