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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 11:17pm | IP Logged
hayyyeee cant waiiittt for  the story to continue !!!!!!!!!!!Big smileBig smileBig smile
but im a lil confuesed isnt uday in usa so did he end up in london ? or did i not read it wright ??Confused

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Gr8 start 
i love it very much 
do pm me if possible 

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wow lovely yar...
hey i've sent u request to add you in my buddy list even i write ff i wuld love to read yours...
plz accept it and ya if u send pm's plz send me too...

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Ok guys before starting chapter1 I want to make something clear. In the prolouge the uday with that girl incident was in USA and uday's meeting with manyata was in London. There was two days gap between both the incidents. The second thing is Manyata wears short dresses. I thought a lot and finally made this decision. Sorry for the late update but pehle school tha... I mean main baki sab members ki tarah badi nahi hun I am just 13 and when I wrote the whole chapter it got deleted. Now read and enjoy.

Manyata was wearing this:
         CHAPTER-1
 
Manyata comes out of the washroom and suddenly a strong arm pulls her towards a room with no one around.
 
Manyata- Leave me u jerk... leave me... how dare you touch me... chodo mughe... (and how can we forget manyata's speciality) halkat wede khasmanukhane... teri himmat kaise hui mughe chune ki... haan nahi toh
 
Uday- Shh... (puts his finger on her lips making her quite) kitna bolti ho tum... tumhe pata hain mere samne hote hue koi bhi ladki itna nahi bol pati (we all know what is he trying to say) (meanwhile moving her fingers on her face and caressing her lips)
 
Manyata's eyes got widened
 
Uday- Vaise manna padega london mein reh kar bhi apna indian touch nahi bhuli... halkat and all haan (holding her from her waist and caressing it too)
 
Suddenly they hear jai calling out her name. Taking advantage of the situation manyata stamps on uday's foot
 
While walking manyata says
 
Manyata- Kabhi bhi kisi ladki se flirt karne se pehle ye dekhle na ki usne heels pehni hain ya nahi "MR. ATTITUDE"
 
Outside Jai was looking for manyata
 
Jai- Jiji aap kaha thi... hum kabse aapka wait kar rahe hain
 
Manyata- Kahi nahi... Vijay bhai kaha hain... papa ka bahut bari phone aa chuka hain
 
Vijay- Hamari manyata bhai hume yaad kare aur hum na pahuche aisa ho sakta hain kya...
 
Jai- Aap pe woh proverb sabse best hain 'Think of the devil and devil is here' hain na jiji
 
Manyata was busy with her thoughts regarding the scenario which took place between her and Uday. J shook her and she came back to her senses
 
Jai- Kaha kho gayi aap jiji
 
Manyata- Kuch nahi j... bahut der ho rahi hain lets go
 
They all reach home. In the hall brij and giri were sitting and talking. Manyata comes and sits beside Giri.
 
Manyata- hey bf... kaise ho
 
Giri- Hum theek hain gf par aap bataiye aap kaha thi humse baat hi nahi ki
 
Manyata- Ab kya karu college mein aapse zyada handsome ladke hain na isliye.
 
Giri- Acha ab hum chalte hain..
 
Manyata- Kyun... Mera matlab itni jaldi
 
Brij- Aap logo ki baate khatam ho gayi ho toh humse bhi koi mil le
 
Manyata hugs him and says
 
Manyata- Sorry papa... Par uncle aap bataye aap itni jaldi kyun jaa rahe hain aur unnati kaha hain
 
Giri- Beta unnati ghar par hain... uday aaye hain isliye shaam ko party rakhi hain... aur woh usi ki tayari kar rahi hain... aap sabko party se pehle aana hain hume aapko uday se milwana hain.
 
Manyata- Kya uday aaya hain aur kisi ne mughe bataya nahi aaj toh dekhna unnati aur uday ki kaise band bajati hun unnati bada meri best friend banti firti hain ab batati hun aur woh uday bachpan mein toh sara din mere peche hi ghumta firta tha... aur aap chinta mat kijiye hum pahoch jayenge.
 
Giri leaves.
 
Brij- Manyata beta apke liye raj ka phone hua tha.
 
Vijay- Acha mamu sa apne bata diya warna aaj to rja bhai ki kher nahi thi.
 
Manyata- Main dada ko phone karke aati hun.
 
Precap- Manyata and Raj's bro-sis talk
               Manyata knowing about Uday
 
So that was chapter 1 guys. Hope you liked it. Pls.do comment. Now I am giving you options about Raj's character pls do tell me. The one who gets maximum votes will be Raj. (I can be bias)
 
Barun Sobti
Karan Kundra
Karan Wahi
Karan Singh Grover
Karanveer Bohra
Sudeep Sahir
 
There is one more thing I wanted pls. mention your age in your comments I want to know who are elder and younger than me. And pls. tell me who among you all love Shahrukh Khan or are fans of him. One more thing I want to tell you sometimes this ff will become SRK or SRK- Kajol obssessed as i am head over heals in love with SRK and love their jodi too. So pls. don't mind.

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Awomeee...start dear...hailaa manyata ne uday ko aaj tak dekha nahi...waiting for thei meeting...
KSG...after all koi takkar ka hona chahiye...update sooon...

Edited by swetsurati - 24 October 2012 at 5:09am

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
Nice update dear
continue soon

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 1:37am | IP Logged
it o loved it nd im 22  ... i think u shuld open this link see fr it urself ...

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its Ian Somerhalder ... "
he shuld be fit fr the role of raj ..   as u aske fr our suggetionds .. so plz plzz pzz zplzz plzz continue soon .. :):):)

Edited by vrinda.diva - 25 October 2012 at 1:38am

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nice start..nd i am 19 nd KSG..do cont

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